IPKKND - Wretched Love - Note pg. 18 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Chocolate...

lol sorry to freak you out it's just i got a break after so long i was in a relaxing coma😆

not too bad, hbu?

 

Originally posted by: asdfjkl

Sorry, I was just really bored and that led to impatience haha, but I'm glad you got to relax.

but Yay! you gave an update and thanks for the pm. Though the mystery of Khushi is still there, it was nice to read an Arhi-filled chapter. They're both going to try and avoid each other, but we all know how well that's going to go. They always get thrown together.

It's funny how even though Khushi knows Anjali best, everyone bailed and Arnav was the one to treat her. See, they're already stuck with each other hahaha

Loved Mami/Nani/Mama dialogues, they are so funny

Don't apologize I wrote this updt just for u. I love it when ppl ask for an updt it gets me going.

Well the mystery is most of the story. It shall be revealed in due time and it is what Khushi has to overcome to make her relationship with Arnav work out.

Anyways yay I agree why do they avoid each other? So pointless right? Yup everyone is too curious about khushi and i think it adds to the fact that know one truely knows her. that's why in the updt b4 this I wrote abt Anjali's character being spoilt and annoying according to Khushi. Tho she is sweetheart she has dumb tendencies but Khushi loves her nonetheless. You know how it is with besties, I can tell u right now there r times when I wanna beat my bff to pulp for being so stupidly annoying.

This is why I love you. I really do, if u were a guy I cud kiss u. Srsly don't mind I say stupid things when m happy. So anyways I love you for noticing that. Srsly with the Arhi moments I didn't think anyone wud pick up on that whole Nani/mami/mama thing but u did so muah! I like using them to just break up things a little. it's kinda interesting u don't realize they have importence till I write abt them playing cupid to be like 'Wat r they gunna do?' and now use them to throw the audience off once I mention them ppl wud automatically assume that now the story will include everyone but nope I bring back just Arhi so they are used to be a break between two different moments. Edited by Chocolate... - 11 years ago

oh I love this FF.. Khushi is Alpha female...love her character.. and oh Arnav... I love the way he called 'Sweetheart" he is getting to her.. slowly-by-slowly.., great update... Keep up the good work... 

I really like this... Great update-wa!!!

Keep writing,
-V

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish

oh I love this FF.. Khushi is Alpha female...love her character.. and oh Arnav... I love the way he called 'Sweetheart" he is getting to her.. slowly-by-slowly.., great update... Keep up the good work... 

thank u

Hiii Nikki
Awesome update
Loved it
Sooo happy it was all ArHi
Sooo cute
Loved fa caring Arnav
Sweet
Khushi is falling 4 Arnav
Awww
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: Khushi4Arnav

I like .. I like...  👏

Don't worry about how many comments or likes you get.. Coz this is an appealing story and once you have stability and intensity growing with each update.. people will come around and appreciate it...

I have always admired works where denial and acceptance go hand in hand and yours is just THAT...

Plus your way of writing is Nice. So keep writing. You're GOOD 👍🏼

awww thanx

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii Nikki
Awesome update
Loved it
Sooo happy it was all ArHi
Sooo cute
Loved fa caring Arnav
Sweet
Khushi is falling 4 Arnav
Awww
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Great start, just on part 2 but have 3 more to go...sent u a request please accept and pm me.

Loved it, love this turmoil that is going to take place ...them battling their feelings for each other...