The Starry Night - Swaron OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guyz . I am back with another OS. its a very randomn OS, sumthin which just came to my mind while writing my previous OS. i didnt like it too much and neither did it come out the way i wanted it to. but anyways i wrote it and here i am posting it.
I would like to dedicate this OS to some of my close friends on IF- Aruba, Sadiya< ambi and Lalita dii. i love you all. so now here i start with my os
and guyz this i have writeen in a hurry becuse of SOME ppl so plz dont mind the gramatical and typing errors.


THE STARRY NIGHT


The Phone Convo
"Mere paas tumhare liye ek suprise hai!" swayam exclaims
"Suprise! Chalo lemme guess!
Umm a long drive? Or a candlite dinner or a new car or"Sharon starts guessing whn she is cutin between by swayam
"Bas bas kitna guess karogi! Its sumthin very unique and special. Sum thin which u will cherish all ure life. " swayam answers
"Toh ab u have 30 mins. Get ready, mein pick karne aa raha hun. And remember only 30 mins!" swayam informs her
"Ok baby, I will now take more than 30 mins." Sharon says
"Chal, see you later then, bye"swayam says
"Bye!" sharon says and with this they end the convo
Sharon opens her cupboard and searches for the most dazzling dress she could find. After all she was going out with Mr. Perfect today. She finally chooses a light baize cocktail dress with stilettos. Her
adornments perfectly match with the dress and make her look even more angelic. She was busy admiring herself in the mirror when she hears a noise
"HONK! HONK!" Swayam was blowing the horn for the past 5 mins but she had nt realized. She jumps with excitement. Now it was time for her surprise. She goes jumping down the stairs where her mom spots her
Arrey sharon beta, kahan jaa rahi ho? Her dad inquires her
dad swayam ke saath jaa rahi hun. Baad mein sab bataungi! " Sharon replies and leaves And run towards the car. He had come in his fav car actually both of theirs favourite ca, his convertible black coloured BMW. Sharon goes and sits in the car.
So swayam, hum kahan jaa rahe hain"asks a curious sharon
Just wait and watch"answers swayam
Arrey batao na"she again asks him
I said na wait and watch"and he again gives the same answer
To stop Sharon's cribbing he puts on a cd which had a collection of romantic numbers. He always knew music was sumthin which could shut her mouth fr sumtime. Specially soft romantic music. She leans on swayam and places her head on swayams shoulder while the songs were being played.
After about 20 minutes they stop
"So here we have reached. " swayam informs her
Here? Yahan pey toh kuch bhi nahin hai" aska a very curious sharon
Tum aao toh" he tells her
Swayam opens the door for sharon and she steps out. Swayam holds her hand and takes her to the spot.
Look Up"swayams tell her

She looks up and was just awestruck by the sight. It was a magnificent view!One of the most beautiful scenery she had ever seen. She could see the beauty of the sky. The moon playing hide and seek with the clouds, hiding behind it While the stars giving off light and and supporting them. It all seemed so magical. But somewhere this was making her feel hurt! Her eyes had become teary. And in no time a small drop of water rolled down her eye. She tried to wipe it and hide it from swayam but in vain swayam had already noticed it!

He gently raised his right hand and wiped her tear. He turned her towards him, looked deep into her eyes and asked her
"Sharon, itni magical scene dekhne ke baad aasu? Is everything fine?" swayam would always get tensed when he used to see Sharon crying!

