Ok guys! I know Im superlate! But could help it!!! Was busy with college, admissions and all! Plus was going through a huge writer's block! So this was the maximum thing I could pen down!!!
Special thanks to all the spammers(Had loadz of them this time) for finishing the whole thread and also to the readers for having patience!!!! Enjoy!!!
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Recap
Sharon has joined Team Weaklings as the 6th dancer. This decision was taken by Nicole Ma'am and RDX Sir. Swayam convinced Sharon to join the team as well as have confidence in herself! Everyone is happy with the decision except Vishakha. Rehearsals commence and Sharon is late on the first day. Swayam advises her to observe their routine for a few days.
Rey, Swayam and Sharon are thrown out of class because Sharon is busy stealing glances at Swayam who misinterprets that and thus they have a comical fight! Swayam and Sharon perform a Tango Dance!
PART 23
A beautiful Tango Dance follows on Raabta (Agent
Vinod)!!!!!!!!
The dance ends like their previous dance... Both is them
being lost in each others eyes...
Rey starts applauding...
Swayam helps Sharon on the ground...
Rey: Wow!!!!!! This is like the best Tango I have ever
seen...
Swayam smiles...
Sharon: Thanks Rey!
Rey: Tum dono ki chemistry! Wow!!!!! Guys! Awesome!!!!!
*Hawa Hawa Look Look*
Rey: Now Im sure, ki Footloose Competition St Louis hi
jeetega!
Swayam and Sharon smile...
Meanwhile the rest of the gang enters...
Vishakha: Hey guys! Tumlog yahaan kya kar rahe ho... (looks
at Swayam and Sharon) Dance?
Vicky: Guys! Tumlog aaj class mein kar kya rahe the?
Nilesh: Seriously dude! Tumlog, especially Swayam tu, aajtak
kabhi class se bahar nahi nikala gaya hai!
The three of them exchange glances and Rey and Swayam stifle
a laugh...
Simmi: Guys?????
Rey: Kuch nahi woh, hum log bas...
Swayam: Haan bas aise hi...
Rinni: Sharon tum itni furious kyu lag rahi ho?
Sharon: Kkk...kuch nahi... woh... umm...(closing
her eyes trying to find words)
Swayam: Guys! Yeh sab kya baatein kar rahe hai...
Rehearsals shuru kare?
Vishakha(giving Swayam the sarcastic look): Woh toh tumne
kar hi li hai...
Swayam: Guys I was just showing Sharon the routine... So
that she can join us soon...
Vishakha: Whatever!
Neha: Vishakha!
Vishakha: What???
Rey: Come on guys, let them rehearse!
Simmi, Rinni, Nilesh and Vicky get upset...
Swayam looks a their long faces.
Swayam: Kya hua guys?
Vicky: Dazzlers wale days yaad aagaye! Jab yeh rehearsal
Hall hum use karte the...
Nilesh: Ya dude! Yahaan par hum practice karte the...
Masti karte the... Par ab...
Simmi: We have always lived like Dazzlers! And today! Yeh
rehearsal Hall bhi hamara nahi raha!
Sharon gets upset and remembers the Footloose Elims...
Rey: Guys! Come on ya! Hum sirf iss competition mein participate
nahi kar sakte! Iske baad toh kar sakte hai na!
Swayam: And kisne kaha ki yeh rehearsal hall tumhaara nahi
hai! This rehearsal hall will always belong to the Dazzlers before us! And
kisne kaha ki tum yahaan practice nahi kar sakte? Ofcourse ull can! Abhi toh
bahut saare events and all honge and we all will do the same amount of masti
and dance guys!
Sharon: Im sorry guys!
Everyone looks at her confused!
Sharon: Agar main Shivam par...itna bharosa nahi karti toh
shayad yeh kabhi nahi hota.
Swayam looks at Sharon...
Rey: Guys! Why are we even talking all this! Sharon...?????
Sharon: Im fine Rey... Im fine...
Swayam comes next to her...
