SwaRon OS:First Love... - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
 Wow dii such a beautiful..totaly different one i loved it very  much i was totally lost in it dii...and the way unfolded everything was really very very beautiful and ending hayeee...amzing work dii👏 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Amazing os...adore the cute sammy and shona and love the romantic swayam and sharon...good job deep 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Deep Di🤗
What an OS you have written. it is just out of this world
each and every emotion was brilliantly penned down👏
It was just perfect
Starting from Sammy and Shona and ending it to Swayam and Sharon
Loved every bit of it
Ending was very beautiful just dreamyyy
😳😳😳
Amazing concept and ur title also FIRST LOVE👍🏼

P.S sorry for late feed back I have read this quiet before but forgot to post my feed back

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
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finally your are gonna update your FF's soon 
love you for that ❤️

loved the way they were taking.. i mean the care and love he had for her.. 😳
beautiful...
and loved the way you have characterized both the characters di ...
the way swayam can sense each and every emotion of sharon was mind blowing 👏
i knew it ki swayam was sammy  !!!
pehle hi intuition aa gayi thi 😆😆

the OS was simply romantic
it was a simple and a sweet OS.. really pure..
loved reading it 👏
thanks for the PM 😳

loved the kriyaansh as well as swaron version..
DI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE YOUR WORKS SOON NA...
i am dieing to read them 😳😳


Edited by -spongy- - 10 years ago