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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Continue soon .. loved your story .. its interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww it's awesome loved it 👏
thank u 4 d pm 🤗
cont soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
its very nice...pls continue it...good work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar i just love ur I MA SORY OICS it s just so beautiful an dheart touching ki maafi kya jaan hi le lo ausumn cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi12345

yaar i just love ur I MA SORY OICS it s just so beautiful an dheart touching ki maafi kya jaan hi le lo ausumn cont soon


Thanks yaar
ise leye ache sorry pics post karte hoon taka mafi ke sath jaan bhe le loon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww manvi lecturing virat...n virat trying to romance..

small bt nyc update...

thanx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was assmmm👍🏼
continue soon
thanx 4 the pm😍
pm me nxt time too
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Virman came downstairs Virat was wearing a white kurta and Manvi was wearing a white Anarkali dress

Virat's kurta:

Manvi's dress: Urmila Matondkar in classic white

They went out of vadera mention and found the whole place full of colurs.As they walked furthur Manvi found a familiar figure standing.She went up to him/her and tapped on his/her sholder.As the person tured around.She found it was no one other than her brother dabbu.

Dabbu:MANVI DEE!!!!!!!!(almost shouting)

MANVI:DABBU(souting with same force)

Dabbu:Manvi dee i missed u so much.

MAnvi:i missed u dabbe

Dabbu:plz stop calling me dabba i'm going to be an uncle soon.(in a teasing mood)

Manvi blushed and Virat stand behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist.She turned around and found his chep standing behind her

Dabbu:Ur giong to be a Father Congratulations Virat bhiya i mean jiju(again in a teasing mood)

Manvi now had enough of Dabbu teasing and said

Manvi:im not giong to leave u dabbu

and starts running after dabbu as they were running Jeevika pulled Manvi towars her and make her to stand infront of pinky Chachi,Madan chachu,beeji and bari beeji.She hugged everyone and every one congrats Virat&Manvi.They were having a lot of fun

(u can imagine manvi in place of jeevika in this picture )

Every one was enjoying unware of an evil eye which was on our beloved couple virman.This was no one other then Maya.

Maya in her thoughts

Maya:Who is that middle class girl with my Virat.She looks like a beggers in front of Virat.I have to do some thing.An idea poped in her evil mind.She ordered a servent to bring Virat into a cornor.At first he rejected but when maya gave him some money he quickly agreed.He went up to Virat and said

Servent:Sir some one is calling u

Virat: i'm coming.

He went to manvi and said

Virat:sweetheart i'm coming some one is calling me

Manvi:okey

He looked around and quickly kissed Manvi's cheek and ran away.

Maya who saw the whole seen was fuming with anger .She thought

Maya:I just want to kill that third class girl.How could he kiss her.He never kiss me like this.


I updated a very long part today and my fingers are hurting now thanks for reading

precap:

Manvi:Virat u tried to kill ur own child.

Virat:No manvi i didn't do that its all maya fault i don't now to describe it.

Manvi:No need to descride.OKEY

She ran away crying

Love u all

Sorry For the late update.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it 😊 please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Hate Maya so much, wonder what she's up too! Thanx for the pm :)

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