lolz geet making fun of her dads way of surprise...:) nd tell u this three r jst too much to handle poor mom;) so da surprise has arrived ..can't wait for da reaction lolz;) update soon nd thanks for da pm..:)
Though strting 2-3 parts were at times a bit boring bt nw i gues story is picking up.
Waitng fr more maaneet togethr n a request,sometimes some scenes seemed to b dragged unnecessary.I cant pinpoint exactly hw bt these scenes get bored though in whole d scene is enjoyable bt i gues it gets extended in order to giv share to each charactr. So can u do sumthing abt it? Sry bt no intentions to criticise u.
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