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Posted: 12 years ago
This OS is so light-hearted and fun.I absoluetly love reading this.

Swayam was jealous of a kiddo,waise that kid seemed big time flirt.He kissed Sharon good night.

Jo kaam Swayam nhi kar paaya wo bacche ne kar diya.🤣
Swayam was such a cutie pie to follow Sharon till there.The luggage area scene was super cute.
Thanks for the PM's
And apologies for not commenting earlier.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum dear.. juzz loving it.. keep on updating sooner plz..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Well first of all a big Thank You to all for your love and support throughout the journey…

And secondly really Sorry for updating so late…..i know you all are waiting for so long so sorry once again….

Here's the next part enjo!!!

Part 6

After a 15 or 20 minutes Swayum reaches the place where all were….but in complete different manner….he was lost…lost means completely lost…doesn't care what goes around him, even doesn't bother to get in the discussion….his hand still resting on his cheek and was still in that magical moment……..

The gang now gets to their respective births, as they were hell tired so soon they doze off …... only two souls which were lost in their own, not feeling sleepy at least not after what had happened few minutes back…both were equally shocked in a pleasant way and feels the same restlessness…….the feeling which they could not express in words. Both of them forced to have sleepless night. Sharon leans at her birth closing her eyes….but her heart and Swayum's thought doesn't allow her to sleep. The way he being a gentleman leaves me, he could do anything if he wants to even me ready to give myself to him. She kept close her eyes tight, as if she will be able to sleep by doing this….hahaha poor Sharon. On the other hand…….

Swayum reaches to his seat (the passage one) lean backward to the partition and sat folding his knees…still lost, hand resting on his cheek smiling like an idiot. He doesn't know what to do, how to react, whom to talk. He can't even talk to Rey, How could he after all its his first ever kiss…accidently hi sahi….After trying everything which didn't work finally he got an idea to let his feeling out and to do so he picked up guitar closed his eyes and start playing a tune, the tune which describe his feelings every time; the rhythm of his life and his love …. (Here's the link guys, and plz don't comment about the vm coz I know how bad it is…made it just to provide tune) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2dkr8qF5AU&feature=player_detailpage#t=0s

As soon Swayum finished playing tune and expressed all his feelings through the wonderful tone, he open up his eyes and saw the most magical, beautiful and angelic face in front of his eyes, the face which he would prefer to see every morning, the eyes in which he lost himself every time, the elegant features, beautiful rose petal like lips, which he so wanted to touch with his own lips and her angelic smile like cherry on the cake. Altogether the sight made him to forget everything….cool breeze which is coming through the corners of the closed window made her hairs to fly on her bright shining face, Swayum raise his hand to tug a strand of hair from her face to back of her ear, but soon his action made him back to reality….the angelic face which he was admiring for so long was no more in front of his eyes………..yes he was hallucinating her!!!

"God Swayum yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe" Swayum in all frustration "you love her from the very first day of collage, but haven't felt like this before….is Vicky's theory of kiss is correct!!!...kya sach me kiss se….jo ki emotion hai for me always, hota hai pyaar me promotion!!" for the first time in life Swayum is confused…..sometime something happens for the first time in life….and Swayum experiencing the same.

Meanwhile Sharon who tried hard to sleep….mesmerized with the tune, which became a part of her life….in fact part of her love life. The tune which made her understood his feelings as well as her own feelings….

pehla nasha pehla khumar,

naya pyaar hai naya intezaar

Yes her first love,

Her first feelings of being crazy for someone…

Someone who made her realize….

What love is, with his pure, honest, innocent and unconditional love.

Usne baat ki kuch aise dhang se,

Sapne de gaya wo hazaaro rang ke

Every time his eyes much louder than his voice,

Which convey his feelings, his love for her.

And now it's her a routine to dream life with him,

He is the only one for her,

Reh jaun jaise main haar ke,

Aur chume wo mujhe pyaar se

The diva, the rose queen, the best dancer….

Feels herself lost in front of him

How much she wishes to feel his touch on her.

As soon the rhythm of love stop showering on her ear she open her eyes and witnessed her love Swayum lost in her dream,

"awwwe how cute he looks when he lost in me" Sharon in mind "Swayum the only who understands me, who care for me, who always know what I want, who respect my feelings, never ever try to impose himself or his love on me, he is the perfect gentleman and I guess the only one who can handle me and accept me the way I am with all my faults…..god….. I don't know….main tumhe bata bhi paungi ya nahi…. I love you Swayum…"Sharon starring and smiling at his cute expressions which occur after coming back to earth.

Swayum stood up goes to the door opens it holds the bar and feels the cool rush of the wind on his face……..

i hope you liked it...!!!!

Ok guys to know what happens with Swayum and Sharon stay tune to Swaron in Village….till than good bye and do take care of yourself.

And now the important one…..

Pyaari behno aur unke handsome bhaiyon…..niche aapko ek LIKE BUTTON dikhai de raha hoga…to kripa kar use dabne ka kasht kare aura apke bahumulya tippaniyon ki bhi suvidha uplabh hai to is seva ka bhi labh uthaye aur apni man ki bhavnaye muje likh bhejiye…….

Apke intezaar me….Luvsd3..Dhanywaad!!!

Edited by Luvsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was serene. This update has a picturesque quality to it. Loved how you have described the state of heart and mind of both Swayam and Sharon. The guitar, the sleepless night, the dream, the smile, the confusion. This update has almost everything. One of the most the most satisfying an pleasing update I have read. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope.all of you received pm's if not than plz remind me...
thanks himani
Edited by Luvsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update Himani.
The emotions that came rushing in both Swayam and Sharon beautifully written. The feeling of first love and the first kiss is sure dreamy and not easy to brush off. The guitar part with Swayam closing his eyes and then thinking of Sharon was nice. Looking forward to the next update.
Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally u updated himu...uff tere update k intezaar mein hum sab buddhe hi ho jayenge 😳

Hayee kya update tha...SwaRon lost in each others thoughts n their 1st kiss 😳

I loved how u have described the whole atmosphere...n the way u have penned down their emotions just adds to the beauty of the whole situation 😊

I loved that guitar part n the way u connected the lyrics with her emotions was superb 😊

I'm desperately waiting for the next update, don't take much time posting it...its a request plzzz *puppy face*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Their emotions were beautifully described
Loved it
Update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's awesome Himu...:* you portrayed both Swayam n Sharon's emotions very well...^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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