What is up with Arnav? I think he is conflicted between the annoyance he feels at how Khushi has managed to charm his family and this tug of attraction that is pulling him towards her causing him to react like a jerk! And respect for Khushi for holding steady and giving it back to him. Btw, love your writing style! Simple yet highly effective! :)
I took nearly 2000 words to get this across and you do capture the essence in four sentences. You are bang on with you conclusion, it is attraction and annoyance; he is vacillating between the two emotions.
In all honesty, I am really enjoying people's reaction to the kiss and his behavior. There is more to the man than his eagerness to rile her, he has more than one reason and she is the one giving them to him.
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