ARHI OS : YOU HAVE CHANGED *Poem by Vandana on Pg 17* - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Woowww dats such a awesome os

Loll u hve written it beautifully
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hahaha revenge is sweet and its even better if its arnav and khushi πŸ˜†
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#63
Hehe... i loved it!!! 
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#64
Super romantic
indeed hot
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so cute couple... loved it 
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#66
Aayat...this is really cute...I wish we got to see such hubby-wifey moments...
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She was his wife beautiful & sexy 
Desire & passion they felt mutually 
In awe of his good looks was she 
And to look handsome his ability 
Despite him working like crazy 
And at office getting tired daily 

In a mood for love was her Arnavji 
She too tired to enjoy unfortunately 
With his cheeks he got naughty 
And marked her so possessively 
Forever greedy for her was he 
Although tonight was not meant to be 

Wrapped in his arms, she slept blissfully 
Leaving him wanting more & insatiably
His disappointment made her feel guilty 
A plan to appease him she thought instantly 
A perfect ambience she created magical 
Dressed in white she waited seductively 

Mesmerised by her avatar was he surely 
In front of him in a dress his wife a beauty 
Surpassing his expectations most definitely 
Little did she know he had conned her easily 
His act in the morning to gain her sympathy 
Was preplanned with care very cunningly 

All was fair in love he declared smirkingly 
But not to be outdone was smart Khushi 
A plan she too thought so carefully 
Something that was right up his alley 
Luring him to the bathroom enticingly 
Her hands on him he felt excitedly 

But soon he was shocked unexpectedly
Trapped by his loving wife so witty  
Punishment for teasing her shamelessly 
Shaving his stubble so very pokey 
All fairs in love she declared proudly
The joke was now on her sexy hubby 

Aayat I hope you like this poem and it justifies this funny witty and brilliant story ... Edited by vandana.sagar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

She was his wife beautiful & sexy 
Desire & passion they felt mutually 
In awe of his good looks was she 
And to look handsome his ability 
Despite him working like crazy 
And at office getting tired daily 

In a mood for love was her Arnavji 
She too tired to enjoy unfortunately 
With his cheeks he got naughty 
And marked her so possessively 
Forever greedy for her was he 
Although tonight was not meant to be 

Wrapped in his arms, she slept blissfully 
Leaving him wanting more & insatiably
His disappointment made her feel guilty 
A plan to appease him she thought instantly 
A perfect ambience she created magical 
Dressed in white she waited seductively 

Mesmerised by her avatar was he surely 
In front of him in a dress his wife a beauty 
Surpassing his expectations most definitely 
Little did she know he had conned her easily 
His act in the morning to gain her sympathy 
Was preplanned with care very cunningly 

All was fair in love he declared smirkingly 
But not to be outdone was smart Khushi 
A plan she too thought so carefully 
Something that was right up his alley 
Luring him to the bathroom enticingly 
Her hands on him he felt excitedly 

But soon he was shocked unexpectedly
Trapped by his loving wife so witty  
Punishment for teasing her shamelessly 
Shaving his stubble so very pokey 
All fairs in love she declared proudly
The joke was now on her sexy hubby 

Aayat I hope you like this poem and it justifies this funny witty and brilliant story ...


I didn't like it I loved it!!
I've told you this before and I'm going to repeat it - You've a talent.
I feel honored that you wrote a poem for my OS. 
You covered every little nuance and every incident be it her thoughts about her husband or what Arnav wanted. You have a way with words in such a rhythmic manner. Your words sing a story so beautifully.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khushi believed Arnav when he said 'you are changed Khushi' and planned a surprise for him πŸ˜‰ His trick worked then but later, he is trapped by KKGSR πŸ˜†

Beautiful OS Aayat πŸ‘

I don't like Arnav with thick stubble too, he looks awesome in Diwali episodes 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
aahh!!...i was blushing fully reading it!!...😳
loved it...naughty arshi!!...❀️