FF- dosti pyaarse gehra.. updated pg 36

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THIS IS MY FIRST TIME AND IT IS ABOUT MY BELIEF THAT FRIENDSHIP IS MORE IMPORTANT, VALUABLE, DEEPER THAN ANY OTHER RELATION IN THE WORLD. IF YOU HAVE A BEST AND TRUE FRIEND YOU CAN FACE ANY TROUBLE AND ANY PROBLEM. THIS IS FOR MY BEST FRIEND ARUN. HE HAS ALWAYS BEEN WITH ME SINCE I WAS IN NURSERY BUT NOW HE IS IN NEPAL AND I AM HERE IN AMERICA SO I WANT TO TELL HIM WHAT HE MEANS TO ME THROUGH THIS STORY. BUT THIS IS IMAGINARY DONT THINK  ANYTHING HAPPENED BETWEEN US AS IN THE STORY WHICH YOU WILL KNOW AS IT WILL GO ON.IN THIS STORY THERE ARE THREE MAIN CHARACTERS.

NIMMO- ME

KARUN-ARUN

KUNAL-EIJOO

I HOPE YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT.

MAIN CHARACTERS

 

NIMMO- A middle class girl who wants to be on top of the world with lots of attitude. She is the only child and wants to make her parents proud of her. She is also very lazy and doesn't believe in love.

KUNAL- He is amir baapka bigra hua beta. He is the coolest boy in the college. Every girl wants to be with him. Like all the other rich boys he is a big flirt but is looking for his miss perfect.

KARUN- Nimmo's best friend and has acrush on her. H is also Kunal's family friend.

               THEY ALL GO TO THE SAME COLLEGE. AND HERE THE STORY BEGINS.

 N'S MOM: Nimmo beta wake up. Uth jao ab mjhe phirse tang mat karo.utho na beta.

N: mamma sone do na abhi time hi kya hua hai?

N' MOM: gyaara bajne wale hai

N (shouts): gyaara matlab eleven right

N' MOM: yes.

N: oh my god. Margayee.(and she rushes to the bathroom)

N' MOM: achha sun karun niche adhe ghante se khada hai.

N: mamma aapne mujhe pehele kyon nahin uthaya?

N' MOM: agar me uthati to bhi uthti kyat u?

She comes out of the bathroom. Her hair is not made. She is not properly dressed and she ran to karuns car with shoe on her hand.

N' MOM: are dhire aur kuchh khake to ja.

N: no mamma I am ok.bye love you. Papa ko bolna ke aaj who mera letter aane wala hai. Bye.

KARUN: are yaar  tumhari wajah se mein bhi late hogaya.

N: sorry tumhe to pata hai na mein subhe jaldi nahin uthpati hu.

KARUN: ok aur tumhare baloko kya hua?

N: kuch nahi hua yahi to problem hai

KARUN: matlab?

N: matlab yeh ke agar kuchh hota to hairstyle dikhta na lekin kuchh nahin hua to mujhe khud banana padega na.

KARUN: tum aur tumhari baato ko mein nahin samjhunga. Chalo Aagaye College

K: hey KARUN whats up?

KARUN: hey man.kool

K: kya baat hai tumhari girlfriend Ms. Kadwi neem ko kya hua.

N: first of all me iski girlfriend nahin best friend hu aur dusri baat jab aap mr. ricie rich mere saamne ho to meri mood off hi rahegi ok.

K: ok

KARUN: ab pls tum dono suru mat karo.

N: ok me chalti hu class ke liye  aur agar mr. richie rich tumhe ijajat dede to tum bhi aajana ok.

NIMMO hug KARUN and he kisses her on the cheek.

The college ends. KARUN had to go early so NIMMO is in the bus stop waiting for the bus. Just then a car arrives and stops in front of NIMMO.

 

PRECAP-WHO'S IN THE CAR?

                 KUNAL AND NIMMO HAVE PANI PURI

                  TOGETHER.

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MUNNIBABA2009 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WILL BE WAITING FOR COMMENTS EVEN IF IT IS BAD
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heyyyy welcome the forum yaarr 😊 it's awesome seriosullly just love it pleasee continueee asap please πŸ˜› !

