FF:Tu dil ki khusi dil ki pyas tuu updated pg 7 - Page 6

Originally posted by: fanraya

Another rocking update, Awesome Sree...👏

Sree

just awesome di... lovely poetry... so meaningful... just loved this FF...

Originally posted by: salsaly

just awesome di... lovely poetry... so meaningful... just loved this FF...continue asap... thank u so much for the updates & pm's... & i'm sorry for v late reply... just read all parts & commented... :-)

thanks dear no worries of ur late response...next update soon on its way

Originally posted by: ravichitra

beautiful updates dear

hey chitra thanks dear...

Originally posted by: luvbalh

Read in one go .. ur are a very amazing writer . plz do continue soon

thank u so much next update very soon will be up njoy reading...

Originally posted by: maris08

Sree
Superb..
I gaze outside my window


And wish upon a star.


I open up my heart


And let my thoughts drift afar.


A tear rolls down my cheek


As I reminisce the past.


I hardly got to love and live.


I will not let Your life leave me so fast.


And all because someone else


I Made a dumb mistake.


I don't understand why it was


Your life I had to stake.


But now there's no way I will let you leave


No matter how hard I had to try.


Because now you're up in heart


As my angel standing by


Loved these lines.. Absolutely touching and fitting to a Tee.

hahah thanks n love for self dear... u know after our cvs startex to shw ruthless trCks to us some how my heart started reactiing for that ghTiya stuff n so internal emotions expressions started to flowin this form...

wow sree dii...awesomeee update...you are an amazing writer...👏 👏 👏