Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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π π π i have no words!!! this update was simply a masterpiece tanzie!!!!every emotion was portrayed magnificientlyyy!!!!! high on emotions and immensely beautiful...!βοΈ βοΈ Thanks a lot Indu. as usually your comment is flattering π€abhay called aryan every few minutes to know about pia! that was so wonderfull. when abhay heard pia is going to leave he felt angry n devastated yet he decided not to stop her only becoz his ego came in between!! even after reaching home he shouted on pia when little shreya called her mom!...but i think the words he said were half true,as i think it was his anger on pia for going to leave him once again that came out in the form of that terrible outburst!!! it was his love,pain n restless feeling of loosing her again that made him more angry!! it's just my guess though! b/w is it so?? No. it was her frustration and anger buried which he could never take out on Pia. a death can change everything in the life. EVERYTHING and he has faced 2 deaths together and somehow Pia is responsible and before the truth came out he really believed she is the reason. when the person you love most becomes the person you cant bear anymore - that hatred is destructive for both the parties.the flasback part was beautiful...and it disclosed soo many things!!i loved the line--- 'when u slept wth me for 6 months didnot this thought came to u. ...u ruined my innocense...' this one was a very powefull statement!!! π π thank you π³ here too pia is under the false impression that Abhay didnt loved her but used her which is not true'do you expect me to beg to the man for forgiveness who insulted me infront of 1000 ppl,just becoz he is my child's father...??' this one was another impactfull one!!!! π this pia is soo headstrong! she mayb irrvocably in love wth abhay but she did had\ve her self respect n knows to respect herself n maintain her dignity!!!! n that's wat i love about her!! coz without dignity wats the use of being a human..?? For a woman self respect is very important and I cant write she should forgive Abhay for everything simply because she is pregnant. i hate such characters in TV well.. no point of making women so weak when they are actually NOT. she should forgive Abhay because of the right cause, because he never meant to hate her and cause her so much pain.the last part literally took my heart away...!!!! π³it was just wonderfull tanzie! ππΌthey both cried n opened up to eachother...n even if its just for a second but they did let go of their ego...and confessed their feelings..that was so so lovely!!!! πand last but not the least, i loved each of abhay's words...they were extremly beautiful....both their vulnarable condition n desparation was powerfully depicted..πloved reading this update tanzie...π³very very enriched one!!!! Marvellous job dear...βοΈ Thank you much. Abhay is in no less pain who is repenting for hurting the beloved and he has no chance. on the top, he cant forgive her too because he lost two persons because of her but he cant stop loving her eithers. its extremely complicated feeling... totally break youp.s though i know certain mistakes are hard to forgive but still i hope pia gives atleast a chance to abhay...coz at the end of the day both of them love eachother n they both crave for eachother... waiting to see what decision pia takes,n how does chand n misha's appearance effect their life...!do continue wenever u'r free...will b looking forward to the next part...π It wont be easy for Pia to forgive Abhay and so for him. and other questions will be answered in next update π³thanks for the pm n take care dear...π you take care too π€
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