SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) - Page 22

thank u so much for updating...really love it...

finally u updated..
i really like ur writting style...especially devi maya part..
thanks fr pm..
count soon

Di...gt up in the morning signed in and saw the update pm frm u...A very good morning with arnav khushi and lemons...
Awww devi maiyaan made khushi feed Arnav:)
Arnav is becomin romantic day by day:)
Loved devi maiyaan' thts...And the convo in car:-)
So without devi maiyaan's helpm hw these too gonna get closer...?eagerly waiting to kno...
Thank u so much for the update di..:)

Woww woww u finally updated !!!!!!!! Yayyy i am sooo happy u r continuing ur ff...i knw u won't blv the whole day i was thinking bout ur ff n was deciding to pm u...before that i got ur pm...thank u so much 4 writting again🤗

the update was very beautiful...aww i m loving devi maiya plan...she is trying hard for them...kushi is really crazyy and the car scene was so cute...please update soon can't wait for the next update😊

 there was nothing on her lips...right???😉 ...

Farah...glad you updated... will come back & comment...fursaat se.

wow, after 1 month finally another update...

what more can i say about lemons & limes? it's just awesome & the best part of your writing is i can visualize Arnav & khushi,the whole scenario while reading it,which somehow soothe the empty feeling i m having for last 1 week.

finally u updated...I'm so happy...   
this was the best no the bestest chapter...👏  👏  👏  👏
In this chapter every  small things were perfect...
I still don't know whom i liked the most in this chapter arnav, khushi or devi maiyya ...everyone rocked...
& yeah the dialogues were PERFECT...
It was like I was watching IPKKND episode...
Your profile pics is simply awesome...I was  just starring at the pics for 10 mins......actually i don't have that pic of him...
thanx u r continuing this SS & will be waiting for the next part...

First of all hugs to u...for the month we had...we dont mind the delay yaar...when i read ur update..my heart just expands lik a baloon n starts dancing to rabbaveyyy...
U have magic farha...u create chemistry... <3 the update dammit...
N lol ur kkg is so adorable...n arnav naughtyyy..His PS came back...aw noEdited by swat.g - 11 years ago

I really love the Devi Maiya perspective you have added ... it is cute.I love it.