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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

loved it alot...



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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: meenaveed

thanks for the pm

plz do cont soon
lovd the update but the last para was nt good na

waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will be updating tonight dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

@Hasini, after ages. Where were you ??? Missed you. What about the other work ??

Only one word, coming to my mind "HAWT", indeed. Every ounce of it. I can't have enough of them, in any way. Amazing, for sure. Me all red. Love the way he is taking care of her & she too voicing her feelings. Even the MOMs are doing wonderful. But that bit*h is a pain at my back. Everything else, brilliant. Sorry in hurry & upon that, me can express this only. Remember my PM.

Do cont soon & do Pm me.



dear final year... much work... was really hard to concentrate on the update...
but thank you so much dear...for such a lovely comments...yes i am remembering your PMs...
Love ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome beautifully written update yar



thanks a lot dear...thank you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

i know im very late but CONGRATULATIONS ON NEW THREAD!!!!


Part 15

once again.. wowww.. really loved the Maaneet intimate scene..
sooo passionate, hot and romantic..
the love they share is sooo pure and great..
Maan is so caring towards Geet.. and sooo glad to see that Rano and Maan relationship if great and Maans mother cannot wait to meet Geet and she is happy that he chose Geet to marry and cant wait to meet her..
the precap left me a little bit nervous as well.. wonder whats going to happen..



thanks a lot dear...thank you so much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Angel_fly

Sorry for late comments
Awesome update..
enjoyed each n every maaneet scene...
But i dint understand precap...
pls continue soon



thanks a lottt dear...thank you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: d_sonia

