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Posted: 12 years ago
OhMyGosh!
This was soo freaking hilarious! 🤣
I Love this!!
The whole update...i can't describe it, It's brilliant!

The reason of Manvi's behaviour...it's so sad! xD

Loving this Manvi's attitude!
Excited to meet for VirMan's next meeting!

Brilliant song choice as always! Can't Be Tamed-suits perfectly! :D

P.S: Really sorry for late reply! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE COMMENTS AND FOR LIKING IT.
SCROLL DOWN FOR THE UPDATE.
DINA_VIRMAN
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OMG YOU updated!!! :P :P
Ok so I could least bother about the romance in the story! This is so freaking HILARIOUS!!!!! Hahahaha ur Updates always chage my mood! ROFLLL I love Manvi n Virat!!
This line totally cracked me up!!! "I'm Manvi, I'll do what I desire which is exact opposite of what they want me to do" LMAOOO haha I saw it in ur signature. hahaha
Loveeedd the updates they are fabulous! THANK YOU!!!Truly it takes talent to write such stuff man! Aww thanks girl! Update soon! (Even though I knw am not getting another update until 2 weeks :P ) hahah you know me well ;)

oh n worry the comment got posted twice :P lol i'd rather have more than less ;)

SHRUTI13
hey nisha awesome update... THANKS!! i love manvi's attitude...😃 virman r partners fr a project waitng fr da next update... continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

SYED695
First Unexpected...Awesome Update,...THANKS!! ⭐️! Loved Maanvi's attitude towards life...N Maanvi's convo with Virat was very nice...he was first surprised a nerdy like her is also cool but then offended by her personal remarks...she knew she is wrong cannt judge by knowing only 1 side of the story(but i like her)...n the best art work done on Maanvi n her mom catching it...happened with me once LOL😆but at the same time she has been alone all this time...u write the dialogues and their thoughts nicley...VirMan together for Presentation...great... 👍🏼 Keep writing...We love ur stories..glad you liked it!!! :).Thanks for the PM Nisha.. and Happy Valentines Day~~!thanks and same to you!

ILUVEHMMBH
OMG you know this character of Manvi's is so similar to one of my friends in the sense the way she behaves and the reason behind it too! So I'd say you have done an outstanding job in protraying the emotions and lines. THANK YOU!! really appreciate it! It's beyond amazing! Thanks for the pm, hope to get another soon as manvi and virat need to work hand in hand for their project! I get a feeling that virat has something cooking in his mind otherwise why would he call manvi after the behavior with him the previous night? Hmm you'll see more of them working together in the next update. :)

AENNA
Fab update THANKS hope dey become frendzzz
update asap

JS1234
oh Nisha what do i say about your work. I think i should just copy and paste all the comments you get! HAHAHA don't violate copyright. HAHAHHA
awesome, awesome THANK YOU THANK YOU!! - as ever - love Manvi and Virat - such freshness- reminds me of earlier episodes!

MADHUCHOWDHARY
Hey missing pie...hiya;) u updated. yes i did ;).i m not surprised to see ur pm..really?^_^.cuz i was expecting it...lol. some connection we have there ;)..I've used all the words to say how excellent u r(i guess) hahaha let me try and rememeber ;)...now i need to take some short term coaching classes to comment on ur stories. HAHAHAHH..it was so fresh and hilarious.thank you!!!!..manvi's character is new and interesting...i m not interested in romance...at least for now...i so loved it...next update will have more fun i guess...virman meeting hai na...yayyy...this song is my favourite one...thanks for the pm and take care..you too hun take care.

since i dont have anyone special to give me chocolates and roses, i ll buy myself...lol.hey that is a good idea!..happy valentines day to u too..thanks!!!.dont u want PL virat? do i want virat? or do you want virat? sadly we both can't have him lol ;)

awesome(this is my one word comment, ignore the rest).nope never ignoring your comment or your words :P..

SRESTHA90
yaar how do u manage to write with complete humor..?? frm nd start to end im laughing like mad...HAHAH glad you liked it. nd at the end i felt my cheeks paining due to continuous laughing... manvi nd her attitude is soo gud to read...

