Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Sweetheart🤗
Such a beautiful OS...as you say ...its not romantic...not sad ...not over
the top dramatic...it depicted love..unconditional..pure love and
affection...love is not always physical..saying sweet
nothings...sometimes..its just gesture...u penned down their love so
beautifully..well it was as realistic as one could get ...a slice of
life...a ray of hope enlightens our lives when its filled with
darkness,hopelessness and pain...either by the almighty or by an angel
sent by him...i am in awe of this beautiful OS...it was so
soothing...and the way you presented the subject ...it was
flawless...such a smoothly flowing story...so realistically yet touching way of describing emotions...u are gifted dear...the way you mold ur
style of writing according to the mood of your storyline is just sheer
brilliant ...that's about the presentation...
Coming to the
storyline ...the pain...the loss..the reaction..the emptiness in their
lives was so heart wrenching...beautiful depiction of the pain she was
going through...ah...sharon's character was as beautiful as ever ...the
way you showed the motherly side of sharon...brilliant is an
understatement..
But Sharon always felt it was she who killed her own child.
How she yearned to be a mother. Those nine months , there had been a radical
change in Sharon. She had become more caring and sensitive. She had finally
been ready to become a mother. And then this.
And what hurt her the most was when she saw mothers with the
little children. Why couldn't she have been a normal mother. Why did it have to
happen to her? After nine months of carrying a child, her child, in her womb.
.Her pain...when she saw a cute baby around her and the emptiness in her
life evident to her..even more i loved the way you kept the emotions
subtle not over dramatic yet heart touching...
Swayam was his perfect self like always...he was craving for his old sharon..her love..her smile...
"Thank you, baby. Merry Christmas." She whispered into his
ears. She kissed him slowly on the lips. Swayam closed his eyes and brought
Sharon close to him.
It had been days since he had held her so close to him. He
felt they were drifting apart but all those thoughts just flew out of the
window when he held her close to him and kissed her. He loved her so much.
Awww..this moment was so beautifully described by you...swayam ...the perfect
lover..like always...he supported her in alll the painful moments...
Coming to the conclusion...it was so apt for the festive season..a ray of hope ...provided by God...two souls...full of pain ...got their cure..a
little angel...at the Almighty's doorstep...beautiful and to an
brilliantly well-written story...loved every bit of it...i love your
style of writing 😳
PS- sorry for commenting late swthrt..and congrats on completion of your
10th OS...waiting to see more such wonderful work from ur side...Merry
Christmas dear..May almighty bless u with all the happiness &
success...❤️
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