Originally posted by: EmraanFanatic
Aww, beautiful <3 Loved Sia Krish poem. That second paragraph, just amazing !
Thanks Siddhi π€ ... Glad that you loved it... and that you let me know which lines struck a cord with you. π
Originally posted by: EmraanFanatic
Aww, beautiful <3 Loved Sia Krish poem. That second paragraph, just amazing !
Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice
The seventh wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my Sis Divs π€Sis π€
Wish Penny put in by Divs : Siya-Krish relationship
I so so badly wanted to draw your penny at the end π...π
But my own love for Siya and Krish overpowered my resolve and here is your wish...
...Hope you like it π
Avi credited to: sidra2007
Life had been mean to me...
Left me devoid of goal;
With no one here to hold on to...
I had no one to console.
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Just when I was sinking deep...
My angel you reached my soul;
And then I knew you were God sent...
For my heart you did cajole.
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In you I saw what I had lost...
A son, I would call my own;
And so I guess we were bound...
By this unique bond unknown.
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I promise you oh little one...
A word that I shall keep;
I'll be there when you call for me...
Be it uphill climb or valley deep.
***
No danger would befall you...
For in its way I shall stay;
If you should someday falter...
I shall carry you along the way.
***
The days will turn to months...
And then the months to years;
I shall watch you grow...
And help you fight your fears.
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Someday if you get lost...
While finding your life's own way;
Just tun around and find me...
I'll be a stone's throw away.
***
All these moments oh little one...
The future may unfold;
You'll always be my little son...
If the heart's truth is ever told.
***
And I have to thank sidra2007 here... for the wonderful avi π.Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets ... It will propel me to write further π
Originally posted by: flutterby
wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line... this is for u and this is for ur mehnat that u put into fulfilling all our wishes
Originally posted by: _dkmystery_
π€ π€ lovely yaar, sis!!! awesome... so sorry for the late reply but u know the reason π³
that son part brought tears(not teachers π π) to my eyes... I remembered the 1st time Sia comes to know of the name 'krishna' and how she remembers her unborn child and how krish becomes a part of her life!
n I'm listening to this song while posting reply so it's here for u:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p830G-Z1ayk[/YOUTUBE]
Originally posted by: flutterby
wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line... this is for u and this is for ur mehnat that u put into fulfilling all our wishes
Originally posted by: flutterby
@tina_1983... i didnt write the poem!! π² sneha did !!! meine toh sirf thode emoticons dale.. π
Originally posted by: iqbalslover
wow each and every word is amazing
Sneha loved your poem. Too good. I wii miss this trio.
Originally posted by: Tina_1983
Its a beautiful job you have done with this poem... Really feel glad to have read it... Keep up the great work.. π
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