~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF - Page 51

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This is the first work,that i am reading on swaron,returning aftet such a long time.So,initially i had a special feeling... 😊

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This was really very sweet update,with so many things happening.Swaron calling Swayam Monkey and becoming new ACS was all,your readers wanted for!
I specially loved Swayam's silent thought-
"meri dil aur meri zindagi ka boss hai daisy"... 😳 Loved it...!!!!!!
At last,you ended it on a suspicious note,with the entrance of a new character!!!
Running to read the next part... 😃 Edited by tanzz15 - 11 years ago

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🤗 I totally loved this part dear.
Sharon's fear towards that unknown person was well portrayed and you were just superb,in showing,donald's concern towards his life daisy... 😳
I loved how swayam managed to get the phone number from rey..Smart Guy!! 😎
Loved it and running fast to read the next one.. 😃 Edited by tanzz15 - 11 years ago

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Aweee... 😳   🤗
Oh dear...it was "Chumeshwari" update..
The very first picture of Sharon sleeping on Swayam's chest made me go in a 'hawa hawa swaron dreamland!!!!'
aweee re!!!!

The baby scene was very well written!!! that donald soft toy concept was awesome!!!
"Mere ghar me tsunami aya hai,koi mujhe bachao" and swayam's hawa niklaying on seeing sherni sharon made me "hans hans ke girru!!!!" 🤣

Mind blowing boss!!! 😎 Edited by tanzz15 - 11 years ago

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Swayam's bhoot look was .. 😉
kya yaar,hated kaka for interrupting in the wrong time!!!
Sharon in 3-quarter boxer was superb!!!! 😃
Real me pehenti to kaisi dikhti... 🤣
Loved swayams consolation... 😊
well done dear...
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This part was very touching.Its very true that a girl in teenage needs support of her parents the most.Sharon's pain of losing her mother and staying away from her father was very well portrayed.It proved to be the greatest mistake of her life to trust an unknown person.As she was already in great need of some mental support,the incident has surely taken off land below her feet.You have done an excellent job in setting up the story,my dear...
Continue soon,looking up to see swayam's reaction on knowing this bitter truth and handling with great care,as daisy's donald.

love Tania.. 😊 Edited by tanzz15 - 11 years ago

koto gulo update kore diechis.. r ami amder college r fest r kaj e atke ektao porte parchi na.. 10 n 11 ta pora hoini.. pore mimi theke comment korbo.. :) plzz dnt be angry..

read chapter 10 and 11 at a go...

plzzz update the nxtt prt ASAP

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Anny please update 😳