Meanwhile Rey is talking to the gang,
Swayam: Sharon?
Sharon looks at him...
Swayam: Sharon please stop blaming yourself for something
you dint do...
Sharon: But...
Swayam: Tum Shivam ke baare mein itna soch ke usko woh
importance de rahi ho jo woh deserve nahi karta...
Sharon nods....
Sharon: I wish I could make our team feel better...
Swayam: You can Sharon! Tum khush rehti ho toh yeh sab khush
rehte hai! Bas apna best do... Sab khush honge...
Sharon looks at him...
*Hawa Hawa Look Look*
Rey disturbs them...
Rey: Guys! Carry on with your routine, we are leaving!
Swayam nods...
Swayam: Ok guys, shall we start?
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Sharon in her room...
Sharon: I really need to practice! Unlogon ke routine se
main used to nahi hu and I really have to match up to them... Mere liye nahi
sahi toh... Swayam ke liye hi... Uski wajah se aaj main phir se dance kar paa rahi hu...
Rey: Swayam ke liyee????
Sharon turns around to see Rey standing at the door...
Sharon: Rey? Tum? Kitni baar kahaa hai knock karke aaya
karo... Main ek ladki hu!
Rey: Aye.. yeh Ladki hone ka bhashan kisi aur ko dena...
Mujhe nahi... (and he plops himself on the bed)
Rey: Toh... tum Swayam ke liye kya karne wali thi...
Sharon: Main... Main... Kk..Kuch nahi...
Rey: Maine toh yahi sunna!!! Ya toh mere kaan kharab ho gaye
hai ya toh tum Short-term memory loss se suffer kar rahi ho...
Sharon: Oh please! Mujhe koi short-term memory loss nahi hua
hai.. Tumhaare kaan toh kya... tumhaara...tumhaara toh dimaag bhi kharab
hai...
Rey(sticking out his tongue at her): Haan haan... ab toh
main pagal hi lagunga na... Swayam ke saamne main toh kuch nahi...
Sharon(blushing): Rey stop it!
Just then her phone rings...
Rey picks up her phone on the bed and sees the
caller-'Swayam'
Rey(smiling): Tumne yaad kiya aur humne phone
kiya...(Sharon looks at him lifting her eyebrows) Swayam ka phone hai...
Sharon(excited): What??? Do phone...
Rey: Na...
Sharon: Areey... Pleasee... (she tries to snatch the phone
from him)
Rey doesn't give it to her and plays along...
Finally she manages to take the phone...
Sharon(picking up the phone in a hurry): Hey...(blushing)
Swayam: Hey...umm... woh actually tumhein disturb nahi
karna chahta tha...
Sharon:No no... not at all...
Rey smiles at her with his hand resting under his chin...
Sharon gives him the *shut up* look...
Swayam: Woh... yeh kehne ko phone kiya tha ki... um...
Sharon: Ki...
Rey: Ki...
Sharon(putting her finger on her lips):Ki...
Swayam: Kal please practice pe time pe aa jana...
Sharon: What? Tumne yeh bolne ko phone kiya tha itni raat
ko?????
Swayam: Haan... kyu?
Rey(softly): Mujhe bhi batao na pleaseee...
Sharon(To Rey): Shut up...
Swayam: Maine kya kiya?
Sharon: Nahi nahi tumhe nahi...
Swayam: Toh kisse???
Sharon: Woh... tumne sach mein yahi batane ko phone kiya
tha... aur kuch nahi?
Swayam(confused): Aur kya kahunga main????
Rey(coming and standing next to the Phone):Pyaar Diwaana Hota Hai, Mastaana Hota Hai!
Sharon tries to shoo him but in vain...
Swayam: Rey?
Sharon: Sorry woh Rey...
Swayam: Rey wahaan hai?
Sharon: Haan woh... nahi... haan... actually kuch kaam tha
isliye...
Rey looks at her with a confused expression...
Swayam: Oh... ok Sharon... kal Rehearsal pe milte
hai...Bye...
