Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Wow ananya! π
wondeful ending..ππΌ
i am really sorry for being late!
i just read the first edited part and the last too!
both were awesome...i loved how sharon kept swayam's image in his hands throughout the night..and even while talking to rey! π³
swayam in tuxedo!
the whole swaron convo was adorable and funny too! π³sharon did all those things that swayam did!!
swayam likes physics!! poor sharon!! π
an awesome update from an truly awesome writer! βοΈ
keep writing more! π
Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
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unresANANYA π€the last part was amazing !!beautifully written πthe sharon and reys convo was really nice and that talk was the final push sharon required to accept her true feelings for swayam.πthe emtions of sharon when she got to know that swayam is back was very well described.totally loved sharons confession and it was fantastically written .βΊοΈintotal this was an awesome os ananya.πthanks for the PM.will be waiting for ur future works on swaron...
tanuka,my bestie π€i'm glad you liked it.i had a hard time writing the confession..! your comment means a-lot to me!
Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
RES for now. Going out now..will soon edit it π³
Ananya beautifully written my gal ππΌThe starting part with Rey and Sharon's convo was effectively written, though Rey did not say much, he gave the final push Sharon needed. The moment she gets to know he is back, all the emotions that rushed through her were beautifully put and i like how close to reality it is knowing Sharon would react the same way. She creating the same environment to finally open her heart to him was a nice touch. and then the confession was the best..very true to both Swayam and Sharon as an individual character. Loved all the lil touch you gave, about the camera,his hair even the ice cream part and newtons 3rd law. And yeah i like physics too π³Super awesome OS βοΈ
thank you so much,sudha. i tried my best and am glad you liked it. well,i like physics too. sometimes studies are fun.
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UNRESI liked the initial ShaRey bonding. Rey did his bit to make her realize (But we know she was aware of this fact). But Rey made her confess. Good job done there.The kind of emotional turmoil she had there , beautifully described. Sharon then making arrangements to tell him her feelings was nicely done. You nicely got reference of flowers there, considering the use of same in actual scene!! But of course in different context. Then the way she said how she missed him was again beautiful.Good job Ananya!!PS: Swayam's fav subject is physics. He is a genoius thenπ
he sure is a genius...our geek-swayam.thank you for the comment.
thank you
hey anannya π
itna bada ek sath grt he ji...
me jyada nai likh sakti & wo bhi itna sara ek hi waqt pe & wo bi itna interesting...π
u were amazing...loved whole d update...whole d part as swayam once told dat iss baar 1st step wo legi & u did it with whole love .
just love whole d moment & update,πππΌ love it
ππΌ & dis for u & ur brilliant update
wow ...awesome OS... sharon confessed to swayam in the same surroundings ..same decoration ... normal cam se pic click karna ...not using digi -cam ...kyuki wo uske pics kisi se share nehi karna chahti ...swayam as Tom Cruise π..3rd law of motion ..amazing thought ...such a sweet ending ...loved it ...πππ
I just reread the edited version of the first chapter and the second chapter !! All I can say is WOW !! I could really feel Sharon's pain and I love the way you made her confess her feeling in a way where she told him everything but she was still Sharon the Diva by making her say random things that she did to remember him !! Totally agree that Newton's 3rd law suits SwaRon very well !!
Originally posted by: coolsameera
AWESUM OS THANX FR PMπSHARON QUITE AMAZING IN UR OS
Originally posted by: ---Priya---
ananya this was fab... you have written it beautifully..
SwaRon convo part, where sharon was telling him what she felt, was amazing... i think i laughed when i read some parts. i felt like crying when i read some...awesome awesome end...finally SwaRon back together π³
fineshπ
just awesome
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