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wow, I am speechless..
thanks dear hope u will like the upcoming ones tooo
wow, I am speechless..
But this time you never told me to believe in you !
And that's hue
How true
How very touchingly true..
Amazingly done lines...
You live for me
you were leaving me for me
your heart cries for me
you die for me
Best sums up the essence of Ram's feelings..Love it.. Very nice.. continue..
Originally posted by: kaviya10
OMG SREE dii...what a beautiful pieces of Poem...Awww so lovely and very touching...Loved each & every word...so so beautiful to the core...Hum alag duniya se zarrooor hai Mr. Kapoor par na jane kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai bhale hum alag duniya se alag alag pasand ke kyun na ho ..lekin aaaj is waqt is pal jab mere zindagi mein aise mod ayi hai...jaha mujhe khud pata nahi ke meri zindagi ki kal ho na ho ... par phir bhi mujhe aisa kyun lagrahi hai ki hum ab alag nahi balki hum ek hai...You told me to believeThose eyes which expresses all in youAnd all truth that fills you in meBut this time you never told me to believe in you !And that's hueHow true! You live for meyou were leaving me for meyour heart cries for meyou die for mebutWhat did I do for youHurting youMisunderstanding younot trusting you ...Pls priya forgive this soul which can never be able to take breathif thy soul doesnt unite with theee!!!- Love you priyaMindblowing dii...You are a wonderful writer...Hats off to you... Thanks again for the update and PM...pls continue soon...will be waiting for the next update...
my god !!what a beautiful piece of ff...every word is so precious...like a gem...to be treasured ...soo very happy to read this...great job sree...thanku for converting it into an ff !!!
But this time you never told me to believe in you !And that's hueHow trueHow very touchingly true..Amazingly done lines...You live for meyou were leaving me for meyour heart cries for meyou die for meBest sums up the essence of Ram's feelings..Love it.. Very nice.. continue..
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