New Ariya OS: Her Beauty His Possesion - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
This is my first on Arjun and Riiya. Awh. I love those two ❤️ And, you have written so wonderfully. Awesome work 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awesome Os... luvd it... thnx for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
awsomeee update lvd it 😛 lvd nauari sadi🤣 Edited by rockz.diva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
it's  awesome   &  naughty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  😳👍🏼  nice  work  dear.😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Oh you wrote this!! Yay!!!

Babe, this is so cute!! The sari-tying part was HOT! 😳 Yeh donon kitne awesome hain na!! Loved the bit about the storeroom in the end... Great job, you! I'm glad I gave you this idea! 🤗
Edited by dee86 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awesome...romantic..:)
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17



shru aaja pehle 🤗


uss din ki not so serious discussion se tu itna accha os bana liya,ka baat hai 👍🏼


superb update..Ariya is getting married in marathi style...aww so cute 😊


Arjun is very naughty kya baahana dhoonda hai aapni honewaali dulhan se milne 😉


thanks shru meri force ki wajah se nehi tu aise hi bohut accha likhti hai 😃 i love your writing..thanks for pm 😊


Edited by KiSha13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Omg it was amazing ...
I luvd it ...
Love that part when Arjun draped the nauvari ...it was so cute
I just love the romantic Arjun so much
I am so eager to read the next part ...
I really can't stop smiling
Plzzz update the next part soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Superb! Ab toh raat andheri ho gayi hai baby... Wow!
N jaanemann, baby... Uff! I wanna hear these words in Shaleen's voice...(mere liye na sahi, par sunna hai)!
He drapped the saree... Haww! Shame shame puppy shame!
Saare rituals marathi kar diye... Next time bengali rituals haan...
Benarasi n dhooti-punjabi... Ofcourse a topor on Archu's head...
Keep writing n take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hey.. Shru u know marathi...!
Tell me na wat does archu's vry 1st dialouge means n the one he said to Rathore while arguing in the kalki devi case... Plzzz...