*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
No hurry.Take your time. πŸ€—

You're almost done with the book?Liked it? πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: disha15

No hurry.Take your time. πŸ€—


You're almost done with the book?Liked it? πŸ˜ƒ


I LOVED Meluha ☺️ ☺️ Im living that book yaar not just reading Ask Kjo to sign me as Sati na πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
Throughout I imagined myself with Hrithik 🀣 🀣

Naga abhi chall rahi hai πŸ˜‰ achchi hai πŸ˜ƒ But Meluha was epic ☺️
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I truly loved Meluha. 

Thats why i had asked you to read it.It was imply epic <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was an awesome update as usual πŸ˜Š

I really see Dhruvi nd Prithvi in my mind and is just because of ur fabulous writing skills πŸ‘  πŸ‘

So it means both r heartbroken πŸ’” and now they very well aware of their intense feelings for each other β€οΈ

But i really don't don't want that Advait & Maya anymore in this story... πŸ˜‘

Do continue soon and Luv u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubhika124


I LOVED Meluha ☺️ ☺️ Im living that book yaar not just reading Ask Kjo to sign me as Sati na πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
Throughout I imagined myself with Hrithik 🀣 🀣

Naga abhi chall rahi hai πŸ˜‰ achchi hai πŸ˜ƒ But Meluha was epic ☺️


Hey even i am thinking of reading it after I finish with d current one

do tell me is it wowww kind of book??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Disha 😲 tu bhi rtmc ff likhti ha? Mujhe to patai nehi tha chal koi nehi ab to pata chal geya to pehle se start karni paregi pura khatam karke comment karungi btw dhruvi & prithvi nice name tujhe pata ha mayne apne ff mein rtmc ko prithvi & chandni name dia ha tune parha? Kaisa tha 1st part?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@parineeta : its fiction.based on lord shiva :) 

i have been a big mytho fan all my life..so had read the book last year..and towards the end of the year..Devon ke dev mahadev strtd in life ok..so i became a bigger shiva bhakt :D and yeah,i had mentiond thsi book to a bunch of my DKDMian frnds...so as shubhi also is a big DKDM fan,so she has read the 1st part and now she is in the 2nd one :) 

I truly loved the book,but yeah,peopel compare indian authors with foreign ones,so that time,yeah standard lowers :/ though my favourite authors are all firangi (rofl) i really liked meluha by amish :)  so,yeah,for a mytho fan,it will be a delight :)  


@arpita : hey thanks!and and so sorry..i couldn't find the time :( but i will asap,pakka promise! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

It was an awesome update as usual πŸ˜Š


I really see Dhruvi nd Prithvi in my mind and is just because of ur fabulous writing skills πŸ‘  πŸ‘

So it means both r heartbroken πŸ’” and now they very well aware of their intense feelings for each other β€οΈ

But i really don't don't want that Advait & Maya anymore in this story... πŸ˜‘

Do continue soon and Luv u.


awww thank you! <3 

and yeah love seems to be making its way πŸ˜³

Advait and Maya,well they play an important role in Dhruvi's past,so i'll have to include them here and there πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its ok disha take ur time 😊
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wow...dat was amzng!!! πŸ‘
truly luvd it!! πŸ˜ƒ
Prithvi n Dhra noe each othr SO well!!! πŸ˜†
he came 2 c her "again" πŸ˜‰coz he knew she wuldnt b able 2 sleep othrwise...awww...πŸ˜ƒ
dose lines were superb!!! "u r mine..n nobody plays wid wats mine"⭐️
wow...luvd it!!! his protectvnss n poessiveness...πŸ‘
dis charactr suits Rajaat perfectly!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
n d staring session was thoroughly njoyd by me...😳
Prithvi lying beside her...πŸ˜†
bday gift mein Prithvi chahiye...well doesnt evry1 want him!!!πŸ˜‰
luvd it...
b...u..t..
ye kya Advait ki re entry!!!😲
he doesnt seem 2 b very baad...as in he did care 4 her...but den y did he do all DAT 2 her??πŸ˜•
ye Maya kon hai?? i thought he had time-pass wid Dhruvi(not Dhra..)
puri story kya hai???😲
he seems 2 b grey not all black...
dis is geting very intrstng...continue soon...is se pehele ke ye mystry hamein pagal kar de...πŸ˜†
luv ur writing...every scene n emotion is well potrayd ...πŸ‘
luv u...πŸ€—
P.S even i luvd d Mehula book...πŸ˜ƒ..havnt read secret of d Nagas ..yet...πŸ˜”