SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 26

wow excellent update..they r engaged now..it will be interesting..waiting for the next update..thanks a lot for the wonderful update for the anniversary of pkyek

haila dont tell me they kissed in front of everyone! lol yahan situation toh chat mangni pat byah lag raha hai.

wow...its amazing yaar...
n u update aftr looong tym...
realy miss ur ff sooo much...
thanks for the update n pm...
continue soon...

nice update nafisa  😃 👏
 saddu abhay 😡 , now he is a man who deserves the title of dusht danav , Ahaaan ... apni izzat bachaane ke  liye he had to dance with pia , and the dance was passionate 😳  , who is the sprirt in dobrial house ? , update asap ! 😉
Edited by withered - 10 years ago

brilliant update...plz update soon...

i am so much excited to read what happened to menthili and who killed her is that person same like abhay or twin who killed menthili😉
nice episode 👏
Edited by abhaylovepia - 10 years ago

Awsome story 

Finally aapne hum pe mehrbani kar hi di. 😳 bt nice update yaar. Atlast abhiya mil hi gye. 😊 kya hot dance tha yar. 😳 bt pia ke side me kon tha? 😲 Or ab agla update kya next annievarsary pe milega? 😉Edited by i_luv_abhiya - 10 years ago

awesome update
love the abhiya nok-jhok moment + super romantic dance
poor jeh , he not enjoy party
waiting for nxt update
pls continue soon

loved Abhiya part
btw who killed metz