OS: Humien Farak Padta Hai! - Page 4

Wow...
Awesome OS...
Beautifully written..
Loved it...
Continue soon...

why did u end it? Plz continue...

Yuks, its wish-fulfillment captured in a beautiful, heart-warming story. The fact that you have been absolutely true to the characters makes this story so very realistic – a total treat for readers like me.

Arnav fighting his heart, hurting Khushi, reflecting back on his actions and then taking the right decision – wow! The dialogues are so realistic, the scenes described so beautifully, you have created a gem.

Would you and I hope that you would, continue with this please.

Thanks to everyone for their extremely sweet comments!

you kidding wasnt crap at all why would you say that
its much better than what happened
wonderful too good to be true

Amazing Yuks! This is so beautifully written. :) I love the concept and the way you picked up on their ancient, frayed relationship.

Just beautiful.

Awww...diwali scenes r on my top 5 list...n ur os was sooo good...wish that could have happened😉

AWWW!

nice posttt Edited by Lily2011 - 11 years ago

hi its awsome plzzz plzz do continue