ArHi OS: Broken Heart - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
nicely written.
Halfway during the story I was thinking who in their right minds on this forum would dare to make Arnav cheat on Khushi😆...of course there had to be a twist.
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Posted: 10 years ago
oke first i was like
its arnav but you never gave name
so when he was behaving all workholic i really thought it to be arnav
and i was horrible
and thought were is rabba ve hum
and then he didnt respect her when other man his clinte to cop her
and when he called someother woman
i was schoked
i thought nooo arnav cant do that
and then when she start with the smile to advocate i was like oke
we never knew the name of the other man
so their are many possiblys
so tada arnav was the advocate and shyame was her husband
love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ridz, that was so good! And yes, like most people said I did think it was Arnav. I do believe Arnav has treated Khushi slightly in this way in the show too. Sighs! Lovely work :D 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it how you didn't revile who the husband was till the end and I was thinking it was arnav who was her husband
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surprise surprise!

I did a double take when the names were revealed; so deep I was in grief of the marriage being broken. And tell you what, the twist was perfect! Made me loose all that feeling of melancholy in a jiff..and go on to say 'Rabba ve' at th end!
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Posted: 10 years ago
OH! This is Good...Reallly Really Good!! totally fooled me...amazingly unpredictable...Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh wow that was sooo good for a second i thought it was Arnav you know with all the clients and stuff but that was really interesting when in the end it turned out to be Shaym and Arnav was the lawer! great twist👏
anera thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
love this os
u are great writer
and i think u know it
sadhnasoumya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg so that was shyam
I was like arnav can't do this
Good
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Posted: 9 years ago
Totally unpredicted...The first thought was Arnav would never do so with Khushi if he was her husband...turned out to be a surprise 😊 But great update...Was quite interesting to read it till the end 😊