THE MARRIAGE-- A short story..Compltd - Page 5

Dilli

@Dilli4BALH

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it Sis.. Specially liked the end.

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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maris08
Anu dear.. Glad to see your appreciation..Your princess will figure in another story/poem.. Wait and watch..

eagerly waiting for that... don't forget to pm me... waise m expecting a story😉

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fosla

@fosla

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Posted: 11 years ago

Maris

What a brilliant presentation and loved how you reserved the best for the last!!👏 Now can I wish the CV's would take the same route!!?😃 You did get me jittery in the 1st part.😆

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_Fan
Loved it..!! 😛

Thanks Amy..😳😃

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

[QUOTE=mem1]Loved it Maris... just loved it. really can't think of anything more to say! But I agree, even though this makes sense, poor Rishabh doesn't even deserve Ayesha...

Thanks Gita.. i know that Rishabh deserves better.But this story had limited options and hence..😕

I think in a really funny and cheesy twist, Ayesha should be married to Mamaji! 🤣 They deserve each other.

OH! Why didnt I think of this.. Brilliant and plausible idea..Hats off to you dear..Its cheesy, crazy and yukky twist..Will try something new on this angle..Thanks for giving me a spark..🤣😉😆😛

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: D4BALH
loved it Sis.. Specially liked the end.

Thanks Dilli.. 😳😃

Originally posted by: Siacutie
loved it maris too gud🤗

Thanks Sia..😃🤗

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

eagerly waiting for that... don't forget to pm me... waise m expecting a story😉

Anu.. Abhi mere mann mein kuch poetry chal raha hai..As soon as that is penned ,I will sit and write a story on your princess. okay??😃

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fosla
Maris

What a brilliant presentation and loved how you reserved the best for the last!!👏 Now can I wish the CV's would take the same route!!?😃 You did get me jittery in the 1st part.😆

Thanks Angie.. Let the CVs take any route other than he Ram-Ayesha one.. I will be happy with that..

Jittery over the first part? Come on it was easily guessable..Waiseif I had made the readers think otherwise, Iam happy that I have achieved my aim of presenting story in a gripping and suspense manner..

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Maris!

Sorry, wasn't in town.. couldn't access IF since last 2 days..

will defo read and comment

Thanks for the PM!

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey hey hey!!!

Maris!

That was stunning!

You caught me absolutely off-guard. Rishabh and Ayesha!! Whoaa man! So glad.

But you know what, I had a feeling while reading the second last para, that its going to be Priya adorned as bride who has somehow managed to come back to his Ram. But anyway, this ending was too good. Atleast no Ram-Ayesha.

Your writings are really worth treasuring dear. 👏

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