Abhiya ss:Ur love is my salvation*ch-8pg:24*1/7/13 - Page 7

Very nice dear ,missing piya ...hope next chapter piya will enter

ohh yar the last 2 chappy were awsome
u didnt pm me the 2 chappy u did pm me 3 chappy so thats y comment nae kiya tha us pe
but seriously yar its really too emotional and touchy in its very dept
u write its really well
loved the way abhay granny loved him and how whole family sad the lose of akshay
waiting for abhiya meeting
cont soon
do pm me

Woaaa superb dear, but really it was emotional. I can understand chand's pain and both abhay and chand are correct in their own way. Loved kabir abhay fight and jay's frndship with them, nice trio. That akshay abhay part was too touchy, poor abhay he miss her bro a lot, and so does the whole family. Now update asap and once more superb update dear. U did a amazing job.

Wow This is Really Amazing yaar:-) i like Abhay Kabeer and jey's friendship:-) superb:-) I jus love it:-):-) plz cont..

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Thanks all of u 4 ur words of appreciation n encouragement🤗.
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********** CHAPTER-04 *********

KASOL VILLAGE,DISTT. KULLU,H.P:

It was another pleasant morning 4 d villagers of Kasol.Beautiful scenery of nature,situated amidst d green hills,everything so cool,calm n fresh like everyday far away from d noise of d city.A soothing cool morning breeze is blowing which is rejuvenating d senses of all d inhabitants of d village.There is so much calm n silence which is disturbed at times by d chirping of birds n d start of daily routine work of villagers.
School children are hurrying 4 d school which is at a distance of 5km from d main village.Elder ones will catch d bus from d village bus stop while younger ones r being accompained by their fathers or elder bros 2 d school.
Farmers have left their homes 4 their fields as usual.
Women of d houses r busy cleaning their homes.Some r cleaning n dusting d interiors while others r busy with d courtyard of d houses.
Some women r also accompanying their husbands n sons 2 d fields.
Milkmen r milking d Cows while some have already started their journey 2wards d town 4 selling milk.
There is a sound of chirping of birds,Cows calling n some vehicles like scooters n bikes n of course tractors in d fields.
It s d time when young girls of d village go 2 d nearby spring 2 bring drinking water while those who have Tap connections in their homes r spared from bringing heavy utensils filled with water from d distance.
Like every day a group of young girls carrying buckets n pots r on their way 4 bringing water from Son nada(name of d spring or natural water source).some girls r chatting about home affairs n giggling with d others while some r talking about d latest movie they saw n while some r walking silently.
All d girls r dressed in colourful Salwar kameez with a special arrangement of dupatta on their heads(i.e dupatta is tied on d back of d head).
While all d girls were busy chatting with each other a voice caught their attention"Piya...Piya...Ruk na!".D group of d girls turned around 2 see d source of d voice 2 find a sharp featured girl with straight black hair running towards them.They all roll their eyes n resume walking while one girl who was walking silently with them in fact behind the group till now stopped n turned around.
God must have created her in spare time.If anyone sees her d only word if any one is even able 2 speak is Heavenly! That too with a sigh!.She has long beautiful curly hair some of d tendrils r falling on her 4head while some are covering her ears rest r tied backwards,a natural blush is there on her milky cheeks n most importantly those big dark brown baby like innocent eyes slightly darkened with d Kajal.As soon as she saw her fren her soft rosy lips broke into a breathtaking smile n she said while showing fake anger,"Maya,tum phir late ho gayi na.Tumhen pata hai na mujhe kitne kaam hote hain.Ek yahi time to hai jab hum mil sakte hain" in a cute calm sweet voice.Maya gestured while touching her ears"sorry".Piya just shook her head n said,"OK OK ab chal,tera to Roz ka drama hai".
They resumed walking together.Maya said,"you will not ask me why i was late".Piya innocently "why?".Maya answered with enthusiasm,"U know wat my bro has agreed 4 my admission in d college.I can't believe i will be continuing my studies n will go 2 d town 4 achieving my bachelor's degree dat too as soon as this year session starts!".Her eyes sparkeld with d dreams.
Piya noticed it n said" u r really lucky!"with a smile dat did not reach her eyes.Maya immediately understood,("Piya was d topper of d village school in 12th bt cudn't cntinue her studies further due 2 her cruel mama n mami as they want her 2 get married soon n get rid of her")n in order 2 lighten d mood she said chirping,"piya, didn't u noticed my hair style.I hav got them cut(step cutting) from d Vandana di's parlour.Why don't u get ur hair styled?"
piya as if noticed now,"oh wow! They look Bful n add 2 ur charm.
AFA i m concerned i love my long hair n i m never gonna cut them"n was lost in thoughts.
Maya said,"Hmmm girl is dreaming abt
her prince charming;u know na boys like long hair"while teasing piya.
Piya hit her wid her elbow n said,"u r too much! n u know dat i m not dat type of gal" n thought sadly,"I know this is just a dream n will remain a dream n one day will get lost with my death.I wish i could do at least one thing with my wish in my life.I hav lost my parents,my childhood,my right n wish 4 higher studies n i can't even count my how many dreams dat got crushed when my mami mamu announced dat they wud be getting me married soon"Tears started springing in her Bful eyes bt she now knows how 2 control them,quickly composed herself n smiled.

Part two posted below...

Continued from above...
RAILWAY STATION,MUMBAI.

