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First of all congratulation on third thread. This FF is still going strong as ever.
Now coming to this update. I loved how slowly and steadly you are making love come back in SwaRon's life. Team rehersal part was nicely done. But i wish you have added Rey's dialogue too what he said to his team while Swayam talked to Sharon. And now coming to Sharon she is becoming sweeter with every update. Who would have thought she would say to weakling team members that they have authority to change her steps. And at the last coming to best part of this update - ShaRey part. It was simply said sweet. Loved how Rey teased Sharon and asked her to keep her temper in control. But the best part was Sharon trying to justify herself to Swayam.
Overall a beautifully penned update. This thread had taken a steady start hoping for some bangs in next update especially some awesome SwaRon romantic moments.
Now coming to this update. I loved how slowly and steadly you are making love come back in SwaRon's life. Team rehersal part was nicely done. But i wish you have added Rey's dialogue too what he said to his team while Swayam talked to Sharon. And now coming to Sharon she is becoming sweeter with every update. Who would have thought she would say to weakling team members that they have authority to change her steps. And at the last coming to best part of this update - ShaRey part. It was simply said sweet. Loved how Rey teased Sharon and asked her to keep her temper in control. But the best part was Sharon trying to justify herself to Swayam.
Overall a beautifully penned update. This thread had taken a steady start hoping for some bangs in next update especially some awesome SwaRon romantic moments.
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