d3 OS: love..again???

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Guyzz this is our frst os...justd wantd 2 share it here..hope u all vl like it ðŸ˜Š ðŸ˜ƒ
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A year had passed after kriya left

He din't noe wat to do.He had been walking to and fro there for hours. He was  still thnking abt wat had happned.He cud not believe wat tanni had said. He sat down and thot about d whole day..

*FLASBCK*

It was d valentines day eve...

One year had passed bt to him nothng had changed.In d mrng, wen he woke up,he found himself on the couch ,eyes and noes red.Yess,he had been cryng whole night,it w s d valentines  day eve.He found blood stains on d couch n dats wen he noticed n remembrd he had hurt his hand.Bt wat cud he do,he cud nt control himself. He was grasped by d memories of one person whom he loved a lot and probably still does.All his frnds knew abt kriya n him.All day they tried to lightn up his mood,they evn arranged 4 a party bt rey din't turn up.

He ws sittng on his couch din't noe wat to do.He tried to erase her memories bt it just din't wrk.Wheneva he thot he ws over hr he found sumthng or d other reminding him of her.It seemed as if his whole wrld revoloved around her. Her smile for wch alone he cud do anything.Her soft and fair skin,her hair and that cute noes vch turned red wen she ws angery;he rememrd an sighed.Wen he frst saw her in dehradun he ws mesmerized by her beauty, those eyes full of innocence and those gentle pink lips. And wen he frst saw her dance,he ws captured y d momnt.Her dancing ws  more like flying for him,it ws one of d bst thngs dat he had seen in his entire life.It was simply perfect.It had alwaz been "LOVE AT FRST SIGHT" for him .He din 't understand dat how jst by a dance a person cud capture such a special place in his heart. When she joined his college,God alone noes how happy he was to see her.He did everything he cud for her.He saved her frm ragging,he helped her wen she landed herself in any problem n evn helped her to make her own dance team cumng frm d rival grp.Weneva she ws tensed abt sumthng or sad,he did everything he cud to mke her smile,after all, how cud he see his princess sad..He promised himself dat he wud nevr let dat cute smile of her's leave her face and he fulfilled it til d tym they wr togehr.He loved her more than dance,more than his lyf,more than anything.When they frst danced together, He felt complete. He had danced with many grls,mostly vth Sharon bt there ws sumthng else whn he danced wid her,the feelng was perfect.Wehn he held her possessively  in his arms ,it felt so right,as if dey wer meant to be together.But sometimes wat you thnk,destiny doesn't''

His heart alwaz startd beatng fastr wen she ws around him.Her 1 smile made his day.When she had acceptd her love fr him, his happiness knew no bounds,he ws in cloud 9.He cud not have been more happier;he remembrd as a tear escapd his eyes.

Rey:Kriya vo sab..sab mazak tha tmhare liye.Mere feelings sirf popular bane ka rasta tha??Was all dat care n affection ..Fake???..he sobbed as he remembered those momnts.

The valentines day eve stl haunts him.The reality was biting his soul nd evn in his dreams her pictures,her laugh haunted him. It so true "It always rains d hardest on d people who deserve sun".

He had loved her genuinely and more than anybody could but sadly destiny did not wantd this.He tried his hardest to throw her out of his life like a bad dream but found himself helpless. Is forettin your first love that difficult???..He often questioned destiny. The silent tears never left him and love..huhh..he din't  believe in it now.

Now just 1 year after she had left d college ,left him, He ws still thnking about her.He din't wanted to go to college.He did no want to face d wrld,his friends..he feared they might see the pain he had hidden frm d wrld vch ws clearly visible in his eyes today.He din't to upset them,he wanted them to be happy,have fun,live ,laugh and love'

But his friends never left him,Swayam,d person who knew him very well literally dragged him to college.He din't wanted his best buddy to remember the past and be sad or hurt himself vch he knew he would.

But this day always seemed to bring something or d other in his life. Last year d love of his life left him and dis year Taani,Swayam's sister confessed her love for him. Destiny just wanted to play vth him;he felt .

He rememberd he was alone in the rehersal hall dancing for  so long dat his foot hurts now. But he din't stop.It was as if he was removing all the pain he had in himself.He was disturbd wen tanni walked in and stood in front of him waitng for him to notice her.He quickly wiped his tears and put on a fake smile.She came up to him and told him sumthng dat shook him up. She confessed her love for him,she said she really loves him and he is her prince charming of her dreams and she went on' .He looked at her with wide eyes,He stood der in silence waitng for her to finish.He was shocked by her words..her words reminded him of sum1..sum1 who had also said these words but at last left him. He could not take it anymore he walked out of the rehearsal hall. He heard her call out his name and wen he din't responded  he heard her breaking down and cry, cursing herself.He wanted to stop her but he knew he would not b able to control himself.He went straight to d fire exit and cried his heart out.

*flashback ends*

He was still sitting there ..shocked.. confused.There was million of questions running in his mind and his mind seemd it wud would burst.

Rey : ?Can sum one take her place in my heart??...can I give sum1 d love vch was reserved only for her'can..Can LOVE happen again..???????


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Awesome updates... Please continues soon 😊
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Originally posted by: Fahiz

Awesome updates... Please continues soon 😊

sorry..this ws just an os..do c our ff ðŸ˜Š
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Awesome ! loved ur OS! 
lets wait and see wat happens wen actually Tanni confesses her luv for Rey !
Nice OS!
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awesome update...pls continue and do pm me...
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wow it was perfect! please cont this!! n pm for updates!!
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Nice Os.
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perfect os with the rite portrayal of how rey feels...awesome work

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Its Mind Blowing...loved it
beautiully written
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Originally posted by: swaron24

Awesome ! loved ur OS! 

lets wait and see wat happens wen actually Tanni confesses her luv for Rey !
Nice OS!
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