Kiekeboe
Mr Casanova ... 🤣 to funny

I am glad to understand more of Maanvi situation so much hurt boiled up turned in anger,
would love to see what her next plan is. you will see virat's side now ;)

DAYDREAMER9
WOOO...oowww!!!!!so much catching up to do.i just started getting regular to IF so this your first writing i came across.i have done reading the updates of this fiction till date.you write with attitude!!!!awesome girl.👏 thank you!!! i'm glad you liked it. and welcome to IFthe p.s.'s you have given are hilarious.i couldn't agree with you more.Vday is indeed so overrated. oh thank god someone else thinks the same. phew! hey can i hv pm from nxt time u update?? if you are in my buddy list i will pm you. send me a request if you haven't? loved your writing style.bless you. thank you!

Sweetzo.Tuhi-
OMG !! This ff is freaking awesome !!THANK YOU! I read al the parts in one go nd they are brilliant !! Dude i love the way you've written manvi's character. Everything about this story is just perfect !! Loved it !! Do continue nisha...its great !!😃👏

MEERA.CHAUDHURI
ey Nisha fabulous update 👏👏👏..Thank you sweetheart! Manvi is very different in this story and Im loving her more and more with every update.. Her attitude towards life is very interesting.. Loved Virman convo part.. Virat was clearly offended by her personal remarks.. Loved Manvi and her mom's reactions after watching the 'classy handiwork' on her shoulder 😆😆.. It was hilarious..hahah i'm glad you enjoyed it like i enjoyed reading your comment! really appreciate you taking time out to comment on all of my works! Manvi's thoughts on her parents are very well portrayed 👏👏.. So Virman are going to work together for their english presentation.. Sounds great.. The song is perfect for Manvi.. comments on the song always makes me happy :D Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm and Happy Valentines day to you also.thanks hun. Take care Nisha you too meera, take care!

SHIVRAJPUT52
Exactly Valentine day is over rated drfr m not wishing u happy valentine... 😉 boy i love you for this. lol.
And I hateee red coz of dis valentine.. man all shops, malls nd market r flooded with red colour..hahah tell me about it.. Eww.. damn annoying...!! hell yeah!

Update was fab and keep writing..thanks! I must accept dat m somewhat like Manvi. And I love banging door on my sis nd mothrs face nd regret later..lol hahah yea i do that all the time but i never regret it lol

Virman meet in next update.. Wohooo.. Cant wait.. Continue soon...!!!

PARUVIRMAN
uvd the update...❤️ awesome.. THANKS!
luv virman...it was hilarious..
her attitude towards lyf..
such a bindas attitude...
"i will do wat i desire"..i too think lyk dat wen i gt pissed off with my mom's never ending lecture..
looks like this is the story of every teenager lol bt vil cntrl my anger..otherwise she will kick me out from home... haha you better then. lol
so..virman together for project presentation..will be more fun...looking forward to the nxt update..
thanks for the pm...luv the update..

PRINCESSSHELEN
Great update THANKS!
Mr casanova...LOL
It is hilarious...
I loved it...
U r an awesome writer thanks again girl!
U always leave me speechless...
The way u described everything was superb...
Will b waiting fr the next update
Thnks fr the pm

KANWAL_CHOHAN
You know i really love seeing your pms cause
I know you have update and then i regret opening
The pm cause you leave me speechless every single for a second there you scared me lol
Time it was amazing loving manvis character
Would say her behaviour wad acceptable with
Her parents and omg loved her outburst on
Virat got a feeling is virat has something cooking
Up in his mind I mean why would he call manvi
Finally virat and manvi starting the project hoping
To get some good nok jhoks was an awesome update
Thanks for the pm continue soon and do pm me and thanks to you for the lovely comment!!!

KULSUM_VISH
nice update ... Thanks!
poor manvi feel pity on her ...
thanx alott for the pm :)

GEMINIMANNA
Hey Nisha hey
It was superbly a wesome👏. thank you! The way you are setting up your story is out standing. I am loving it and no need to bother about romance at this stage as it will kill the essence of story. thank god you feel the same way. i was worried if i was just dragging it you know.
The way Virat questioned Manvi's presence at the party and Manvi's outburst was hilarious 😆. I was like 🤣. Thanx for updating and PM.

