#2 Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai (SwaRonFF)

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Edited by rachita_1994 - 12 years ago

nish22

My Rasam!!!! I don't know how to thankyou enough!!!!! Ur the one who was the first to comment on my FF and also my first friend on the D3 forum!!! Its coz if u that I got the courage to write!!!! I owe u one big one!!! And thanks a tonnee for the siggiee!!! Its superb!!!! Lovee u loaddzz Rasam!!! Ur the best!!

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Edited by rachita_1994 - 12 years ago

Congo on the NEW THREAD!! Proud of you babe!

Ok guys! First Part on the new thread!!! Yipeee!!!! Sorry for updating latee!!!!!!!! But here is a lamba wala part... Hope u like it!!!! Thanks to the DKT group for reaching my target soo soon!!! Love u all!!!!

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PART 14

Next day at St. Louis...

Sharon enters the empty Rehearsal Hall...

Sharon:I have to tell Swayam nahi toh main poori raat nahi so paungi...

Swayam:Kya batana chahti ho tum mujhe?

Sharon turns around to see Swayam standing at the entrance of the Rehearsal Hall

Sharon:Woh...

Swayam walks towards her...

Sharon:Woh, Shivam...

Swayam(Confused):Shivam?? Usne kuch kiya tumhaare saath... Uski himmat kaise hui... Uss din maine usse chod diya tha, not today...

Sharon smiles at his concern...

He turns to go...

Sharon:Swayam, ruko...

Swayam turns around..

Sharon:Nahi, usne kuch nahi kiya... mujhe tumhein uski party ke baare mein kuch batana tha...

Swayam:Party?

All the events of Shivam's party flash through Swayam's eyes... His entry with Nicole Ma'am, Shivam feeding Sharon, Sharon dancing with him and the kiss they shared...

Swayam:Sharon, mujhe uss baare mein koi baat nahi karni...

Sharon(Confused):Kyu?

Swayam:Bas nahi karni hai Sharon...

Sharon:Karni padegi Swayam...

Swayam:Kya problem hai tumhaari Sharon... Main tumse baat karta hu, toh tumhe problem hoti hai... Aaj pehli baar main tumse baat nahi karna chahta, tumhe toh khush hona chahiye...

Swayam turns to go...

Sharon:Swayam please ruk jao...

Swayam stops...

Sharon:Main poori raat kal nahi so pai... Agar aaj tumhe nahi bataya, toh kabhi nahi bata paungi...

Swayam(Voiceover):Akhir yeh mujhe batana kya chahti hai? Im sure uss cheez ke baare mein toh woh kabhi nahi batayegi mujhe...

Sharon:Please Swayam

Swayam turns around...

Swayam:Bolo...

Sharon:Swayam woh... woh... I don't know tumhe kaise batau... Shivam ki party mein, woh dance ke baad...Shivam ...(a tear falls down her cheek) Shivam tried to kiss me...

Swayam looks at her... Sharon's eyes are filled with tears...

Swayam:Aur tum yeh mujhe kyu bata rahi hu...

Sharon looks at him with confused eyes... She dint expect this...

Swayam looks at her with questioning eyes...

Sharon:Kyunki, I think... I think u deserved to know...

Swayam(pretending to be cool with everything):Fine, and...ok...

Swayam turns to leave... Sharon gives the *how dare you*wala expression...

Sharon:Swayam, whats wrong with you? Bahut attitude aagya hai na tum mein, ki tum kuch keh bhi nahi rahe ho... Bahut smart samajhte ho na apne aap ko...  Tumhein lag raha hoga ki Sharon ne mere saamne kuch confess kiya toh tum important hogaye...

Swayam is trying to control his anger...

Sharon:I just thought ki tumhein yeh janna bahut zaruri hai and this is the way u behave... Swayam, tum seriously ek looser hi ho...tumhe toh koi farak hi nahi padta

Swayam turns around

Swayam(the *Ive had enough* expression):Sharon, mujhe koi farak nahi padta haan?(Advancing towards her and Sharon starts going backwards when she bangs against a wall), Mujhe koi farak nahi padta... Maine sab meri aankhon se dekha hai...

Sharon(Shocked):Swayam tumne...

Swayam(fuming with anger*abandoned staircase scene*):Sharon Rai Prakash, jo bhi hua, woh mujhe pehle se hi pata tha... Aur kya kaha tumne, he tried to kiss you? Dont lie Sharon... usne tumhein... usne tumhein tumhaare gaalo par kiss kiya tha(banging his hand on the wall)

Sharon Shudders...

Swayam:Infact, usne, tumhe tumhaare... main aur kuch dekh nahi paya toh main chala gaya... Pata nahi uske baad usne kya...

Sharon:Swayam I dint let him...

Swayam:U dint let him??? Kaise maan lu main tumhein Sharon...

Sharon(tears rolling down her cheeks):Swayam, please trust me... tum mujhe nahi trust karoge?

Swayam:Hah...(tears escaping his eyes)Tum par bahut trust karta tha Sharon... Kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum kisi ke saath aise...aise...