Sharon: Swayam...
Swayam: Haan...
Sharon: Rey ko kuch kaam tha isliye aaya tha... aur...
aur... aur kuch nahi...
Swayam(smiles): Bye Sharon...
Sharon(sadly): Bye...
Sharon looks at her phone...
Rey: Kya hua?
Sharon: I think Swayam ko bura laga ki tum yahaan itni raat ko yahaan ho...
Rey(smiling): Sharon... Swayam ko kabhi iss baat ka bura
nahi lagega... hum dono kaafi ache dost hai aur yeh sab cheezon se humein
kuch farak nahi padta...
Sharon: Haan par still...
Rey: Aur tumhein badi fikar hai ki usse kya lagta hai...
Sharon: Nahi... (looks at Rey who looks at her with the
*trust me* look) Haan thodi si...
Rey(smiling): Thodi si?
Sharon: Rey...
Rey: Ok ok Sharon!
Sharon: Acha ab bye! Mujhe sona hai! Kal rehearsals pe jaana
hai!
Rey(smiles): Theeke... Bye!
He turns to leave...
Rey: Acha suno(turns back)
Sharon: Ab kya hai?
Rey: Sharon thoda sa temper par control rakhna tum...
Sharon:What do you mean?
Rey: I mean ki unlogon ko tumhaare saath adjust karne mein
time lagega, tum please apne aap ko calm aur cool rakhna...
Sharon: I know Rey! Dont worry... Ill try my best...
Rey(smiles): Acha bye...
Sharon: Bye...
Rey: Acha suno...
Sharon: Ab kya hai?!
Rey: Swayam!
Sharon blushes a deep red of shade.
Sharon: Rey...!!!!!
Rey runs for his life!
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Next day in the Rehearsal Hall...
The whole team is present in the rehearsal hall...
Swayam: Ok guys, as decided, hume apne routine mein Tango
bhi include kiya tha... Toh since Sharon iss form mein hum se zyaada experienced
hai, so I thought why not let her choreograph this section?! What say guys?!
Neha: Wow! Hamesha se maine socha tha ki ek Dazzler ke saath
dance karungi, aur aaj Sharon humein sikhaayegi! Very happy Neha is!
Bharat: Haan re... Jab Sharon ko hum sabse yeh Tan...
Amar: Tango..
Bharat: Haan haan jo bhi hai,... humse acha aata hai, toh
usse hi karna chahiye...
Vishakha: But dude, yeh hamaari team mein new entry hai...
She doesn't have the right to choreograph us...
Neha: Vishakha...
Swayam: Vishakha, Sharon is quite good at Tango... (looks at
Sharon), so I guess since humein koi experience nahi hai, she can choreograph
it... Aur agar woh nahi karegi toh kaun karega? Tum?!
Vishakha: Dude but...
Sharon: Vishakha, lets have a deal... Ill try to set the
routine, aur agar tumhein ussmein koi bhi changes ya kuch bhi acha na lage, toh
you have all the authority to change it... What say?
Vishakha is thinking whereas Sharon is waiting for her
answer...
Neha: Haan haan... (To Vishakha) Vishakha, please! Bahut
mushkil se humein ek team mili hai, please isse rehne do...
Vishakha gives the indifferent look.....
Swayam: Great... So Sharon... you can take over...
He steps aside to let Sharon lead the way and gives her a small
smile... Sharon too returns his smile...
Sharon(Voiceover): Kahin Swayam ko bura toh nahi laga ki Rey
mere ghar pe tha kal raat... (Looks at Swayam who is busy warming up)
Swayam: Come on guys!
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Ok! Please dont throw Jootas and Chappals at me!!!
My first page is incomplete! Will finish it soon!!
And I know this ones not upto the mark! Sincerely apologize for that!But I guess thats what happens when you write during a writer's block!!!! But I had to updatr today since Im happy today and I wanted everyone else too to be happy! Will try to give you'll a better one next time!!!
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I promise to be as regular as possible!!
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