~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF - Page 6

Yay Yay I love the family conversation at the dining table here.It shows the Indian way enjoying food.I liked Ramu kaka.Swayam's such a sweetheart.He doesn't like attention?? Great.

loved it

 WAiting.NExt

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Anindita..this is awesome buddy...

brilliant update man so awesome and the pics made it even more fab yaaar and swayam ki leg pulling and he is pouting awww the family moment was too cute cant wait for sharon and swayam to meet pls pls pls update soon

Loved the fact that it was such a long update and yes, it was absolutely needed to set the base of the story !!! I'm loving the way you write...Simple yet perfect !!! Can't wait for chapter 2 !!!

Did you just clled this update boring  ? From which angle this seems boring to you. It is one of the best begining i ever read for any FF. Loved the detailed manner in which you explaind everything . And the dialogues were so realistic like the one which we uses everyday. It was indeed a pleasure to read them. And the bond between Shekhawats were beautifully penned. Waiting for the next update .

Swayam is soo adorablee! He wants to create his own image! D family part was very sweet..especially wen dey wre teasing swayam :D:D And dat car obviously is of sharon :)) And puhleasee dun b sry..dis ws sucha nycc updatee..nd moreover it ws required to show d family part na! So chill :)) I like the pace of ur ff...smooth! waiting fr d nxt :)

Awesome...swayam's family conversation was well written...love d way his family teases him...d pics also supported d descprition very well...update soon

Nice update... waiting fr the nxt part... continue soon