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everything is ready i just have to copy and paste but i want some more comments so wait till tomorrow.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh common, it is really good. continue soon. It is a pity that now you will not be able to continue writing in kunal and nimmo fan-fic as you will be probably busy with your fan-fic. But anyway good work and continue soon. πŸ‘
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πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ that was great plz continue soon
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Hey Munni. Gr8 start. looking forward for more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar pzzzzzzzzzz cont. im dyin 😭
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[FONT=Bradley]The window opens and there is KUNAL.

K: ms. Kadwi neem lift chahiye?
N: no thanks. I prefer the bus.
K: sure.(and he opens the door)
N: yes sure (she closes the door)
K: kya tum paagal ho?
N: huh!?
K: ek handsome, smart, amir ladka tumhe lift dena chahata hai aur tum ho ke mujhe mana kar rahi ho.
N: kyunki mujhe tum jaise amir ladko se nafrat hai. I hate you.
K: I think ke KARUN bhi to wahi category me padta hai na?


N: maine kaha ke mujhe tum jaise ladke pasand nahi hai ur KARUN un maise nahin hai. Understand. You better understand.

K: hmmmmmmm…. Ok last time pooch rah hu. R u coming?
N: thik hai ek baar tumhe bhi parakh leti hu.

And they go together. In the way NIMMO sees a pani puri stall.

N: hey mr. richie rich gaadi roko.
K: par kyo? Why?
N: wo dekho pani puri.
K: to?
N: mujhe khana hai.
K: what? How cheap.
N: 😑 thik hai tum jao me panipuri khake hi yaha se jaungi.
K: ok. (NIMMO goes abit far and then turns back)
N: tum taste nahin karoge?
K: no way.
N: sirf ek?
K: ok
N: come on. Bhaiya ek plate panipuri dena

KUNAL tasted pani puri and it was really good but as he said he had only one.they finally reached home.NIMMO got off the car and was walking.

K: hey ms. Kadwe neem who humne kya khaya tha?
N: pani puri
K: yes wohi bahut achha tha thanx
N with some attitude: pata hai and you r welcome.

Next day again she was late and was running down to KARUN. Both in the car.

N: strange aaj tumne kuchh nahi kaha.
KARUN: hamesha to kehta hu par tumpe koi asar hi nahi padta hai.
N: kyunki it's me. πŸ˜†
KARUN: good
N (looking into his eyes): poocho tumhe kya poochna hai
KARUN: huh?!
N: jyada bhole banne ki jaroorat nahi hai mujhe woh look aur woh question wala aakhen bahut achhi tarase pata hai ok.
KARUN: actually…
N: actually kya jaldi bolo.
KARUN: 😳 woh kal mere bhai ki engagement hai aur I want you to be there with me. Agar tum aate to bahut achha lagta
N: πŸ˜› sure.jaroor aaungi agar tum nahi bulate na to bhi me jaroor aati. akhir mere best friend ke bhai ki engagement hai me jaroor aaungi. πŸ˜‰
KARUN: aur ek baat waha par ek dance ceremony hoga jisme couples dance karenge to kya hum bhi usme dance kar sakte hai?
N: of course me tumhare saath hi to dance karongi waise bhi me waha aur kisiko jaanti bhi to nahin.
KARUN: jaanti ho
N: huh!?
KARUN: waha KUNAL hoga
N: for your kind information who mere jaanne walo ki list me nahin hai ok

Next evening at around 6.

KARUN: NIMMO I am here tayaar hui kya.
N"S MOM: kabse tayaar bethi hai par niche hi nahi aarahi hai.
KARUN: kyun?
N"S MOM: kehrahi thi ke jab tum aaoge to tum hi use sabse pehele dekhoge aur koi bhi nahi me bhi nahi
KARUN (shout): 😳 achha NIMMO I am here bahar aao..

PRECAP- THEY ALL GO TO THE PARTY
        HOW IS NIMMO LOOKING TODAY?
        HOW MIGHT KARUN REACT WHEN SHE COMES OUT?
        HOW MIGHT KUNAL REACT?


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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ITS SO AWSOME YAAR U WRITE SO GUD PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CON SOON I HOPE KUNAL WILL FALL 4 HER AND SAME AS KARUN(VARUN) HEHEHEHEEEEEEEEEE AND 4 WHOM DOES NIMMO FALL I M WATIN PLZZZZZZZZZZZ POST QUICKLY
WELL DONE πŸ‘