Abhay had just come out of d train carrying one bag in his right hand n other over d shoulders n was standing looking 4 d known faces dat were nowhere 2 be seen.He hadn't expected dat his father or mother will come 2 receive him bt he certainly had expected his dadi 2 come.He gave a quick glance again 2 d crowd just 2 make sure if they were really not there n suddenly he saw d face dat he was waiting 2 see;his Gmother.
He literally ran 2wards her,at d same time Rajeshwari who had come with Alina in her car with a driver also got d glimpse of her lovely Gson,she burst into d tears n opened her arms 4 him.Abhay threw his bags on d ground n pulled her into a bone crushing hug n while in tears said in a choking voice"dadi i missed u sooo much".Rajeshwari was overwhelmed with joy of meeting her Gson,she too sobbed n hugged him back.After some time both broke d hug n she cupped his face n kissed him on his 4head n cheeks n said,"Tu abhi tak bada nahi hua,Tears don't suit d Army officers"Abhay smiled,Rajeshwari wiped his tears n looked longingly at him as if trying 2 find out d diff b/w Abhay of 4 years back n now.Just then a flash of Baby Abhay came in front of her eyes.She thought"He has grown into a handsome boy n This Army uniform never looked soo good."She made a black mark of kajal behind his ears.
Abhay frowned,"dadi,i m not a child now!".Rajeshwari smiled n said,"U will always be my little Abby no matter how elder u grow n what heights u achieve in ur career.Let s go home".
Meanwhile Alina was seeing all this with teary eyes n when Rajeshwari said about going home,she was shocked dat no one paid her attention.She pouted,"someone else is also present here" n crossed her arms around her chest.
Abhay who was brought back from emotional land by this chirpy voice now noticed a girl with dadi n blurted,"OMG Alina is it u?".Dadi smiled.
Abhay said with wide eyes,"Where r ur thick glasses n those ugly braces not 2 4get those 2 chotis?"
Alina narrowed her eyes,"ugly braces hun!".Abhay,"no no no, I mean u look Bful,so different,college ka Asar ho gaya!"
Alina blushed n smiled shyly n finally said 2 Abhay,"Didn't u missed me Abhay?,I, i mean we all missed u soo much". Abhay hugged her tightly which came as a surprise 2 Alina n said,"Not at all".Alina quickly broke d hug as his touch was sending a totally different feelings inside her heart n said showing d fake anger,"U hav not changed at all.I will not talk 2 u.".
Abhay while giving his characteristic smirk which can make every gal go weak in her knees,"No one can change Abhay Raichand.U will nt talk 2 me,try it,trust me u can't remain silent dat 2 widout talking 2 me even 4 a sec MISS ALIEN(stressing on last words)". Alina's jaw dropped listening 2 this name as he still remembered it.She said "don't call me dat MR. VAMPIRE".Abhay,"At least Vampires r gorgeous".Alina was about 2 answer bt Rajeshwari who was listening 2 their cute convo till now suddenly said,"Phir shuru ho gaye tum dono.Saari baatein yahan hi kar loge kya,ghar chalo".
Then they all sat in their car n drove 2 d home.

RAICHAND MANSION:

Raichand mansion was lavishly decorated 4 d arrival of its only light.Every arrangement has 2 be perfect n was perfect.Guests had started coming.Abhay's school frens Tanushree,Aryan,Angad,Ruhi were already there n were instructed by Haseena 2 see if everything is OK.
Haseena was pacing here n there n was impatiently waiting 2 see her son's face.She was looking at d gates every now n then.
Chand was sitting calmly on d sofa with expressionless face bt inside he was too excited 4 his son's arrival.

INSIDE D CAR:
Rajeshwari was sitting on d back seat with Abhay's head in her lap,carressing his silky hair.Whole journey from Railway Station 2 d Raichand Mansion was spent talking about small things.Alina who was sitting on d front seat was glancing every now n then backwards,listening 2 their talk n smiling 2 herself.As soon as they reached in front of Alina's house,Rajeshwari gestured something 2 Alina n she nodded in response.Alina said,"achha Abhay mein apne ghar chalti hun.Dadi please mujhe yahin par utaar do".Rajeshwari nodded.Abhay was surprised Alina who used 2 see horror n supernatural movies with him till late night at his house is leaving so early 2 her own house n dadi didn't even insist her 2 stop.Strange!
As soon as car stopped in front of her house,Alina got out of d car n quickly phoned Haseena dat Abhay has arrived n u must switch off d lights now n hurried 2wards her room 2 dress 4 d party.
As soon as d in4mation reached d Raichand Mansion,all lights were switched off as per d plan.
Car stopped inside d boundary wall of d mansion n Rajeshwari along with Abhay came out.
Abhay was disappointed dat his parents didn't even bother 2 wait 4 him n slept so early.D longing of seeing his home after so much time changed into disappointment.
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Continued from above...

Abhay stood there gazing his home.he had thought that no doubt his parents were not happy with his decision of joining d Army n don't talk 2 him bt they still love him."They didn't even miss me.They didn't even considered it imp 2 meet or at least see me after such a long time n slept early".He thought.
Rajeshwari sensed his sadness n felt pity 4 him.Bt she said,"Abhay yahin khare rahoge kya? Andar nahin chalna?"
Abhay, as if in daze"Ye..yes dadi.let s go".
As soon as they entered d mansion all d lights were switched on,on d front it was written with multiple lights"WELCOME HOME" n there was sudden bursting of balloons with a collective shout"SURPRISE!"...



Chapter 4 updated.I know it was boring n very bad as i m nt at all satisfied wid it.Bt still please do read n tell me where shud i improve.I m really very very sorry if it didn't come 2 ur expectations.
Another thing Abhiya meeting will be in next update.

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