Originally posted by: Anamika163
oye hoye... love shove shuru hogaya haanπ bechara Rajat
Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its lovely and thanks for a bigger update, par kya yaar Ram ko aur kitna pareshan karogi, ek to Mumbai ka traffic, uske upar theekha vada pau aur uske upar barish me bhigna bhi, bechara ab roo na de, waise Kapoor hain, matlab Punjabi hain aur Panjabi hoke theekha nahi kha sakta aisa kaise, and lastly I just love ur titbits yaar, by the way Y don't u give titbits this time?
awesome update whats next... coffee date...??????
do u know what i like most in ur writing? U mix up small small thing so well n they r d heart of ur story.. Like u spicy vadapau scene, traffic jam n their arguments.. Loving ur superb story ptner.. These r totally different fr other ff that folks r writting these days.
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