Love Beyond Words... asya ff COMPLETED - Page 14

u shud write for 4 lions 😛 ur writing is too good 👏
n frankly speaking, ur story is better than d current track of QH 😛
plz plz plz update soon!!

Originally posted by: Rach.

Loveddd it Siddhi ! Before Dilshad and Asad move into Rashid's house, just make Haseena die in some accident so that they'd nevaaar have to do this :P

Besides, I'm really missing Zoya now. Usko beech mein daalo yaar!

Rest everything else was good. Nothing over the top :)

And yeah. Go to your first page, click on the edit option which would be there in your first ever post to the thread. There would be a bar for you to edit your title of the post as well (That is only if you edit the first post). Make the required changes and post the links to all the parts on the first page of your FF using the same EDIT option :)

I hope this helps :)

Love

Rachyy

Originally posted by: sweet1210

Omg loved the part
asad and his family have to live them...and zoya will also go
that will be fun
but hope that asad will be fine
and continue soo.

Originally posted by: palak_sh

u shud write for 4 lions 😛 ur writing is too good 👏
n frankly speaking, ur story is better than d current track of QH 😛
plz plz plz update soon!!

nice update
haseena is so annoying

I must say your writing skills have really escalated for the better and its good to read fan fiction that goes beyond the hero n heroin melting under each others gaze! really like the sibling chemistry and I'm SO looking forward to Zoya entering Rashid's place- I really hope she teaches Mamu n his wife a lesson or too and sets Haseena bi Straight! Would love to see Asad respecting Zoya and standing up for her and lets face it no drama is complete without romance so I'm looking forward seeing ASYA get closer to each other in the whole process!

Congrats on completing 10 posts!

Superb but shocking update :-) thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: RMamsa

I must say your writing skills have really escalated for the better and its good to read fan fiction that goes beyond the hero n heroin melting under each others gaze! really like the sibling chemistry and I'm SO looking forward to Zoya entering Rashid's place- I really hope she teaches Mamu n his wife a lesson or too and sets Haseena bi Straight! Would love to see Asad respecting Zoya and standing up for her and lets face it no drama is complete without romance so I'm looking forward seeing ASYA get closer to each other in the whole process!

Congrats on completing 10 posts!

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Superb but shocking update :-) thanks for the pm

Can't wait for the next update

Nikki <3

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

thanks a lot. nice to know that my writing skills are improving. and this fanfiction was always meant to be about asya but with the entire QH family. it goes on the actual story line. that was the challenge and till now i think i have done fairly well. Zoya's entry is going to be dhamaka. trust me. its going to change everything in the story. and your wish about ASYA is going to be granted. loads of mitwa moments are on.

thanks but i was wondering that till now i have reached 10 post then maybe i am stretching this story. should i conclude it soon?

You are in high demand- y would you want to conclude it? continue it as long as you wish to- you've developed a storyline not just short excerpts. Stay close to the original story when its needed otherwise be your creative self. You read the comment - your story line is better than QH's current one! Kudos to you :)