New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...!!!πŸ‘
lvd it...!!
precap is intrstng ...!!!
continue soon..!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all sorry for a late reply...
great work.. loving every bit ... waiting for the twists...
felt like actually watching it..πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
rathore ke papa ka gussa toofan ka andesha lgta hai, i am scared now

update soon, pls yeh suspense bardasht nhi hota
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Posted: 11 years ago
my dr manu, u r brilliunt writer-----
realy nice part,
per mujhe to dar lag raha hai,
ohh no ab kya hoha,
poor sameer ,meera, arjun or riya ka,
riya ke dad to old movie ke vilans ke tarah sound ho rahe hai,
khandan ke ijajat ,
noker ki baiti,
or arjun ka to name tak yad nahi,
kuch to chut raha hai ,
cant wait for next part update soon,
SAMJHE YA SAMJHAYON VO BHI ARJUN STYLE
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
That was really good :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
precap s interesting
i doubt him that he cld pretend he accept them
let's see
update soonπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
loved it
precap sounds intersting
update soon
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CHAPTER 33
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya goes to her room. While Rathod goes to Driver & orderd him to drop Meera at her home safely. Meera hug Rathod tightly , Rathod does not hug her back , he only bend down little & whispers in her ears" Jaldi so jana , mujhe tumse sapne mai milna hai." Meera hit his chest lightly & bid him bye. Here in Arjun's room he feel werid , his sixth sense tell him somthing bad happing soon. And he have to stop that. he seats on bed & closes his eyes. All scenes comes infront of his eyes like movie. Riya never like talk about her father , they fall in love , her sweetness , her couarge , her smile everything changes when she saw her father , Rathod's angryness , his father talk , his mother scareness , taunt to his father , Riya's fear. he rembered each & everything . Arjun open his eyes & look at his phone & called someone, "Hello , ha mujhe Raja Samsher Singh Rathod ke barte puri information chayie , vo kya khaate hai , kya pasand karte hai , kya napasnd , unke contacts , unki past , itne din vo kaha the , unka unke parivaar ke saath kaisa rishta hai , unki badi beti Suhani ke bare mai " ( he pauses for a while) "Ha 2 din tak , sun rahe Shree , sifr 2 din , aur ha ye baat hamare beech mai rehegi , Chotu , Rathod ko is bare mai pata nhi chalna chayie, Samhje Ya Samjhyaon?" he keep phoneaside & goes to change cloths.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
In Rathods room he seat on his bed & thinking in deep , while Chotu comes in Shree's room , "Yaar ye Ri ke Papa to koi villan lagte hai hindi filmo vale." Shree "Ha re tune Ri ko dekha ekdum sherni se bhigi billi ban gayi thi , maine use itna dara hua kabhi nahi dekha. " Suddenely Shree's phone buzzes , he picks & talk on phone. While Chotu goes to window & lost in stars.
 
 
 
 
 
Riya changes into nightwear . she closed all windows tightly. she seat on her bed , her face & her palms bath in sweat. she remebering somthing & continuesouly wipe her face with back of her palm. She drinks water , suddenely she hears knock on her door. But she does not respond , after 2-3 knocks person called her , "Chutki , darvaja kholo , chutki mai hue" Riya agin wipe her swaet & open door. Rathod comes in , he look at Riya.
 
 
 
