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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#701

You were right about him doing an unforgivable act. There really is no way around this.

I really appreciate that you have managed to keep the story unpredictable to this point. The narration and the flashbacks are very gripping.

Frankly speaking, the choice of cast is disappointing.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Wow what an update ...very heartbreaking ...omg akash has no soul ...continue soon...

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Zana

@PastelBeauty

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

OH MY FRIKKING GOD!! He's sick! To kill all those children!
Nicely written! 😊

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dingle

@dingle

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

I never ever would have predicted such a shocking twist :S

youre right, this action has made Akash un-redeemable. And it would have done something to damage Khushis psyche? Bloody hell!

Brilliant story... but traumatic chapter

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

A very intense and disturbing chapter.

Akaash is ruthless and i dont blame the others for being petrified of him. Poor NK he didn't get away and now i understand why he was so panicked. Akaash is f**ked up.

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preetijaiswal19

@preetijaiswal19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Omggg...Akash is a psycho...poor kids...poor Payal...so want to know what happens next!

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#707

i think i am going to have nightmares after this chapter..having two small children myself!

thank you for not making it more gory... i am still going to read it as its a fascinating story!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Hey!

I'm having to think hard after reading this ... but what I can say is that Aakash, well isn't fit to be called a human and that is just plainly putting it nicely. Innocent children being killed right infront of their mother. Horrendous. 😡😡

Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 13 years ago