**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EmraanFanatic

Aww, beautiful <3 Loved Sia Krish poem. That second paragraph, just amazing !



Thanks Siddhi πŸ€— ... Glad that you loved it... and that you let me know which lines struck a cord with you. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


The seventh wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my Sis Divs πŸ€—

Sis  πŸ€—

Wish Penny put in by Divs  : Siya-Krish relationship

I so so badly wanted to draw your penny at the end 😈...πŸ˜†


But my own love for Siya and Krish overpowered my resolve and here is your wish...
...Hope you like it πŸ˜‰


Avi credited to:    sidra2007




Life had been mean to me...
Left me devoid of goal;
With no one here to hold on to...
I had no one to console.

***

Just when I was sinking deep...
My angel you reached my soul;
And then I knew you were God sent...
For my heart you did cajole.

***

In you I saw what I had lost...
A son, I would call my own;
And so I guess we were bound...
By this unique bond unknown.

***

I promise you oh little one...
A word that I shall keep;
I'll be there when you call for me...
Be it uphill climb or valley deep.

***

No danger would befall you...
For in its way I shall stay;
If you should someday falter...
I shall carry you along the way.

***

The days will turn to months...
And then the months to years;
I shall watch you grow...
And help you fight your fears.

***

Someday if you get lost...
While finding your life's own way;
Just tun around and find me...
I'll be a stone's throw away.

***

All these moments oh little one...
The future may unfold;
You'll always be my little son...
If the heart's truth is ever told.

***


And I have to thank  sidra2007  here... for the wonderful avi  πŸ‘.

Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets ... It will propel me to write further πŸ˜‰



πŸ€— πŸ€— lovely yaar, sis!!! awesome... so sorry for the late reply but u know the reason 😳
that son part brought tears(not teachers πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†) to my eyes... I remembered the 1st time Sia comes to know of the name 'krishna' and how she remembers her unborn child and how krish becomes a part of her life!

n I'm listening to this song while posting reply so it's here for u:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p830G-Z1ayk[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by _dkmystery_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow each and every word is amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sneha loved your poem.  Too good.  I wii miss this trio.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flutterby

wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 

Its a beautiful job you have done with this poem... Really feel glad to have read it... Keep up the great work.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
@tina_1983... i didnt write the poem!! πŸ˜² sneha did !!! meine toh sirf thode emoticons dale.. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_


πŸ€— πŸ€— lovely yaar, sis!!! awesome... so sorry for the late reply but u know the reason 😳
that son part brought tears(not teachers πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†) to my eyes... I remembered the 1st time Sia comes to know of the name 'krishna' and how she remembers her unborn child and how krish becomes a part of her life!

n I'm listening to this song while posting reply so it's here for u:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p830G-Z1ayk[/YOUTUBE]



Awww πŸ€—
Haan yaar pata hai mujhe tere gumshuda hone ka raaz πŸ˜†...Main yunhi thode na kehti hoon ki tu meri Sis hai πŸ˜ƒ.

Sahi mein yaar ... I too had tears in my eyes when I was pennng it down... n tu ye " teachers in my eyes" kab chodegi???... manal tujhe kha jayegi πŸ˜†

Ahhh Sujata... kya gaane the re... Love you for this Sis πŸ€—

jalate hai jisake liye, teri aankho ke diye
likhti jaungi vahi, poems mai tere liye

πŸ€—



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flutterby

wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 




Awww Flutter πŸ€—
Your words and emoticon surely lift my spirits πŸ˜ƒ

Glad that you found the poem befitting Sia-Krish relations..

Well here me sending your way all the jhappis pending from so long

πŸ€—..raised to the power of n.



Originally posted by: flutterby

@tina_1983... i didnt write the poem!! πŸ˜² sneha did !!! meine toh sirf thode emoticons dale.. πŸ˜‰



Flutter πŸ€—.. tere emoticon hain hi itne cutey cute... they add the needed zing to my wishing well πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbalslover

wow each and every word is amazing



Thanks meri Rabdi... πŸ€—... glad u found it amazing πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: april10

Sneha loved your poem.  Too good.  I wii miss this trio.



Thanks Shivu πŸ€—... for loving it πŸ˜‰... and about missing the trio... that thought sends me to the gloomy dungeons


Originally posted by: Tina_1983

Its a beautiful job you have done with this poem... Really feel glad to have read it... Keep up the great work.. πŸ‘



Thanks Tina πŸ€—.. glad that u found it worthwhile. πŸ˜ƒ