 
"Kya hua bachha , tu kyu dar gayi , unse dar mat mai hue na tere saath , dekh hum sab tere saath hai , Masa , Shaurya , Samrat , Chotu , Shree , Meera , aur to Arjun bhi hai na. hum sab hai yaha , tujhe kuch nahi hoga." Riya awkwardly look at Rathod , "Bhai sa aaj aap yaha so sakte ho , mere paas.?" Rathod nodded. Riya placed her head on pillow & takr duet on her body. Rathod sits near her & slowly caressing her hair & forhead , Riya turn around & hide her face in Rathod's lap & slowly goes to sleep. Rathod sighs in relif & lift his head , he notices two black eyes looking at him through door. Rathod immedatly knows who is this , & called in slow in voice "Arjun , come in" Arjun come in & see Riya sleeps peacefully , she held Rathod's white kudta tightly like she fear her brother leaves her. " Mai bas check karna aaya tha , ki Riya ... " Arjun says. Rathod says him "Arjun plz  ab tumhe hi Riya ko sanbhalna hai , uske saath hi rehena  , use akle mat chodna." Arjun nodded his head. Suddenely Riya shifts little and mumbled in her sleep , "Maar diya , maar diya mere Suhani Di ko , Arjun chalo jaldi chalo , varna , varna vo hame bhi , mujhe nahi marana , Arjun." Arjun hurridly comes near her & hold her hand , "Mai yahi hue , Riya koi kuch nahi karega , jo Di ke saath hua , vo hamara saath nahi hoga. i promise. "& kiss her forhead .  Riya agin shift little & hold Arjun's hand & drifted to sleep. Rathod look at Arjun , Arjun also look at him & smile weakly both knows they have to take care of their life , Riya.
 
 
 
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Arjun slowly free his hand from Riya's grip & found a little scartches & marks on his hand. Riya hold him tightly. He ask Rathod "Do u want somthing Sam?" Rathod " Yes , plz give me my duet from my room & ya cell also. " Arjun goes Rathod's room & pick Duet & cell , he goes to Riya's room & see Rathod busy in free his kurta from Riya's grip. But Riya tightly hold kurta . Finally Rathod succed & Arjun handed him blanket & cell. Rathod takes it & thanks Arjun, Rathod goes to sofa sleeps there , while Arjun off lights & slowly close the door & goes back to his room to catch sleep.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here in Maharaja 's room Maharaj sleeping on bed peacefully , while Maharani standing near window & gazing at stars , she sees one bright star shining there & call that star , "Suhani , meri bacchi " her eyes filled with tears. she look back at her husband. " Itne nirdayi kaise ho sakte hai aap , kai saal pehele uske paida hone par puri Rajshtan mai miththayien baati thi aapne , aur kuch saal baad aapne ne hi use bacchi ko maut ke ghat utar diya." She look back at star "Meri bachhi mujhe maaf kar , mai kuch nahi kar paayi tere liye.kuch nahi." She can't forgot that day when she Suhani tells her everthing.
 
 
 
 
 
                                                                   Suhani's Past
 
 
 
 
 
Maharani passe from Suhani's room , she heard Suhani humming a song . Marani goes in & sees Suhani seating on chair in front of mirror and combing her hair , she smiles to herself , Suhani smells her hair & blushes remebering somthing. Suhani now start to make braid. , she complete half braid & look at mirror , she suddenely make faces & free her hair from braid. She thinking somthing & again start to makr braid again. Maharani feels somthing different . She goes to near Suhani & placed hand on her shoulder. Suhani stop humming & stand on her feet , she turn around & look at her mother like she caught.
 
 
 
 
 
Masa : Kya hua aaj hamari beti badi khush lag rag rahi hai.(she ask smilingly)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Suhani : ( not look at her mother) (and feardly ans her) Nahi to Masa. hum aise hi to hai.
 
 
 
 
Masa : (look at her daughter , and sees she can't see at her mother) Suhani , sab kuch theek to hai na?
 
 
 
 
Suhani : Ha. ( she hurridly ans)
 
 
 
 
 
Masa : Par hame aisa nahi lagta , aap hamse nazere kyu chura rahi hai?( why are you stealing glances from me?)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Suhani : ( look at watch ) Masa hame der ho rahi hai , hame jana hai , Khamba Gani.( she bent & touches her mothers feets& goes from there )
 
 
 
 
 
Masa : Aap humse jarur kuch chupa rahi hai , ye baat hum jaan kar hi rehenge. (she thinking to herself) One servant come there & inform Maharani while bending his head , "Gadi aa chuki hai , aur pooja ki thal bhi taiyyar hai , chale?"
 
 
 
 
 
"Tum chalo hum aate hai" Maharani inform him, Servant abt to go when Maharani ordred him "Saara saaman gadi mai rakh do."
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum chapter manali di 

OMG ria s so scared of maharaja...

I liked d way rathore was dere for her 

Waiting to know more abt suhani 

rathore joke in starting too gud 

Continue soon