Heyyy!firstly... Welcome Back!!!
And secondly... Back With a BANG!! (rightly so 😃)
First.. I read ur reply to my comment in the last part.. So uska.. re-reply.. if that makes sense 😆
I'm 4'11 - 5 tall.. i actually dont know exact 😳 😆
How tall are you?
Apparently people think I'm lying when I say I'm going to grade 12... I went to America to visit an aunt, and a grandma asked me if I was going to grade 8 😕
That's WAYYY offf 😆
But ya... Kya kare.. I've embraced my shortness very well now 😉
And now.. the part you just posted
I really don't know what to say...
It was complete.. I liked the whole part! Actually loved it to be honest!
Best part was the trio.. sharon-rey-swayam... It wasn't a trio thing.. but just that scene
Love Rey and Sharon's friendship! I've said this to you before too, I'm glad you're showing that! It's an important part of Sharon's life! =D
The phone convo too was awesome!
Sharon is soo cute!
Justifying why Rey came!! 😆
But more than that, I LOVED Rey's response to that (=
Swayam ko kabhi iss baat ka bura nahi lagega... hum dono kaafi ache dost hai aur yeh sab cheezon se humein kuch farak nahi padta...
It's really nice to read of such a bond! To know that Swayam is intelligent enough to know the relationship that Rey and Sharon is pure, and only friendship (=
Ugh. when I write comments like ^ I get so attached to the story that I start commenting on them like they actually exist ☺️ 😆
But see... That's what you make me do!!
You're sticking to the characters very well! Not changing or altering them than what you started with
I adore that!
In fact, I also liked Vishaka in this! We all know how she is... And you showed that very well! Not too rude, but clearly, not very accepting of the whole idea!
😃
Just realized.. Longy is back on track 🤣
Before I fill a whole page with just my comment... which I can actually do, if my fingers permit 😆, I'm gonna take your leave 😉
Take care!
And don't worry about regularly updating! As long as you don't leave this FF in mid-air and incomplete, I'll wait for the updates!
Concentrate on your studies and good luck! <3
=D
Take caree!
Hinal <3
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