YAMINNTHIDA
... 👏
Loving this maanvi alot... 😊 ...and drunk manvi was superb.. 😉 ...
Lol..virat...he was hell shock with the manvi outburst to him...
Poor manvi ..i can understand why she is doing against her parents...
Loved the way story is going..continue soon if possible..
Thank u so much for the pm.. 😊
THANK YOU! and welcome ;)

DEEPIKA03
oh thank you so much girl for updating this one!!! you are most welcome! i've been missing it like crazy :) love da never say die attitude of manvi...plz update asap 😊 happy Valentine's day to u too n yeah me too agree with you totally for im single too 😉
hahah thanks! yup single chicks rock. *wink wink*

MISSMYSTIC
Yay!! An update!! Yay! a comment! ;)
Omg! This chapter was hilarious! hahah thanks I just love how you portray manvis character which is so carefree, she cracks me up every time i read her dialogues... Loved virat aswell, the two are just adorable!!! Thanx for the pm and great update as always :D

KRAZYFRU786
Unexpected but Awesome Update!!! hehe thanks!
Loved Maanvi's attitude towards life!!
Maanvi's convo with Virat was hilarious!!!
the dialogues and their thoughts were written superbly!!! thanks again ;)
love ur stories!!!
Thanks for the PM Nisha!!!
Happy Valentines Day!! hey thanks and same to you

JAZZY.MALHOTRA
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Nisha wat do I say abt u... I luv all of ur works nd plsss don't discontinue any of em coz I luv em all. haha thanks. i will try my best to update.
U want comments I ll spam it w comments. lol
I ve sent u sooo many pms pls reply to any 1 of em. Pm me wen u update any of ur works pls. just send me a buddy request. yes i saw your pm. don't bugDINA_VIRMAN a lot on fb. lol. poor soul.
I m a huge fan of ur work. aww thanks!

SHONA_VIRMAN
I'm in luv wid Manvi's character in this story yaar... hehehe Jst luv her attitude towards everythng. Sure she is being rude to her parents bt then she is not so wrong on her part. She jst wants to make them feel the way they made her feel... Not right bt justified...true!! good perspective you got there. Poor virat got insulted by a junior Tch Tch Tch 😆hahaha quite shameful for him ;) hmmm i'm w8ing for the next part to see how do they deal wid each other. Now that she is grounded only his company wid the assignment excuse can help her out of the house. bang on. I liked der convo or the fight over the phone lol... And and and 🤣 the tattoo 🤣 how creative Nisha.lol would you think less of me if i said it has happened to me before LOL.. Thanx for the pm and continue wen u hav tym 😃

NANDITAM 2107
Awesome update!! thanks! Liked Manvi's character alot!! Yeah she was rude to her mom but she got all these years from her parents was also wrong...so being rude was kinda obvious...but i liked it alot!!! hehe glad you liked it. Aahh!! Was waiting for the update like hell!! Thanks for updating...great work done!!😊 keep it up and do update soon 😊

SHABSEM
Superb update. .Thanks! virman convo at party was nice. .mrng aftr party was horrible...a really bad day for manvi...thanks 4 pm. .

HANGOK
oww, i have a feeling now this would be more fun to read😃, Hahha hope i can keep up ;)
i felt sad for manvi, 😔
cant wait for their presentation,

thanks for pm

PREETIPC
Sorry ,Very late. No worries, better late than never? ;)
Loved Manvi's attitude towards Mr.casanova in the party and her words to Virat.Love the way u bring out her thoughts and the next morning drama in her home and the reason of her the way she is yay! so happy you liked it and didn't think it was over the top.lol. .Love her more with every update.Loved her conversations with Virat on the phone. Waiting to find out What Virat is planning her by calling her out in the sake of presentation.Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply no need to be sorry. infact thank you for taking out the time to reply.