Sharon:Please Swayam... I don't know ki maine usse kyu allow kiya, par trust me, I dint let him...let him kiss me Swayam... Please Swayam...

Swayam:Sharon, I don't believe you...

Sharon:Swayam, the moment he tried, mujhe tumhaari yaad aayi... Aisa laga ki main tumhe betray kar rahi hu...

Swayam:Mujhe betray? Sharon(he holds her shoulders) jab RDX Sir ki party mein yeh sab hamaare beech hua tha, yaad hai tumne mujhse kya kaha tha...

Sharon remembers their conversation...

Swayam:Tumhein woh bhi ek galti lagi thi kyunki hum hosh mein nahi the... lekin uss din? Tum toh poore hosh mein thi...Infact, New Years Eve par bhi tumne usse bulaya tha... Agar woh tumhe itna pasand tha toh mujhe yeh sab kyu bata rahi ho...tumhaari life hai, tum jaano... Main tumhaari life mein sirf ek looser hu na Sharon...

He leaves her and turns to go...

Sharon(hurt):Mujhe laga ki tumhein koi farak padega par...

Swayam turns and holds her shoulder again...

Swayam:Mujhe koi farak nahi padta? Koi farak nahi padta Sharon? Uss din, Main, Swayam Shekhawat apne aap se nazrein nahi mila paa raha tha,... kyunki maine aisi ladki se pyaar kiya joh mere baare mein bilkul nahi sochti... Uss din ke baad, main ek aisa ladka ban gaya hu jo pyaar se door bhagta hai Sharon... New Years eve par tumne mujhse pucha tha na ki mujhe mere haath par kaise lagi thi, woh isliye Miss Sharon Rai Prakash, kyunki main uss galti ki saza jo tumne kari hai, woh apne aap ko de raha tha... Main apne aap ko chot pahucha ke apne aap ko dard de raha tha taaki mein tumhaara diya hua dard bhul pau par jo tumne mujhe dard diya hai, woh kabhi kam nahi ho sakta...(tightening his grip on her)Aur tum kehti ho ki mujhe koi farak nahi padta...

Sharon(tears in her eyes):Ouch, Swayam... Ur hurting me...

Swayam:Im hurting you? I? Aur jo tumne mujhe har din hurt kiya hai... Jab mujhse pyaar nahi karti, toh kyu yeh sab care dikhaati hu... Kyu mujhe college chod ke nahi jaane diya? Kya woh sab dikhaane ke liye roka tha mujhe ya yeh din ke liye?Ur confused state has...has made me crazy Sharon... Pal Pal marta hu mein yeh sochkar ki main kaise tumhein udaas na karu... Kaise sab normal kar du... Par tum...

Swayam leaves her...

Sharon:Swayam...

Swayam:Farak toh tumhe nahi padhta Sharon... Jo hua us din, Usse tumhe kuch farak nahi padhta... Tum Shivam ke saath uss din ke baad bhi ekdum coolly behave kar rahi thi...

Sharon:Enough Swayam... Enough...

Swayam:No Sharon, Ive had enough...

He turns to go....

Sharon:Sahi kaha tumne... Mujhe koi farak nahi padhta... Woh sab hone ke baad maine apna haath kata, apne aap ko punish karne ki poori koshish ki, par,u r right.. it doesn't bother me...

Swayam turns to look at her...

Sharon(tears in her eyes):Bahut koshish ki apne aap ko punish karne ki par I think mera sabse bada punshiment yahi hoga ki tum mujhse door chale chaoge...

Swayam:Sharon...yeh tumhaare liye punishment nahi, its a boon for you...huh...

Sharon(tears in her eyes):You know what, aaj, itni cheap main sirf tumhaari wajah se feel kar rahi hu...Tumhaari wajah se Swayam.. All because of you...

Swayam:Meri wajah se??

Sharon:Haan... Tumhe jealous feel karane ke liye main Shivam ke paas gai... taaki tum mujhe aur usse saath dekho... Tumhaaro wajah se yeh sab hua hai Swayam... Its all coz of you...(She starts crying)

Swayam(Frustrated but with tears in his eyes):Meri wajah se? Meri wajah se Sharon? Maine kaha tha mujhe jealous feel karvau? Maine kaha tha Shivam ke paas jao...

Sharon:Nahi par main chahti thi ki tumhe bura lage... Tum waise hi hurt ho jaise tumne mujhe hurt kiya tha...

Swayam:Maine tumhein hurt kiya tha Sharon?Maine?

Sharon:Haan Swayam, har samay tumne mujhe hurt kiya hai... Chahe mera Secret Admirer banke ya mujhe hamesha insult karke...

Swayam:Maine?

Sharon:HAan Swayam, aur Shivam ke kareeb rehne se, main tumhe bhi hurt karna chahti thi...

Swayam(hurt):Well Then, congratulations Miss Sharon Rai Prakash... Aap apne plan mein kamyaab hui... Main bahut hurt hua... As always, aap jeet gayi... aur iss jeet ka jashn aap zarur manaiega...Aur mujhe toh yeh hi samajh mein nahi aa raha, ki tumne mujhe yeh sab bataya kyu...

