Thanks Jigna..Priya is not supposed to part of this story..Its all about Ram and his proposed marriage with Ayesha..Originally posted by: haribol79
that was a suprising start...Rishabh and Ayesha...married..
Where is our queen Priya ??
Continue Soon..
NandyOriginally posted by: nandinimp
Yaar maris ,
this is perfect for the nayi shuruath... but you know what you had me a little taken abak till i read the whole OS... was wonderign W*F, why is maris doing this now?? anf then the ZOR KA JATKA... BUT DHEERE SE.. absolutely wonderful though i think that Rishab is being punished for playing the role of the unused pieces of furniture... but no one deserves Ayesha man... not Rishab at least!!
Thanks a lot Saly..😃awesome story... just loved it... gr8 imaginations... thanks for updating... :-)
Getting up to his feet, he almost stumbled. Balancing himself, he gingerly got down from the stage..Striding purposefully forward, he beckoned at the sight in front of him..Nodding his head he opened his arms in welcome..
In walked Ayesha and Rishabh in all splendor and richness of a newly married couple..
The marriage happened!!!!!.
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Anu dear.. Glad to see your appreciation..Your princess will figure in another story/poem.. Wait and watch..Originally posted by: Anamika163
wow Maris... u r a magician... i mean ur write ups r so enchanting😍 absolutely loved it👏 but kya yaar my princess is no where... this is not done😭 hope to get more from u... ur write ups r breath of fresh air... n thnx for da pm🤗
Thanks Nancy.. raya and only raya and nothing else.. I agree wholeheartedly..Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS
Great Maris Di👏
love the way u write😳there would be no RaSha whatsoever and only RaYa😳Waiting to read more from u, and hopefully on the current Priya's accident rumor😆
Thanks dear😳😃.. Suspense it is nah? 😆Sorry I for got your name..Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Getting up to his feet, he almost stumbled. Balancing himself, he gingerly got down from the stage..Striding purposefully forward, he beckoned at the sight in front of him..Nodding his head he opened his arms in welcome..
In walked Ayesha and Rishabh in all splendor and richness of a newly married couple..
The marriage happened!!!!!.
👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏..super suspence ,when i read first part and waited for 2nd part , inever thought ki ending will be like this ..fantastic ending ...thank you
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