FOREVER_YOUNG
OhMyGosh!
This was soo freaking hilarious! 🤣 hahahaha
I Love this!! and i love your comment ;)
The whole update...i can't describe it, It's brilliant! thanks thanks and thanks tonsss

The reason of Manvi's behaviour...it's so sad! xD

Loving this Manvi's attitude!
Excited to meet for VirMan's next meeting! will continue the meeting in the next update.

Brilliant song choice as always! Can't Be Tamed-suits perfectly! :D thanks again!

P.S: Really sorry for late reply! 😳 no worries. im happy you commented :D

PART 6

Recap: Manvi organises a party at her place. Her mom finds out and she gets in trouble.

You should have seen my mom's face when I told her I need to leave the house. To tell you the truth I live to see these expressions of shock on her face.

Before letting me speak she started with her usual tirade. Looking towards my dad she complained, "Do you see this? How irresponsible can she be? Instead of repenting she is all set to go out with her friends again."

Like usual dad was busy typing up patient history or whatever it is that he does on that laptop of his. Lets save him the trouble from having to miss his darling work to answer mom. "Lady stop blaming me without hearing me out."

"I'm your mom. Talk to me with respect." Wow she can never stop, can she?

"Whatever. I have to work on a presentation for English. If you don't want me to go and fail then fine by me." I'm not disrespectful, I just like to live life on my terms. I swear when anyone tries to impose something on me it automatically triggers me and I end up doing the exact opposite of what they want. Unfortunately for my mom, she is a complete control freak and tries to control everything. This always works against her. If she'd calmly handle the situation then I wouldn't be so rude to her but she can't make me call her mom. From today onwards I'm calling her lady and everytime she opposes, its going to get worse.

*Yawn* family drama seriously bores me. I was about to go back to my room when 'lady' stopped me.

"Fine go do your presentation. I'll drop you and then I'll pick you up." Hitler(mom) ordered.

In the car I tried to listen to some music but she turned off the radio. Whats up with her man? Why is she hell bent on getting on my bad side? I'm not going to ruin my day arguing with her. I took out my iPod and put my headphones on. She glared at me and then continued to drive.

"So you don't have to work today that's why you decided to be my driver?" I questioned.

"If you don't know how to talk with respect you are not getting any answers from me."

"Fine by me. But when you ask me anything don't expect me to reply either."

I was in for another lecture but luckily we reached my school. "I'll pick you up at 5 pm sharp." Hitler ordered.

"Awww I love you too." I said sarcastically and slammed the door shut.

There leaning on his car was Mr. Casanova. UGHHH. I put on my shades and walked towards him.

"Was that your babysitter?" Asked Casanova.

I swear if he doesn't lose his smirk he is going to lose a tooth for sure. I looked around him and asked, "Where are your ermm friends? You look different today." Pretending to think I continued, "It is probably because this is the first time I'm seeing you without any girl stuck to your body."

He gave me a fake smile at my snide comment, "You want to stand here and discuss about my friends or you want to work on the stupid presentation?"

Placing my finger on my chin I answered, "What should I choose worse or worst? I'll go with worse, lets work on the presentation."

He let that comment slide and walked behind me towards the library.

On the way we met Jeevs. "Manvi? I can't believe your mom let you leave the house. After last night didn't she ground you for the next century?"

This girl has a great timing. Why the hell did she have to blurt the story of my life in front of Casanova. Now Casanova will annoy the hell out of me with this topic. Screw you Jeevs.

Like I'd expected Casanova laughed heartily and inserted his 'expert' and unwanted comment, "So I was right. You are being babysat. Should I call your mom and tell her you are still in the school premises and to not worry about you?"

Yeah right. "You want to call my mom? Go ahead. No go ahead, call her." I dialed my mom's number and like I'd expected her secretary answered the call. "Hey Stacy this is Manvi. Your boss's daughter. You know sometimes I wonder if I am her daughter or yours. I mean I talk to you more than her anyway. Infact you come to my school to collect my performance report or for parents teacher conference. Right?" Oh shit. In my anger I just showed the idiot a side of me only Jeevs knew. Dammit Manvi.

