Love Beyond Words... asya ff COMPLETED - Page 14

OMG!!
This was such a shocking update.
The last sentence of Haseena left me completely surprised.
I can't believe how this woman can be soo shameless.
My heart cried for Asad.He had to bear so much insult from mamu.
I hate Rashid sooo much.He seems tongueless infront of mamu.
I loved Ayaan so much for speaking up for his bhaijaan.
The bitter talks between Asad and Mamu were very nicely written.
I'm glad that dadi stopped the two at the right time.
The garden scene of Nikhat and Asad was mindlblowing.The whole conversation was so emotional.Asad promised Nikhta to give her back her share of happiness that lied with Armaan.This is what we call brother's love for his sister.
I love Asad soo much.
Zoya is in pain.I feel so bad fr the poor girl.
I hope when Asad may return he may find Zoya in such a state and we may get some good ASYA moments.

The whole part was written beautifully Siddhi.
I loved every single word of this part.
I'm so sorry for being unable to comment on the previous part.
I was a bit busy yesterday updating my ff and sending pms and all.
Kindly update the next part soon.
Take care!

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

OMG!!
This was such a shocking update.
The last sentence of Haseena left me completely surprised.
I can't believe how this woman can be soo shameless.
My heart cried for Asad.He had to bear so much insult from mamu.
I hate Rashid sooo much.He seems tongueless infront of mamu.
I loved Ayaan so much for speaking up for his bhaijaan.
The bitter talks between Asad and Mamu were very nicely written.
I'm glad that dadi stopped the two at the right time.
The garden scene of Nikhat and Asad was mindlblowing.The whole conversation was so emotional.Asad promised Nikhta to give her back her share of happiness that lied with Armaan.This is what we call brother's love for his sister.
I love Asad soo much.
Zoya is in pain.I feel so bad fr the poor girl.
I hope when Asad may return he may find Zoya in such a state and we may get some good ASYA moments.

The whole part was written beautifully Siddhi.
I loved every single word of this part.
I'm so sorry for being unable to comment on the previous part.
I was a bit busy yesterday updating my ff and sending pms and all.
Kindly update the next part soon.
Take care!

This part deserves a long reply

Originally posted by: risingsea101

This part deserves a long reply

Lol, I LOVED the sibling relation, I feel bad for Asad he can't even talk properly to his siblings even if they'r half related to him, he loves them so much

I feel like punching Mamujaan in his face. He annoys me a lot 

Haseena bi...what was the point of sending a proposal for Nikhat it she were to break it...

Nikhat...poor girl she doesn't deserve this she was getting a chance to be happy

Ayaan had his brothers back the whole time

Rashid... Why you no step up?

I love how you make the story goahead with the same pace as the show, to be honest, at this moment I love your story much better than the QH track going on. Even though this part didn't have AsYa together, it deserves a hats off

The part in all was heart touching...Continue soon

<3👏

Omg loved the part
asad and his family have to live them...and zoya will also go
that will be fun
but hope that asad will be fine
and continue soo.

Loveddd it Siddhi ! Before Dilshad and Asad move into Rashid's house, just make Haseena die in some accident so that they'd nevaaar have to do this :P

u shud write for 4 lions 😛 ur writing is too good 👏
n frankly speaking, ur story is better than d current track of QH 😛
plz plz plz update soon!!

Originally posted by: Rach.

Loveddd it Siddhi ! Before Dilshad and Asad move into Rashid's house, just make Haseena die in some accident so that they'd nevaaar have to do this :P

Besides, I'm really missing Zoya now. Usko beech mein daalo yaar!

Rest everything else was good. Nothing over the top :)

And yeah. Go to your first page, click on the edit option which would be there in your first ever post to the thread. There would be a bar for you to edit your title of the post as well (That is only if you edit the first post). Make the required changes and post the links to all the parts on the first page of your FF using the same EDIT option :)

I hope this helps :)

Love

Rachyy

Originally posted by: sweet1210

Omg loved the part
asad and his family have to live them...and zoya will also go
that will be fun
but hope that asad will be fine
and continue soo.

Edited by Ayuzawa - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: palak_sh

u shud write for 4 lions 😛 ur writing is too good 👏
n frankly speaking, ur story is better than d current track of QH 😛
plz plz plz update soon!!