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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

This is brilliant!

Ok, I am usually never up for long comments but this OS deserves one.

First of all, in the beginning i was visualizing Khushi & Arnav and at one point my heart crunched and I got all teary! i could almost feel her heart break. As the story proceeded, I thought the lawyer is Shyam and you have done a role reversal .. but no it was Arnav! I have visualized the story again .. and it seems perfect now. 😊

Really, really well-written. 👏

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blue-eye

@blue-eye

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

It was amazing.loved the OS

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

That was an amazing OS. Kept thinking that she was right to leave because of the way he was treating her but was upset with her leaving arnav. Was pleased with the twist and it being Shyam instead.

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

wow...it was nice... but when she filed case... i was like this cant be arnav... ant it was true... awesome os

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ipkknd_lover

@ipkknd_lover

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

hahahaha SHAYAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣...serves him right

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

shyam was her husband 😲

what the f*????

Arnav is her lawyer!!!

wooow

haha i know i'm silly

but seriously this was my reaction when i read this

how dare you Mr. Jha to hit my arnav!!!!!

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Aha excellent OS!! Lool Ohh she was married to shyam Lmao!! And arnav was her lawyer.. sweet!! For a bit I thought it was the otherway round!!

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Fabulous.

Loved it.

😊

Edited by ArshiRaiguptha - 11 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

IF-Stunnerz

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

My heart was sinking as I read it.. But then... Such an interesting twist... ❤️ Loved it.. <3

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ArHiluv

@ArHiluv

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

omg u cracked me up...i was thinking dat Arnav cheated her...lol its shyamu...nd it took me to understand till i reach the last para...i was abt to throw u the chappals and tomatoes😆 before fininshing the OS..THANK GOD I READ IT COMPLETELY OTHERWISE I WOULD HAV SEND U PM FILLED WITH CHAPPALS AND TOMATOES😆

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