Sharon:Mera dimaag kharab ho gaya tha... Mujhe laga ki tumhein yeh sab jaanna zaruri tha, par main pagal ho gai thi...

Swayam:I don't belive it Sharon ki main kabhi yeh kahunga, but...but... I'm done with you for good...

Sharon starts crying...

Swayam leaves from there...

Sharon falls down crying...

(Aahatein from Ekk Main aur Ekk Tu in the background)

Swayam is shown going to the Abandoned Staircase...

Swayam enters the staircase... He sits down on one of the steps and starts crying...

Scene Shifts to their respective bedrooms...

(Aahatein from Ekk Main aur Ekk Tu in the background)

Swayam and Sharon both are standing at their repective windowsills gazing out of the window with tears in their eyes...

Sharon remembering Swayam's word:Maine sab meri aankhon se dekha hai... Main, Swayam Shekhawat apne aap se nazrein nahi mila paa raha tha,... kyunki maine aisi ladki se pyaar kiya joh mere baare mein bilkul nahi sochti...Main apne aap ko chot pahucha ke apne aap ko dard de raha tha taaki mein tumhaara diya hua dard bhul pau par jo tumne mujhe dard diya hai, woh kabhi kam nahi ho sakta. Well Then, congratulations Miss Sharon Rai Prakash... Aap apne plan mein kamyaab hui... Main bahut hurt hua... As always, aap jeet gayi... aur iss jeet ka jashn aap zarur manaiega... but I'm done with you for good...

Sharon starts crying...

Next morning...

St. Louis College...

Sharon  is shown walking to the huge staircase...

Simmi(calls from behind):Hey Sharon...

Sharon turns...

Sharon gives a weak smile...

Rinni:Sharon, tum kal kahaan chali gayi thi...tum dikhi hi nahi...

Sharon(cracking voice):Kuch nahi guys... woh kuch kaam tha...

Simmi:Ur fine Sharon? I mean, tum thodi weak si lag rahi ho...

Sharon:Ya ya girls... just tired and all...

They start walking towards the canteen...

Swayam is shown entering the corridor nearby...

Just then Sharon's heel break and she is about to fall, but Swayam catches her...

(Pehla Nasha tune in the background)

They remain frozen for a second...

Both their eyes have dark circles and look sleep deprived...

Swayam straightens himself... Sharon takes off her hand from his shoulder...

Simmi:Sharon, ur fine?

Sharon:Ya, Im fine... Woh meri heel tut gayi hai...

She bends down and takes the sandal in her hand and tries breaking that heel as well... She tries her level best but cant...

Swayam lends out his hand... Sharon ignores...

Swayam shrugs... Sharon still tries but doesn't succeed... Finally she gives Swayam the sandal... Swayam takes it and breaks the heel in one go...

Simmi(in awe):Wow Swayam...!!!!! Ur actually quite strong...

Sharon looks at Simmi...  Simmi keeps quiet...

Swayam is sitting alone in the locker room lost in his thoughts...

Rey enters...

Rey:Hey dude...

Swayam doesn't answer...

Rey:Dude?

Swayam still doesn't answer...

Rey goes and sits next to Swayam and puts his hand on his shoulder...

Rey:Swayam?

Swayam(gaining his senses):Huh, huh... Hi Rey...

Rey:Hi Swayam... Ur fine?

Swayam:Ya... mujhe kya hoga?

Rey:Kuch hoga toh nahi, par tujhe dekhne se aisa nahi lag raha...

Swayam:No dude, Im fine... (changing the topic) tu kaisa hai? Kal ke baad...

Rey:Main...huh...main cope up karne ki koshish kar raha hu... Kitna weird hai na Swayam...pehle jab hamaari life mein koi ladki nahi hoti, life itni achi lagti hai... aur jab ladki aane ke baad chod ke chali jaati hai toh chahe kuch bhi karlo, life normal ho hi nahi sakti...

Swayam:Haan Rey tu sahi keh raha hai... Dil bhi kitna bewakoof hota hai...  Pyaar bhi uss insaan se karta hai jo tumhaara kabhi ho nahi sakta...

Rey(Confused):yeh tu keh raha hai Swayam?

Swayam:Haan... ismein itni shocked honi ki kya baat hai?

Rey:Nahi, kyunki, tu hamesha pyaar ke favour mein hota hai, aur aaj...

Swayam:Main galat tha Rey...hamesha se hi galat tha... hamesha woh dekhta tha jo sach nahi hai... Par ab...huh...

Rey:Dude, sab theek toh hai na...

Swayam:Umm..Ya dude... umm..woh...mujhe jaana hai, main baad mein milta hu...

Swayam gets up...

Rey:Par dude...

Swayam goes off...

IMPORTANT NOTEEdited by rachita_1994 - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nish22

Congo on the NEW THREAD!! Proud of you babe!

first of all congrates rachita for the 2nd thread ;) secondly amazing update , though i dont like swaron fights but this one was needed for clearing the misunderstandings b/w them !! update soon , eagerly waiting for the next part ;):)Edited by tanukaswaron - 12 years ago