Originally posted by: mandy1024
Tanzie this was a splendid update 👏 Infact best so far in this story ⭐️ It was so high on emotions be it love, happiness, hatred, anger, pain or the feeling of mutual loss 👏 Fabulously penned down 👏 This time I wont exactly say u left me speechless(coz u do that everytime 😉) but I'll say u really made me cry 😭 My heart bled 🥺 to see them in such a state n such is the magic of ur words This update was marvelous in the true sense 👍🏼 Thank you so much Manasa.. your comment is as usually flattering 😆 then let me tell you, next update will be more emotional.
Coming to the starting part, Abhay was so cute when he was getting restless with each passing second concerned about Pia n poor Aryan 😆 He had to bear the brunt of it 🤣 The way Pia's heart did a somersault when she realised Abhay cared for her so beautiful 😳 Pia wants to leave now since she is fine but neither her nor Abhay want this. Abhay deliberately forces himself to hate her but his heart wants otherwise 😆 The part where Abhay screamed at lil Shreya made me squirm in my seat Poor kid was not at fault here at all 😭 But it was obvious Abhay would get livid when she called Pia her mom as Pia had been responsible for Aryana's death yea poor Aryan 😆 Abhay has a nasty temper and he will be very sorry for shouting with shreya that too before her birthday.
Damn that Alina to the deepest pit in hell 😡 She is the root cause of it all. She was the one who made Pia doubt Abhay's love But still I wish Pia had confronted Abhay rather than come up with the plan tat cost Aryana n her husband their lives 😭 Two lives were lost and there's no excuse Pia can probably give on her part here. True Alina was the culprit but that doesn't make Pia any less guilty either She knew how much Abhay loved her n lets say Abhay's demeanour prompted her to take this step but still she could have spoken to him and tried to find out if he indeed was cheating on her. If he really had any such intentions he would never have made Pia book a room in one of her dad's resorts. What happened was an accident but she knew she was guilty. Y did she keep this from Abhay? True she feared losing him but at the same time she should also have thought about the consequences she would have had to face once the truth was out before Abhay coz try as u may truth will always surface back at one point in time or the other Abhay on the other hand married Pia out of love thinking his dad was supporting their love all along only to realise that he had been used as a pawn in this game of revenge 🤢 But when Chand asked him to dump Pia he could have divorced her lawfully rather than do what he did. I am sure he felt betrayed on learning about Pia's deception but does that give him any right to dishonour a woman? 😡 NO! But I feel its Abhay who got the raw end of the deal here I agree Pia's pain was no less either - first to be abandoned by the man she loved the most, then she became the cause for her father's demise and worst of all their child suffered the brunt of it all 😭 I feel it was more hard on Abhay coz a person who inflicts pain suffers more than the person who goes through that 😭 n all the while he was hurting her, he suffered worse than what she went through coz guilt overpowers anger n hatred any day n thats what happened with Abhay. On one hand he hated Pia for what she did to Aryana but more than that his heart was breaking into a million pieces everytime he hurled insults at her, blamed her infront of everyone and threw her out of his life 😭 See they both have their share if faults. A death cannot be compensated and here's too and same way nothing can compensated a mother loosing her child and father and husband. you will read next update how Pia had the miscarriage and Im sure you guys will hate me for writing it. Pia loved Abhay too much to tell the truth about Aryanas death because she knows well what she meant to Abhay. on the other hand, Abhay loved Pia too much to feel betrayed and burn in revenge. you cant ever hate someone passionately if you havent love them ever. same for Abhay. and they both keep burning in the fire of insolvent passion, heartbreak and revenge. if you try to measure the loss in meter of more or loss, you wont be able too because somehow they both lost everything.
Their confrontation was mindblowing n no this time it didn't bring me close to tears but made them fall out of my eyes too n thats the beauty of your words as I had mentioned before 👏 The part where Abhay asked her if he was so cheap that he would dump their child had so much of impact and it was power packed n so was Pia's reply as well 👏 Pia's last line was so true but heartbreaking 🥺 Finally they confessed that despite all that happened between them they still love each other 😳 but still its too late to make amemds at this point but I hope they do 😃 Pia is right on her part, she should never beg Abhay to accept the child simply because he is the father and she should forget how he insulted it. atleast i would never write such things 😆 Im allergic to these things, helpless woman and pity and begging the man to accept the child. but now they both know they accused each other for things they never did but Pia wont be able to forgive Abhay so easily..
Gosh Tanzie, just now when things got clear between them u want to bring in Misha n Chand? 😡 😭 Please do give us happy times also dear, there's been too much of sadness already 😭 Again an outstanding applause n this update is worth the standing ovation from me 👍🏼 👏 Its not chand or Misha but something else wont make them apart or will make them apart... next update will clear a lot of things. wait for it 😉
I wish this story could be adapted into a tele film like TMLS n I wish we get ViSu to portray the characters I wish to see them in anything 😆 thanks for the lovely comment dear 🤗
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