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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: swetsurati
awsomeee..promo
plzz update soon thanx for PM

Thanks sweta...will try to update soon😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: Shals9
Awesome promo. Waiting for the update.

Will you be updating 2 chapters together!! Pls pls pretty pls :-)

Thanks Shals...ill try to update both the chaps together...if not then 1 at a time😆

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: andy.a
Super promo dear
update soon

Thanks andy baby...😉...will try updatiing soon

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

Awesome yet nail bitting promo. Have a safe journey. I'm really happy for u that finally u r going home. And ha Asam se thodi time ke liye mere country mai vi a jana. Lolz i'm just kidding.

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

WOW

Amazing promo

its got me so excited

do update Asap

thanks 4 de PM

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

oh shit... that was 2 much for our der princess... something must be done fast. wat will she do, wen she comes to know that shaurya is uday?? freak... do something fast...

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Pheww!! just read ur FF in one go and its Awesome 👏 👏 👏
Awesome,superb,mindblowing,fantabulously fantastastical ⭐️ My words of appericiation are less fr ur writing skills
u did a gr8 job 👍🏼
Mai kha thi itne tym se? 🥱 Well i ws sleeping 😆shukr hai FF khtm hone k baad nhi padhi🤣
Chandralekha and shaurya (pehle toh tum naam kha se dhundti hochandralekha) Their romance and story is epic 😃
Flashback scenes are awesome 👏
Specially shaadi wala or uske baad vla part 😳 Dat part ws written beautifully (the whole FF is written beautifully bt kuch parts are really out of the world)
the gym scene ws soo hawt (mera mobile mai grmi chd gyi thi 😆 )
The cover pic is very nice 👏
Sangeeta and reeta dono kaminiyan 😡 Bt reeta ki jhand shi kri uday ne *bio teacher hoke koi itna dumb kaise ho skta hai*
Basanti HIV positive hai 😲 😆 U cracked me vaise hi basanti se mera purana naata hai pichle janam ka 😆 uday ws jealous of karan 😃

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx
Pheww!! just read ur FF in one go and its Awesome 👏 👏 👏
Awesome,superb,mindblowing,fantabulously fantastastical ⭐️ My words of appericiation are less fr ur writing skills
u did a gr8 job 👍🏼
Mai kha thi itne tym se? 🥱 Well i ws sleeping 😆shukr hai FF khtm hone k baad nhi padhi🤣
Chandralekha and shaurya (pehle toh tum naam kha se dhundti hochandralekha) Their romance and story is epic 😃
Flashback scenes are awesome 👏
Specially shaadi wala or uske baad vla part 😳 Dat part ws written beautifully (the whole FF is written beautifully bt kuch parts are really out of the world)
the gym scene ws soo hawt (mera mobile mai grmi chd gyi thi 😆 )
The cover pic is very nice 👏
Sangeeta and reeta dono kaminiyan 😡 Bt reeta ki jhand shi kri uday ne *bio teacher hoke koi itna dumb kaise ho skta hai*
Basanti HIV positive hai 😲 😆 U cracked me vaise hi basanti se mera purana naata hai pichle janam ka 😆 uday ws jealous of karan 😃

Ohhh my Godd Sana...such a big comment!!😲😲...well u brought a big smile on my face dear..😛.thanks for taking out time to read my FF...I always wanted such a story for Manveer which would be in ancient times..
sometimes I have to think a lot for unique scenesDid u like the marriage part?...wait then the grand marriage of Shaurya Chand is still there to be unfolded😉..The main story is yet to come...hope u like that too..

Basanti with HIV just came to my mind...I didn't plan before hand for that😆

Thanks for your encouraging words...now ill try to make the plot and the writing more better and will update soon...😊.

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: Jarin04
Awesome yet nail bitting promo. Have a safe journey. I'm really happy for u that finally u r going home. And ha Asam se thodi time ke liye mere country mai vi a jana. Lolz i'm just kidding.

thank you gulab jamun for liking the promo...😛...ya came home darling...but will go back and then resign...if fate wishes then will surely meet you one day sweetheart😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
oh shit... that was 2 much for our der princess... something must be done fast. wat will she do, wen she comes to know that shaurya is uday?? freak... do something fast...

Relax dear...😉...princess is going through all this becoz she has a strong connection with all her surroundings..She will know the truth for sure