Locked out of Heaven (OS-complete) VirMan - Page 5

Originally posted by: avika26

wow! just read it now it was just wow...
beautifully described feelings...
loved it...

Originally posted by: Radharaday

Wow ... loved it bruno girlie 😛

Darling ... u dedicated this one to Bruno Mars rite ... it is the best gift for him  and there is another best in best gift for him too that's -a crazy and sweet si fan- The bruno girlie , Menika Mars 😉

It was an awesome work ... loved how u switched the scenes 👏

Continue soon and thx for the pm

P.S : Sorry for the late reply 😳

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Heey guys, thanx for your lovely commets,

Originally posted by: _Sara_

You. Are. Amazing

No words ! Keep it up man!

Cant wait for the next bit !

Great imagination xoxo

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Ahw you are so shweet! You know? Everyone at school congratulated

me, cause I couldn't shut up about his birthday! Everyone knew, even

people who didn't know me congratulated me! LoL, I am really obsessed

with this guy... Ahw thank you! Glad, cause I really felt like it would be

very difficult to understand me, I have weird thought you... Thanx!

I will PM you when I update!

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

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The second part is done, it is not that well, but done!

I only need to get to page 10...

That's the only way I will update...

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Originally posted by: shona_virman

now dis is being cruel u noe 😆 dont provoke me... I can spam here n take it to 10 pages 😆

oh u told every1 abt his b'day? Menika u r truly an awesome fan... Shows u truly truly luv him like mad... I appreciate ur luv for ur star! 😃

Yes... I did...😳 I mean look at him! --->