Dreams - a FF on MN.last update p61 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

Hye Shubs,

HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY🤗
This ws very beautiful update.U described the whole scenery so beautifully.I felt like I m also there along with them and watch every thing with my own eyes.Along with trekking I think u should increase the pace of story also.As its 7th part and we stil have no idea hw Mayank knows her or from how long he knows her?
Thnx for pm😊

thanks for your comment Irum. the next update was going to reveal the back story.😆
but i could not manage to complete the trekking trip  the way i had planned ,thats why i asked for your opinion.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY
nice updt
love to read more of mayur trip
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this part...
Specially the way nupur ws showing her excitement...Nd the last part ws cute...
Cont..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update shubhs!
dis trekking trip reminds of MN's Ahmadabad trip!😳
pls cont soon!
Happy Friendship day 2 u too!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update shubs.loved it.
Happy frship day.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was so nice...for a moment i felt i too was with them :)
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
the part about the doe and her young one was wonderful..it was sweet and tender..esp the cute Mayur moment coinciding with it..the last part made me feel that they acknowledged their feelings for each other to some extent..hope it doesnt lead to any awkwardness later...cont soon..

Happy friendship day friends😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Friendship day shubhs🤗

Awesome update 
Loved the whole update nupur's excitement , their eye-lock and sp last part 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Plz cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update.

mayur eyelocks ws so magical ... hayyy

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

Happy Friendship Day to u too :D