Murder In Chandni Chowk SS - Part 2 on Page 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Nyc Update . Bechara Rathod...
 
thx 4 PM..
 
Plz update asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
The part 1 is awesome !!

Lol Rathore, chotu and shree are also in the undercover mission as brothers 😆😆 and they are sikhs too 🤣🤣
I love it !!

But another murder 😲😲
and the way the boy was killed is just disgusting 🤢🤢
who is that monster ???

I know I told you that your FF remind me another book, but you proved me that you have more to give us !!! It's going to be very interesting !!!

And I don't care if there is less romance, I only want a lot of suspense, thrill, and action!! And your FF is perfect !!!



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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
The part 2 is excellent !! I loved it !!

I love your style of writing !!
Poor Riya, I hope nothing will happen to her !! I know I don't need to worry when Arjun is here !!

I love Riya's character in your FF !!

Give us an update as soon as possible !!
But I understand you, my semester started today, so focus on your study first 😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Oh so he realises his behaviour towards her wasn't right and wants to apologise? But is it too late? Arjun ran towards the end f the chapter does it mean he knows or has ideas about the killer already? This is getting interesting with each passing chapter.

Great job! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
I can't wait for the next part! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
WOW! Awesome update ! 👏
The suspense is killing me ! 😆
Thanks so much for the PM <3
Hope you update soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Thanks for the pm. Loved the update. 👏 👍🏼 I am looking forward to the next part.
 
All the best with your classes. 👍🏼 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
OMG! i really hope nothing happen to riya...please keep her save! arjun has to come to her rescue! i can't wait to read the next chapter! please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

waiting for your update...plz update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved it yar...ur a gr8 writer n it's getting interesting...arjun admiring riya n her work (that too secretly...😆)) n now he z gonna save riya... can't wait for the next update..:)