OS: Main Bahut Door, Bahut Door Chala - Page 2

Really a great OS... Thanks for the PM..😊
Edited by kaparikh1 - 11 years ago

Punya very nice.. Realistic and down to earth words for Ram..There was no need to redeem Priya.. From the way I read the story , the very presence of Priya in the room and stopping Ram from popping the tablet and saying those words were enough I take it Priya has a change of strategy and will not leave him... Dont write anymore to justify or give reasons for Priya's behaviour.. This is how an OS should be ; leave for the readers to decide what they want..

Originally posted by: karamsekhon

very well written

Originally posted by: SriB

Awesome Punya. No need for apologies because what  y ou have written blends perfectly with the flow and no need for explanations to have Ram and Priya back together. 

Originally posted by: ravichitra

Abey aap logon ka SGP kab aane waala hain? Aap log toh RaYa consummation promo aur episode se bhi zyada wait karwa rahe hain

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Awesome work Punya👏👏...keep it up..thanks for the PM😳

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

Really a great OS... Thanks for the PM..😊

Originally posted by: maris08

Punya very nice.. Realistic and down to earth words for Ram..There was no need to redeem Priya.. From the way I read the story , the very presence of Priya in the room and stopping Ram from popping the tablet and saying those words were enough I take it Priya has a change of strategy and will not leave him... Dont write anymore to justify or give reasons for Priya's behaviour..

This is how an OS should be ; leave for the readers to decide what they want..

Originally posted by: viny_queen

superb yaar

awesome OS... just loved it... nyc ending... really touchy... u have expressed ram's feelings really well... good job... thanks for the pm... sorry for late comment...  :-)