Bola na sharon kya hua, tum chup kyun ho? Kya maine tumhe hurt kiya?"
Finally sharon wiped her tears and tears and composed herself!
"Pata hai swayam jab mein 6yrs ki thi, mom mujhe aur dad ko chodkar god ke paas challi gayi!unhe blood cancer tha! Uss din laga ki jaise meri puri duniya ek jhatke mein khatam ho gayi! Mein apni mom ke bina apni life ek second ke liye bhi imagine nahin kar sakti, aur fir unka jaana, it just broke me. Tutt gayi thi mein, tukre tukre ho gaye mere. .eik din raat ko apne aap ko room mein band karke rote rehti! Dad khudh mom ko khone ke dukh mein khoye they ki mujhe kya sambhatey. Bahut din aisa chalet gaye but soon I realized ki aise rone se kuch nahin hoga. I decided that I will be strong. Aur maine decide kiya ki main kabhi kissi ko apne kareeb nahin aane dungi, kabhi kissi se attached nahin hungi. Aur wo karne ke liye maine Sharon, the diva ka roop le liya, so that every person on earth just hates me! But fir mein tumse milli aur tum wo first gaye they jisne mere kareeb aane ki sochi. Mere real side dekha. And in no time mein tumse attached ho gayi! Aur ab jab mom ke bare mein sochti hun to tum bhi yaad aate ho! Aur lagta hai ki agar tum mujhe chodkar chale gaye

Before she could complete swayam keeps his finger on her lips and pulls her into a tight hug.

Plz Sharon aisa mat bolna, mein tumhe kabhi nahin chodkar jaa sakta, never!

Sharon was now leaning over swayam with her head resting upon his chest

Aur swayam mom ne jaane se pehle kaha tha ki jab bhi meri yaad ayi, in stars ko dekhna, aur unse baat karna, tum indirectly mujhse baat kar rahi hogi

Now whenever I look at these stars, they always remind me of mom, and then'

Shshsh, tum aur nahin rogi. That's enough.main tumhare aakhon mein aur ansoon nahin dekh sakta. S! Swayam checks his watch and shouts

Sharon, look there

They see a a beautiful comet falling.

Swayam leans towards Sharon and whispers in her ear

This is the lovejoy comet. It happens once in every 20 years. Kehte hai isse dekhkar agar koi wish mango, toh wo true ho jati hai. So shall we, they both close their eyes and wish

Sharon(in mind): mein aur swayam hamesha ke liye ek dusre ke bahon mein aise bandhe rahe aur kabhi ek dusre se juda nahin hoye, never

Swayam (in mind) : mein bas yeh chahta hun ki jo Sharon ne manga, who use mil jayye. That's all I want!

They open their eyes stand under the stars and hence end their another day enveloped in each others arms.


Hope you all liked it! though i know it was very boring! and very chottu also! Soa ll criticism is most welcomed!!! and also lovejoy is a comet but i really dont have any idea baout it. just something i made up on my own!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for lalita di!
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heyyyo

angel meri jaan 🤗
firstly ur tilte is so amazing re 😃
i love starry nights n
i was more than delighted to see a swaron os titled starry nights 😳
sharon must have expected a usual surprise
but swayam ka style ki kuch unusual karna hai 😉
ahhh sharon was excited as usual but she had to wait
n her wait was worth it
coz the scene was amazing n more than beautiful
i can imagine it coz ive been to such a place which is close to nature n stars all over the sky 😊
awww sharon felt emotional
the description about her mom was so amazing
poor she
swayam wll never leave her 😊
the shooting star part was so nice re
n this want bad at all my angel
keep writing u'll start believing in youself soon 😛
n i kept my promise now u have to update soon 😉

Edited by swaron09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!!
So sweet..and...romantic..and...emotional
The title was sooo apt for this os :)
Keep writing always😉
Edited by arjuhiswaron007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS dear...
Or for your information😊 yeh bilkul bhi boring nahi tha...it was simply Amazing...Loved it😊
Keep writting more dear...😊
Thnkx for the PM...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet os...luvd it...it ws awesome...keep writing more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS ...
it was really sweet...
loved the surprise he planned for her...
loved their wishes to b together always😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now that was something very sweet... 😊

Sharon(in mind): mein aur swayam hamesha ke liye ek dusre ke bahon mein aise bandhe rahe aur kabhi ek dusre se juda nahin hoye, never Swayam (in mind) : mein bas yeh chahta hun ki jo Sharon ne manga, who use mil jayye. That's all I want!
This was the sweetest part of the os...keep writing and pm me when u do... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely and a sweet OS...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os superb

sweet..and...romantic..and...emotional
The title was sooo apt for this os :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
cute post!!
thanx for the pm!

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