Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful start.. would like to read the rest .. please p me when u update.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow intresting
pls con soon
pls pm me next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really interesting...
Continue soon...plz pm me when u update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you all so much for liking my story and commenting. It means a lot me as it boosts my confidence as a novice to write better :)

I know it started with a sad event of Anjali and Shyam's death but I want to keep the story about Arnav-Khushi relationship and not about Raizada family. Also I wanted to get done with the sad part and embark on the love story part of it. 

I am going to be a pretty regular updater as I have a definite story in my mind and I have time in hand too. Also because this is my first attempt, I'l leave no stone unturned to impress readers. I hope to get your comments regarding story line, writing style or a few words of encouragement in future also. 

My Khushi's character will be introduced in the next chapter. Hope you all like her :) :)
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
osm start..😊
continue soon..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely piece of writing for a first attempt
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Posted: 11 years ago
the concept is very interesting 👍🏼 .I can 't wait to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read it. i like the fact thats edited n free of typos :) nice efforts. anjali dead :(. would love you to continue this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting...waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting. I would love for u to continue. Frequent updates, WOW!! I would love that. Please do continue. You have made me curious about Khushi's character more. Will wait for the update! :)