Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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Purnima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wonderful start.. would like to read the rest .. please p me when u update.. 😊

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abika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow intresting

pls con soon

pls pm me next

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amina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Really interesting...
Continue soon...plz pm me when u update next

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank you all so much for liking my story and commenting. It means a lot me as it boosts my confidence as a novice to write better :)

I know it started with a sad event of Anjali and Shyam's death but I want to keep the story about Arnav-Khushi relationship and not about Raizada family. Also I wanted to get done with the sad part and embark on the love story part of it.

I am going to be a pretty regular updater as I have a definite story in my mind and I have time in hand too. Also because this is my first attempt, I'l leave no stone unturned to impress readers. I hope to get your comments regarding story line, writing style or a few words of encouragement in future also.

My Khushi's character will be introduced in the next chapter. Hope you all like her :) :)

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penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

osm start..😊
continue soon..!!

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ragaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Lovely piece of writing for a first attempt

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tvserial2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

the concept is very interesting 👍🏼 .I can 't wait to read more.

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Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

just read it. i like the fact thats edited n free of typos :) nice efforts. anjali dead :(. would love you to continue this story

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RandomGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

interesting...waiting for the next update...

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kshows_fangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Very interesting. I would love for u to continue. Frequent updates, WOW!! I would love that. Please do continue. You have made me curious about Khushi's character more. Will wait for the update! :)