Abhiya OS: the journey of a lifetime.edited.18oct. - Page 3

Sory 4 late reply indu.was busy in xams preparations.
awesum o.s dear.just lovd it.

Originally posted by: mandy1024

An OS is the best gift any writer can give to us PKYEKians on this special day 😃 n a BIG thank you for that 🤗 u'r most welcome...🤗 Just one question? Do u like romantic stories that take place against the backdrop of a cruise? 😉 no there's nothing like that! i like every story which is intense n meaningful...😊  U must be a huge TITANIC fan then 😉  ya  i love the movie😳 but no nothing that sort of...! 😆Anyways the OS was written well considering the time constraints n all 😊 Thank u for that dear 🤗 So here we have a simple orphan girl who was treated with love n respect while her parents were alive n she never gave up loving life n being optimistic though destiny rendered her an orphan  She still had her best friends Vineet n Shruti with her but then that same best friend did not stand by her when his own mother insulted her for no fault of hers. Then comes in our savior 😃 Who not only saved her honor n pride but also lost his heart to her 😳 In the beginning he was shown to be a rude arrogant businessman who cared for nothing n nobody but love did change him for good 😳 Aww so sweet 😳 Their last moment was magical   i wanted the moment to be special,glad you liked it..😊Waves crashing over them n sparkles lighting the night sky while two lovers united was so magical 😳 Yes this is not the end but the beginning of a memorable love story 👏 thank you dear..i tried my best,but time was short so was skeptical about how it would turn up! but am happy that you liked it..😊

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Indu u have left me speechless now, I don't have words to describe how much I loved it. Just beautiful OS dear!!! aww...thank you romi...🤗
I am in love with ur concept and a big thank u for fulfilling my dream. An abhiya OS on cruise wow I wanted something like this badly since ages but no one wrote anything like that, but today u fulfilled my dream!!! you are  always welcome dear.😊 glad that i could fulfill ur dream. 😊So here piya is an orphan who grew among her loved ones I.e dobriyals who treated her like their own daughter and abhay a rich, arrogant businessman who don't believe in love wow . I loved the way u described each character, each emotion everything thing, nature's beauty everything was just dreamy.thank u. 😳 I loved at last how abhay saved piya's pride and became her saviour and yes it's not the end it's the beggining of their love. 
I would love to read this OS again and again and it's the best gift a outstanding writer like u could have given. I loved this OS and this writer writing skills. Just brillant. Gr8 job!!! aww...thank u so much for the appreciation dear,it means a lot to me...😳
If u get any other idea na on cruise like this it's a request plz write it down I would love to read it, I am a big fan of romantic stories on cruise!!! hmm..okey dear, if you love romantic stories on cruise so much then i will definitely try to write one if i get any better idea in the future! 😉
once again mindblowing job!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey indu its nice story... i apperitiate ur effort dat to so quick... sorry if i hurt but i feel uneasy with climax... whole story is fantastic but at climax hw feeling arose so fast they hardly knw each other... hope u understand... sorry dont mind i admire all ur ff but with dis i have ques... plz dont mind and dont take it otherwise... plz plz...

thanks dear. no dear i didnot mind at all...the thing you mentioned even i myself felt it while writing the update plus i wrote it in hurry so maybe that's y...but the thing is...actually this is an os na? so there's not much space in an OS to develop feelings slowly  n form the story, as it ends in just one single update unlike an FF or SS..so i had to do it like that because i wanted all the readers to be happy n so thought of giving it a happy ending or else i would have to give it a sad ending or leave for readers to imagine that...! 😕 so sorry if i disapointed you..

Originally posted by: koli97

wahooo lovely😊...miss Abhiya sooo much😭

thanks dear..😊aww..sorry for making you sad...plzz dont cry dear...😊

Originally posted by: shria

this os was simply superb 😳 just loved it😛

thank you shria...😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great os plz update soon
thanks for the pm

welcome. n  thank you alicia. 😊

Originally posted by: --peehu--

amazing indu...it was just beautiful...

thanks a lot peehu. 😳

Originally posted by: --Rose--

Omg What a BEAUTIFUL os:-D:-D:-) Its Awesome:-):-) loved it:-):-):-)

thanks a ton rashi.. glad to know you liked it so much! 😳

awesomeeest os indu!!👏wow loved it!⭐️!and the setting was sooo different...a cruise,amidst and abhay and piya...finding each other and love amidst the ocean waves and uniting underneath the fireworks.😳...the start of a new year and the start of two new lives as one!!love the way u wrote everything..it was so magical and beautiful!!!!!