Awesome update
Loved it
Contionue soon
Eagarly waiting



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 16
After so many trials and fighting… he completed making a tasty paratha….he congratulated himself for successfully doing this…He smiled thinking how will his mishty's react to this…. He never
Went inside kitchen till now… always his mom or servants used to serve him…but today his princess has changed everything…. Being with her is like living in heaven with angel… yes she is his angel…. He wants to prepare breakfast for her every morning…. No one has the rights to even prepare food for her…. she is totally for him…. He wonders how he became so possessive on her… he knew her only for few days… not even months… in these few days she has become so much important for him…. The night he saw her for the first time was the most memorable moment… he decided that every year on that particular date he would make it very special….of course he wants to make every day every minute and every second special for her….. Yesterday's hot making out was something very close and special… way to special for his heart….the carving for being with her never dies… he wants to make love to her…. that night when he marks her as his… will be the most memorable night….
"Oh god…how I become so mad on her…. your mine geet…. you're my possession…. No one has rights on you… after yesterday's night my love on you increased to the level of infinity…. NO!! More than infinity…. I love you geet… I want to be in your life every second…. I want to keep you in my embrace every second…even this air cannot pass between us…..I love you geet more than myself… I love you…."
His thoughts were revolving around his mind and his heart to speaking to his mind… only about his geet….his mind is totally occupied… can say conquer by his geet….HIS GEET…
Sun Rays were teasing her skin….. She clumsily covered her face with the duvet… her hands tried to search for him beside her..…
But she opened her eyes to find maan missing… she got scared tensed thinking where did he go….she want to hug him and kiss him and be in his warmth…his warmth is like heaven to her..no more than heaven the most happiest place ever…she wants to breath only his aroma…suddenly her cheeks became red thinking the wild making out yesterday night…she became shy thinking the way he claimed every inch of her body marking as his…still the bit marks on her body are visible..making her face to bloom as red rose…many say it is wrong many say it is lust…but the way maan handled her is not lust but love…
He showed from his each action how much he love her..the way he decided to take care of her in her parents absence…the way he arranged this garden for their first date…the way he kissed her..The way he hugged her..Everything made her very special..she never had the feeling that she was doing wrong…she decided when she realized her feelings for maan that she only belongs to him…that minute she gave all her rights to him..her existence only for him…only for her maan…she can never think a second without her maan….she decided that she always want her morning to see the sight of his handsome face…his intense eyes….looking at her deeply giving his heavenly smile… she wanted to see him now hug him tightly….kiss him madly like never before…
So she got up from the bed in search of him…. She went inside the house… but she heard some noise in the kitchen and moved towards the kitchen to check… she found maan cooking…. Without disturbing him she quickly went to her room and brushed her teeth and came to the kitchen…
Suddenly her eyes caught the sight of parathas… she couldn't resist herself so she quickly went inside…and started to eat them…without even saying good morning to maan… he was facing the other side…. But suddenly he heard noises… he turned to see geet eating the parathas… just like a small kid….. he smiled looking at her antics.….she was enjoying fully…. Licking her lips…tasting each bit of it… suddenly she chocked….coughing badly… he broke from the trance and handed her the glass of water… making her to drink…
He panicked seeing her coughing endlessly…
Maan: Geet…are you okay?
Geet: yes…
After composing herself… she faced him…who was looking at her with full concern….
Geet: Maan…. these parathas? You did this for me?...
Maan nodded his head… she gave a broad smile….
Geet: wow maan….these are so tasty….
Maan: ummm….thanks…..
He turned to complete doing the dishes…..she smiled and stood up…moved slowly towards him… she wrapped her arms around his abs from the back….gluing her bosoms to his hard back…
Geet: I love you maan…..
This gave a cute smile on his lips…and he turned to face her…he gave a peck on her forehead…
Maan: I love you to my princess…
They hugged each other tightly….
Maan: Geet…want to eat more?
Geet: Ummm…
She answered still in his embrace….
After sometime…he broke the hug…and made her sit on the chair….while he started to prepare…..she was just looking at him with full love….adoring him fully…
After completing… he sat on the chair next to her and kept the plate on the table…she stood up and sat on his lap… wrapping her arms around his neck….he smirked looking at her… and gave a wet kiss on her cheeks…
Maan: Geet…. you don't want to eat?
She pulled him closer came near his ear…and whispered huskily..
Geet: Mr Khurana…. I want you to feed me…
He adored her by taking her face between his palms and gave a lingering kiss on her lips making her shiver with his mere touch…
Then he starts to feed her….but she stopped him in the mid and took a piece from his hands… she starts to feed him looking deeply into his eyes….both enjoyed their feeding session and finished eating….
He scooped her in his arms…and took her to her bed room and made her rest on the bed…
Maan: Geet….now get fresh.. mom said she will be coming to see you and also doctor will be coming…. One more thing… aunty called… I informed her that doc will be coming here for check up….so get ready fast…
He took her hands in his and caressed it smoothly…
Maan: Geet, I want to hear from doctor that you're totally fine…. Till then you have to take rest and you should have regular check up…. Hmmm…
She looked at him with full of happy tears…seeing her eyes wet… he got concerned…and immediately took her in his arms….
Maan: Geet…what happen?... please don't cry…
Saying this he kissed away her tears…and pecked above her eyelids….making them shut…
Geet: I love you maan…. I am so lucky to have you…
She whispered still in his embrace… he took her face in his palms….and gave a peck on her forehead…
Maan: No geet…. I am lucky to have you… you're everything to me….and your tears makes me miserable… so please don't bring these pearls….Promise…
She nodded her head saying yes….and hugged him lovingly…
Maan: So geet… get ready…mom will be here any minute…
Then she realized that she is going to meet maan's mom… fear took her smile…she looked at him scared and worried….by just looking into her deep hazels he realized that she is getting nervous of meeting his mom for first time….He smoothly caressed her face….Making her smile with his tender touch…. She looked down not able to meet his eyes…her cheeks were red as rose…. He adored her cute dimples formed as she was giving her heavenly smile…
Maan: She will not do anything….so don't be scared….and get ready fast…