I quickly hung up the phone and walked ahead of him. "Jeevs I'll talk to you later. Don't stop by my house otherwise hitler will kill you."

Virat's side of the story

After what happened at the party last night I don't want to even see her face. She is such a brat. Manvi you will have to pay for this. I mean common what have I ever done to that girl to earn those insults she threw at me? Sure I fool around with girls but so do other guys so why does she call me a Casanova? True I get a lot of attention from the girls. To tell you the truth I never enjoyed it but sooner or later you learn to live with it. I believe in making the best of what you have. If girls want to throw themselves at me then it is not my problem. But who is going to explain all this to the psychotic cribber.

No Virat you are not calling her. She knows we have a presentation due soon she will call you. Anyway girls are usually more responsible I'm sure she will call you. Girls, right. But Manvi isn't any other girl. Her party last night showed how much responsible she is and she never acts like a normal girl anyway. If I want to graduate on time and not be held back due to one stupid presentation I need to call her. Arghhh I hate this girl.

"Virat baba sir and madam are calling you." Chaiji came to call me.

I'm not in the mood but let me give you a short introduction of my family or whatever it is. The lady that came to call me, grandpa sent her from India to look after me. Don't ask me how she got her visa, grandpa is a big lawyer in India so I guess he managed something. But I call her chaiji, she worked for grandpa before and now she works for us here. She is basically like a mother to me; she brought me up. What were my real parents doing? Divorcing each other and building a new family I guess. Long story short, mom and dad got divorced because dad fell for another woman during his trip to the U.S.

Dad got my custody so I moved to California with him and mom stayed in India with dad's family and my elder brother Viren. As a kid I visited India over every summer. As soon as I turned 16 though I put my foot down and refused to go to India. I'm not going to go someplace where I'm unwanted and lonely. Sure mom says that she loves me and bhai equally but please I'm not some uneducated fool. If she loved me she'd fight for me and not leave me here with step mom and dad. Whatever I don't care anymore. The only person I'm close to from my family is bhai and he is the only one that understands me. Bua and dadaji (my dad's sister and my grandfather) think I'm way too Americanized and they have tried several times to discipline me during my short trips to India. *rolls eyes* Haven't they heard that Virat will do exactly what you ask him to not do?

There I gave you a sneak peek into my so called 'family.' Now lets go see what chaiji's sir and madam want from me.

"You called me?"

Sir looked up from his paper and signaled me to sit down.

Looks like it is going to be a long conversation. "I don't really have time. I need to meet up my group partner for a presentation." No need to tell him that I still need to call her and fix up a time to meet. Even the thought of calling that cribber gives me a headache. I hate her.

Oh shit I totally missed what he just babbled. Arghh it is Manvi's fault. Concentrate Virat or he'll give you an hour lecture about how you need to be more responsible.

"Are you listening Virat?" Shouted Mr. Grumpy aka Chaiji's sir or err dad.

"Yes sir." I saluted and did a march past.

"You will turn 19 soon but you still behave like a 5 year old. When will you ever grow up?" Blah blah blah. Dude I think I'll fall asleep. Have you ever seen anyone sleep while standing with eyes wide open? You might just see it.

"Varun calm down." Spoke Chaiji's madam aka step mom.

Let me clear one thing, she is not like a typical step mom. I mean she has nothing against me but she doesn't love me either. She is indifferent towards me. I on the other hand hate her. She is the sole reason why my parents separated and for that I can never forgive her. Our relationship is very formal, we have probably spoken once or twice and we hardly address each other. She can never have kids so thankfully I don't have any step sibling.

This is my 'house'. All three of us are always in our own little world; dad travels all over the world for his work, his wife is usually busy with her kitty party and social work and I, well I do what I like which is usually partying and hanging out with friends.

"Have you thought about where you want to go to college?"

"No." I answered truthfully.

He was about start with another session of his lecture but I interrupted him. "Can we continue this later? I gotta go finish up my presentation first."

Before he could speak further I grabbed my car keys and left the house.

Time to call Ms. Cribber now. Nightmare begins.

