Locked out of Heaven (OS-complete) VirMan - Page 4

Really beautiful. plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: Virmanroxx

Really beautiful. plz continue soon.

Hav to say dat u r a wonderful writer

This is beautifull!!!!

Originally posted by: forever_young

This is beautifull!!!!

Please PM me when you update the second part 😊

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

 

Thank You! Of course I will,

 

P.s. You know you already commented right?

-I don't mind...-

Did I? rofl i didn't even realisee 😛

Amazing!!!
Loved it!!
Thanks 4 the pm!! 😊

Oh My!This is just brilliant..!Absolutely loved the way you have written Virat's feelings for her...Loved this portions so much

''Never, never he dared to think that someone would do this to him. Make him restless and feel at peace at the same time. Make him confused but make him love it at the same time. He is Virat Singh Vadhera. The guy that didn't care about the girls that roamed around him. Didn't care about love or care, about people or friends, he even did not have one. The guy that even hadn't a heart. But this girl, changed everything. She made the possible impossible. She taught him how to love, how to care and how to appreciate people. She filled his heart with love. Which he happily gave to her in return. And he couldn't thank (t)his angel more for accepting it.''❤️



''She love the way he caressed her cheek with his rough thump. This small thing that he probably was unaware of, made fireworks bang.''☺️


I should stop here..otherwise I'll quote the entire update here😛...
And are you going to make a sad ending for it???I can't take that much sadness for the works which made an impact in me so much!


PS:If you write such beautiful works on BM's bday,wish he had so many bdays in an year!😉*runs away*

Edit: I loved this portion too...
''There's some special place, but he can't come in. There is heaven, with his angel, but he hasn't the key to open the gate. He had to wait till someone noticed him, on the other side of the gate to let him in''
Edited by -Aswathy- - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Amazing!!!
Loved it!!
Thanks 4 the pm!! 😊

Originally posted by: -Aswathy-

Oh My!This is just brilliant..!Absolutely loved the way you have written Virat's feelings for her...Loved this portions so much

''Never, never he dared to think that someone would do this to him. Make him restless and feel at peace at the same time. Make him confused but make him love it at the same time. He is Virat Singh Vadhera. The guy that didn't care about the girls that roamed around him. Didn't care about love or care, about people or friends, he even did not have one. The guy that even hadn't a heart. But this girl, changed everything. She made the possible impossible. She taught him how to love, how to care and how to appreciate people. She filled his heart with love. Which he happily gave to her in return. And he couldn't thank (t)his angel more for accepting it.''❤️



''She love the way he caressed her cheek with his rough thump. This small thing that he probably was unaware of, made fireworks bang.''☺️


I should stop here..otherwise I'll quote the entire update here😛...
And are you going to make a sad ending for it???I can't take that much sadness for the works which made an impact in me so much!


PS:If you write such beautiful works on BM's bday,wish he had so many bdays in an year!😉*runs away*

Edit: I loved this portion too...
''There's some special place, but he can't come in. There is heaven, with his angel, but he hasn't the key to open the gate. He had to wait till someone noticed him, on the other side of the gate to let him in''

Edited by BrunoMars - 11 years ago

wow! just read it now it was just wow...
beautifully described feelings...
loved it...