Saying this he Kissed her lips and left her room…..she got up and went inside the wash room….after sometime her mobile started to ring… she was not able to answer as she was in the washroom… so maan sensed that she must in the washroom so he came up rushing to pick the phone… it was sanjay…
He enquired about geet…and her condition as he was worried… maan assured him that he will take care of her…and she will not have any trouble….Sanjay was happy to have maan as a support in this time of need…
After disconnecting the call… Sanjay decided to talk with rano regarding maan… before itself when maan was ready to take care of geet… they sensed something is between them… so they wanted to confirm with them as soon as they return…
Sanjay was happy thinking that Maan and Geet will be awesome couple…he knows that they are made for each other…just then rano entered and saw her husband smiling thinking of something..
Rano: Sanjay…. Seems you're happy about something….
Sanjay: Rano… I will be really happy if geet gets life partner like maan…
Rano smiled hearing this as she was also thinking the same…
Rano: yes sanjay…. I am also thinking about the same … let us talk with them when we return home…and am happy that geet is with maan…. I am sure he will take good care of her…..
Sanjay: Yes…I have full confidence on maan….
Saying so both smiled and hugged each other….
Meanwhile after disconnecting the call….maan was about to leave her room when he heard the washroom door open…
He turned and looked at the most beautiful sight in front of him.… she was standing in the wet form… water droplets were dripping from her wet hair and body….she was rooted at the spot seeing his intense gaze which was full of passion oozing out… their gaze met… she could see the fire in his eyes… she lowered her hazels feeling intoxicated with his gaze….she turned not able to meet his eyes…her breathing rate increased hearing his footsteps which were marching towards her…
Seeing her blush he lost his sanity…. Just her cute smile is enough for him to be aroused… now her blushing was making him crazy…he wanted to devour her right now…
He was amused at her mood… sometime she will be like a wild sherni and sometime she behaves like a cute baby….becoming all shy types…these mood swings was making his life more interesting and more colorful…a sexy smirk came to his lips… she clutched her towel tightly , which is wrapped around her as she can sense that he is almost near her…she was feeling his gaze on her back… he stood behind her… his warm breath is falling on her back…. she gasped when his hands started to roam around her curvy waist over her towel…. Then he moved his hands sensually towards her hands which was holding her towel… and pinned them on the wall over her head making her trap between him and the wall… he placed his lips on her bare back….sucking them madly….. he started to trail down sucking with his lips and licking her skin….leaving her hands and moving his hands all over her arms sensually down feeling her fully…….
She bit her lips in order to subsidize the moan… her towel started to come down …. He took the towel between his teeth and slowly pulled it down and finally pulling it hardly removing it from her body….he threw it away….he gazed at her nude form drinking the beauty with his eyes…. His lips moved down kissing all the way down…. He licked her skin and nipping her flesh with his teeth giving pain and soothing with his tongue…. His carnal assault was making her scream…he again moved up…kissing her whole back…. making it fully wet with his saliva…. He made her turn to face him….
He looked at her trembling lips..Which were inviting him to feel those pink petals in this mouth…
Without any delay… his mouth covered hers fully…. Even tasting her lips many times every time it is very sweet….and the urge of kissing her increases….
He nibbled her lips…. Sucking her nectar fully…. She started to respond the kiss…and smoothly caressing his nape… making him arouse to maximum…both their tongues entangled….tasting each corner of their mouth….his hands moved to her curves and pressed them hard with his hands… "Oh maan" sweet moans of her….which is a music to his ears… only yesterday they had almost wild love making… but their desire towards each other never fade… each time the urge to make love increases….
He was still kissing her madly… his lips moved to her neck and sucked the area…in one swift move he life her from the ground and took her to the bed... he hovered over her and he was now on top of her… he nipped her neck….biting it….. he came to her cleavage…. Biting the flesh marking them as his….
Geet:Maan please…..stop..
She tried to stop him…because anytime his mom will be there and she needs to get ready…. But he was nowhere to listen….he was busy feasting on her bosoms….sucking her globes making her difficult to speak….
Geet: Maan…. Aunty will come…please….stop…..i have to get ready…
She managed to say it in one go….her words knocked a sense in his mind…and he moved up giving a huge sigh…not wanting to move… he looked deeply into her hazels which are telling him to continue…but he himself know that he should not cross limits…and his mom will be here anytime..he don't want an embarrassing situation…he gave wet kisses on her eyes, nose, cheeks and manage to get up finally giving a small peck on her lips….she was still in his trance….his touch always makes her lose herself….she looked at him who was looking at her with full of love….he turned and left the room…Finally she stood up and got ready wearing a nice dress….it was getting late…but she didn't come down…he got worried and came inside to look if she is ready…
Meanwhile janki is on her way to geet's home… but she felt someone is following her throughout… she checked many times turning back to see… but there was no one…. But unknown to her smita is following her… smita is very careful in not getting caught and she decided to check the reason for change in behavior of janki… janki asked the driver to stop near a jewelry shope… she went inside the shop and smita followed her…
Smita stood in the corner seeing janki buying bangles….after she finished buying smita went to the person who sold the bangles and asked her if janki told her for whom she is buying…. The sales girl said that janki has brought those bangles for her daughter in law….
Hearing this smita's anger fumed…. She immediately went outside and saw janki enter her car… she also went inside her car and started to follow janki…..
"Maan you're mine…. No one can snatch you away from me….if anyone comes in between us I will snatch their lives"

Precap: She took the gun and aimed at her... then everything froze when there was sound of gun shot


Hello guys...every time i give an update i say sorry...but what to do...final year only 20 days for my final exams...it is really tough for me to concentrate on update... please guys bear with me till my exams gets over...i promise to give updates till then but it will be slow...i hope you all understand my situation...

and guys soon there will be twist...and the most major twist will come but not now...

so how is the update... please shower your love as always am happy to see increase in likes... i am really thankful to all my readers and silent readers please respond...it will be motivation for me to write soon...

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Part 15

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