This girl even picks up her phone with an attitude. Whats her problem with life or people?

Queen Manvi agreed to come meet me outside school. I hope we get done with the presentation today so that I won't ever have to see her face again.

I stood outside the school and leaned against my car door waiting for Queen Manvi to arrive.

Wait a minute, is that Manvi and who the hell is with her? Ms. Cribber looked rather annoyed with the lady that dropped. She even gave the lady a fake smile and looks like she said something sarcastic to the lady because the lady looked pretty pissed off. Why do I have a feeling that this lady is Ms. Cribber's mom? I mean they both have quite a temper and they both wrinkle their nose the same way when they are mad! Dude why the hell do you care?

Queen Manvi put on her shades and walked towards me. I decided to annoy her a little so I asked her if the lady was her babysitter. She wasn't too far either and she asked me the usual question, where are all my 'girlfriends'. Whats wrong with this girl? Why is she so worried about who I hang out with? God, if I didn't know her well I'd think she was jealous or something. But knowing Manvi, she just needs a reason to pick up on people.

From Jeevika's talks it sounded like the queen got in trouble with her mom because of the party. Good.

Right when I was about to tune her out, she said something that changed my entire perspective on her.

Oh boy I wrote this part in a very short time, 20 minutes probably so I didn't really get into details. The story is moving forward, finally. I decided to add in Virat's side as well.

After PMing 150 people, I have barely 20-30 comments and 49 likes. It is so disappointing. If this continues I will delete more than half of the people from my buddy list or open up a private blog and not post anything on IF.

Edited by nisha33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nisha i m there in ur every list whether its pm list blog list or buddy list ok ;)
Coming to the update it was really good..:D
Virat and manvi's condition is almst same bt they deal with it differently..
Luv the way manvi back answers or talks sarcastically with full of attitude its amazing
This presentation is going to be fun
Thanx alot for the pm and pls pls update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haayye see it happened again I opened your pm
then regreted it cause your lefte speechless weather it
Was written in 20 mins or 2 hours you still made
My night with your update was awesome love manvis
Attitude reminds me of my 12 year old neice who
Does exactly the same was great to hear virats side
Of the story. So we have to strangers who hate each
Other for some unknown reason with the same situation
Wonder how they will deal with it interesting update
Was awesome superbly written with outstanding detail
Urrrggghhh I sound like a teacher so I'm Gunna stop
But no doubt your a fabulous writer please update
More sooner and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nisha first edit ur pm list.. Pm doz who liked ur post only.

And as usual update was Fab.. loved it.. Manvi nd Virat sailing in same both. Loved Virat's point of view.
Cant wait for next update. And specially for Virat's pov. Wanna know now what he thinks about her aftr knwng her small story...!!

Continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
girl awesome update as usual! do pm me !
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm so the story has started shaping up!!! Loved the way of how you depicted manvi's pov towards her mom's reaction on the party (I can imagine her mom's face lolzzz) but really felt bad for manvi in the last paragraph but happy that it will lead to soft corner in virats heart for manvi
Thanks for pm!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazinggg update...virat's life also just lyk manvis
Nd he is also lyk her doing opposite to whatever every1 says
i luvedd d way virat teases her nd in end virat said
dat aftr listening to her dat mean wen she was talking to stacy he felt
dat how her parents also ignores nd she is just lyk him.
I hope manvi also get to no about virat
nd dey become frendzzz
plzzz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nisha!
Tis is so awesme i m very glad to read virats POV basicallz they r sailing in same boat...i love tis nw they will understand eachother more...eeks man i love how tis story is progressing!
Keep updating n thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again an amazing update...as expected 😃 ...loved it like hell!!! You are an awesome writer Nisha
...you write so good that after your update i just cant resist myself to think what's gonna happen next

...its outstanding...amazing n what not. God!!! I m short of words...!!!
i loved it that you added virat's side also...poor kid!!! His condition is worse than Manvi i guess...!!!! Now i m damn curious to know what next is gonna happen in Virat's & Manvi's life...please please update it soon!!!! Cant wait s long 😊

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