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musiquelover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak
Beautiful poetry⭐️⭐️⭐️...thanks a lot😳😊...I bow to your writing skills...😃

thanks dear ...by thw way whats ur name... goingahead u will be seeing so many poems like this in the next 2 updates till Ram bails out priya and brings her home ...

enjoy.reading...

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musiquelover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fanraya
Wow sree, so beautiful, I am speechless, amazing poetry, love it👏 I so wish something like this in the show, we all know its not going to happen like this but still. Really lovely gal.. Please do continue..

Thank you priya ... gooing ahead till ram bails out priya i m going to write priyas feeling and rams feeling in the form of poems dear.,,,,

njoy reading

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maris

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sree

first of all thanks for this OS.. i really like it.. Its different and seems almost realistic.. Wish tonight when I watch the show,it will be like as you had described..

Part 2 and 3 are great.. Am a sucker for poems and you have incorporated some in your writings..

what has happened
why have our journies reincarnated
why isn't this any confusing

for it has all happened
and happened, it has

Love these lines.. Destiny is written and whatever happens will happen..

Carry on dear and thanks for the PM..

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Lavanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thnks fr updating.. Superb.. Parichaya pettatil santosham.. Waiting fr the nxt update vry eagerly..

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haribol79

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it...Ram to give Surprise is interesting...continue soon

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musiquelover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maris08
Sree

first of all thanks for this OS.. i really like it.. Its different and seems almost realistic.. Wish tonight when I watch the show,it will be like as you had described..

Part 2 and 3 are great.. Am a sucker for poems and you have incorporated some in your writings..

what has happened
why have our journies reincarnated
why isn't this any confusing

for it has all happened
and happened, it has

Love these lines.. Destiny is written and whatever happens will happen..

Carry on dear and thanks for the PM..

Thanks dear ... I die to write poems ...ha i need a special environment to write poetry but i die ...

thanks that u liked my trial ...of incorporating poems in the form of diary... great dear ... chalo will PM u once i update the next part...

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musiquelover

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Posted: 11 years ago

.Ram could nt control his tears and heavy heart and thinks how lucky he was ... and in the same dairy he suddenly picks up a pen and starts writing
Priya, tu ne jab dekho mujhse yehi kehti ayi ki ... Mr. Kapoor aap ko vishwaas hona chahiye... .apne aap pe ... apni taakat pe ...apni strengths pe apni weakness ko mitane ki viswaas hona chahiye ...karke ..aur tu ne mujhe ek aisa vishwaas dilaya ki jo bhi main maanta hu woh sach ..hai ...par priya us bharose ko us vishwaas ko tu ne ... is baar kyun todne pe gayi ...aur tu ne ...mujhe e vishwaas dilaya ki ... tu mujhese juda hona chahti ho... kyun priya kyun... woh lamha ...woh pal jis mein hum donon ke alawa aur koi nahi ho sakte ... us pal ko bhi tukraya tu ne kyun priya...tu ne pehli baar is tarah kyun kiya ...

You told me to believe
That faeries were true
And their lores ungrue

You told me to believe
That what will rise will fall
It was the gravitational pull

You told me to believe
That my lies were hopes
And all you plans, dopes

You told me to believe
In the skies and the moon
And the miracles within cocoons

You told me to believe
The Creator has it all planned
That it's all in His hands

You told me to believe
Those eyes which expresses all in you
And all truth that fills you in me

But this time you never told me to believe in you !
And that's hue
How true!

Priya kyun kyun why why did u do this priya ... why did u take that pain which u r not suppose to be ...why sacrifice ... Right now at this moment I can feel the every pain that your heart went through I can feel the heaviness of every drop of tear that u hadshed... priya pls come to me ...take me in your arms and give me the solace ...pls priya ...
still he couldnt control himself and continued ...this way...

REFLECTIONS in your eyes shared and expressed tons of love for me in your every Act priya

Reflections speak
as someone had said
They tell the truth
from all those lies which you told
and throw away that bag of broken promises
which you still wantedly hold
they slam the big hard realities at your face
chilly and cold
men of courage stand tall
these are one's which won;t befall
they move on, and with every step they take
they change the things which they have now come to hate
this is the power of reflections
but what can i do?
when i gaze endlessly at your eyes
a smiling desperate looking face stares back
When I recollect endlessly your recent words
a face filled with longing passion but pretension stares back
that face...
which always craved for me
which always smiled at me
which always consoled me
which always supported and stood by me
which always wanted to be attended by me
left me in deep wild thought as to
does it belong to me?
those eyes...
Are they on me?
what do i do?
what do i change?
when i don't even know
who i see...
still the reflection of your love rooted in me
made me think that you are living for me
though your words, acts were killing me
but today alas...when the truth came infront of me
a realization
You live for me
you were leaving me for me
your heart cries for me
you die for me
but
What did I do for you
Hurting you
Misunderstanding you
not trusting you ...
Pls priya forgive this soul which can never be able to take breath
if thy soul doesnt unite with theee!!!

- Love you priya

Wrote this in that diary and just like a sun set his head rested on the diary and his eyes slowly drowning ... and slipped into deep sleep where again he saw priya infront of him ...with a longing passion in her eyes ...and
In his dream he started to speak his heart out with priya

Next Part to be continued...!!!!!

Edited by Sreearabhi - 11 years ago

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musiquelover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: haribol79
loved it...Ram to give Surprise is interesting...continue soon

hey thanks dear... hope u love the next updates tooo

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fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow, I am speechless..👍🏼🤗

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 11 years ago

But this time you never told me to believe in you !

And that's hue

How true

How very touchingly true..

Amazingly done lines...

You live for me

you were leaving me for me

your heart cries for me

you die for me

Best sums up the essence of Ram's feelings..Love it.. Very nice.. continue..

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